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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Drake,

Glad you decided to join us. I've been here for some time, and I really like it.
You will get out of it what you decide to invest in it. Wish you well and good luck.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Mabel And The Mob  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like this story. I'm glad Mable won.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Memoirs  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good story. I never thought about writing from a fish point of view. I think you did a good job with the dialogue too.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Free at Last  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your poem. I used to dream of floating and flying. I loved the feeling.

Keep writing
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Review of My Father  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A sweet memory of your father. Kindness is so eady to do and so under rated. Be kind.
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Review of Hourglass sands  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A good poem. Sometimes i feel like that. Getting oldisnt for bn the faint hearted! lol
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Review of SKINNY DIPPIN'  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story! I think you wrote it well. I would like to read more of your childhood memories.
Keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this story!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very good story! It is a bit sad but vampire or human the end is coming and it will be fiery.
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Review of HE Was There  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful poem and so true.

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Dianne
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Review of The Baseball Cap  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a funny poem and I did enjoy reading it. The ending made me laugh. I did find it a little violent but I think its a good poem.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story. I think it was well written and I can't see any corrections needed.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Spacewalk  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story. I am sorry he died but that does happen in space. I always wanted to go into space, but I am too old now.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a very good story and makes me miss my sister more than I usually do! She lives in another small town and we don't get to see each other that much!
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Review of Evermore  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I liked this story. What good is immortality if you keep dying a very painful death over and over! Does he ever get out of that room?
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem so much. It reminds me of my son when he was little. He only bit someone once - his uncle (Dad's brother). He was active but a good child.
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Review of Ever-so  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good story! I think I would like talking dogs. My little Sweety almost can.
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Review of Magic Pie  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a great story! I love the girls and how they are learning. I like Sara's parents firm but gentle and loving. More stories about the girls would be fun to read.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem. I do not know poetry so I do not try to critique it. It reminds me of storms before during and after.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of UNMASKED  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good! Did not realize things were not the way they seemed until the very end! I like stories like that and I'm glad the mice were safe.

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Dianne
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Review of Calico Jack  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a good story. Are you going to write more about them? What will their adventures be? I like the story and would like to read more.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A good poem but very sad.
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Review of Last Gasp  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Sounds a little like the second coming of Christ. People have been warned for centuries and no one listens.
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Review of Walking Alone  
Rated: E | (5.0)
makes me afraid to walk at night, but then I don't walk at night!
Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
He is coming soon. I like your poem.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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