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for entry "~ Learning Spanish ~" 
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I understand that feeling..but you were trying to learn and understand...that is a big thing...you were still hearing The Word.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed this poem. I love the sunshine too but it does get hot here in Texas!
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Review of Let's Fly Away  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sometimes I wish I could fly away. Good poem.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like your poem but life began with God. Genesis tells us how.

Keep writing
Dianne
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Review of Safety Concerns  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A very good story, easy to read and follow.

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Dianne
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Review of Shine On, America  
Rated: E | (5.0)
America has a lot of problems, but we will eventually work them out.

Thank you for the kind words of your poem. Very well written and appreciated.

I hope your sister enjoys her trip to New York.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of For All of Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A thought-provoking poem. It made me think and I think it's right.

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Dianne
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Review of Slide to Oblivion  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A story I believe could actually come true. I enjoyed this glimpse into our possible future. I am glad to see that there is some hope for civilization.

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Dianne
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This is a good story even if I didn't get some of the words. I enjoyed reading it. I liked his climbing the face of the mountain, that is difficult and something I would never do.

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Dianne
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Review of Unanchored.  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful story about a beloved pet. I have lost several myself so I know how it feels.

I enjoyed your writing and would encourage you to continue.

Dianne
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Review of Hot and Spicy!  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked this story. I could not have eaten the peppers!
Hope you won!

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
We need new younger people to run. I dont trust either of them.
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for entry "~ Sky Diving ~" 
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I really like this same story 3 different views!
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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can just picture this! It's not hard to be aggravated with humans. Wish I had a talking gold fish.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good! Roasted human very good.

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Dianne
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Review of The Granson Place  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very good! I enjoyed this story reminded me of a tale when I was a kid about a haunted house supposedly true.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Keep writing and you will make it.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a good story. I enjoyed reading it. Not quite the ending I was expecting but good.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem, very good. Mine is Heaven.

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Dianne
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Review of The Coffee Wars  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this short story! A truly happy family.
Very well done.

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Dianne
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Review of A Golf Hazard  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I knew there was a reason I didn't like golf! lol, I enjoyed this poem, made me smile.

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Dianne
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Review of Survival  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this story. It's funny and made me laugh.

Keep writing,
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Review of Banana Bread  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this poem. It made me laugh out loud and that is hard to do these days!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh, I like this one, the picture especially! Makes me want to know how it got there and why it was just left. Your poem is really great. I enjoyed it very much.
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Review of Hidden Trail  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you for requesting me to review your short story! And thank you for reading my Pickle Kids stories.

I enjoyed this story! I could see Craig and all the scouts camping. My son was a scout too, and went all the way to Eagle. So I understand the other kids picking on the kid they saw as a "know it all".

Some of the sentences are a little long and maybe should be shortened. I use a lot of dialog in my stories between the characters. I was always taught that a different paragraph was necessary for different speakers. I am 74 and have not been in school in a long time, so this could have changed.

I did not find any misspelled words or bad grammar. I am not a grammar expert. I have had a lot of reviews that have corrected my grammar! I have had very helpful reviews on my writing.

When I am writing my stories, the kids take over and I write what they say. I hear them in my head and go where they lead.

I enjoyed this story and I plan to visit your port and read more of your writing. I hope you will find this review helpful. If you have any further questions or if I can help you in any way just email me.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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