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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good poem and so very true. God created us, loved us, and died for us!

God Bless and keep writing
Dianne
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Review of Saturday Morning  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it. That is so like kids. I thought the judge handled it quite well.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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for entry "Ode to a Phone" 
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
So sorry your phone died! Just reminded me to take care of my granddaughter's phone, hers died too!

Nice poem, I like it.
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Review of IDEAS  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a really great poem! It is also true to how ideas can come. Made me smile and think.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was a strange and different story! I enjoyed it and was waiting to see what was going to happen next. I always felt there was a fat person inside me waiting to get out....think I'll keep her thin!

Good story, and keep writing.
Dianne
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Review of Too late  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Complete story for 75 words. Why did she wait so long to go? I asked myself that same question when we went to see my dying sister n law.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Lifeless  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem makes you feel the writer's sorrow and depression. I could see the beach and the waves in my mind and feel the pain of depression.

Congratulations on the win with this poem.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is interesting and I enjoyed reading it. Now I want to know more. Is there more? I like Kenna, she is strong and sure of herself.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Thank you. I really like them. How can i get the Beatles merit badge??
Dianne
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Review of Dreamer  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's good to keep our dreams alive. I like this poem.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem. I feel the same sometimes and I would love to fly like the birds!

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Lucian Ravor  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sounds like a teenager, but could make a strong character.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your story. It is a little sad, but kids grow up. It reminds me of when mine left home. It was bittersweet.
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Review of The Gift  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great poem! It brings a tear to my eye and warms my heart. Thank you for sharing.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this poem, it tells of God's love and why He died for us. I like reading poetry that I understand.
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Review of The End  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a good story. I like the way you wrote it. The ending is different and definitely on the creepy side. I like the end of the world stories. I watch a lot of those on TV.

I wish you well here on WDC; it's a good place to be.

Dianne
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Review of Pen and Ink  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I've only been texting 6 or so years now. I still use good grammar (I hope). I don't understand most of the abbreviation used. I do use emojis if I find one that goes with my text.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Can't wait for the rest!!
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I enjoyed this very much, it is moving and I agree with you. I am so glad Jesus loved us enough to die for us! Where would we be without Him?

Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Rainbow Sparklers  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This sounds like a very interesting creature. I thought it sounded like a fire-fly, to begin with, but this one is more interesting.

Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Review of My Dream Job  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It sounds like being a travel writer would be a lot of fun!

Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Patterns  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was funny and I enjoyed it.
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Review of Caveat Emptor  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought this was really good. Enjoyed reading it.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Visitors  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like this story and I think you wrote it well. I like how the Crystals tried to help and it sad the help was not accepted.

Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Little Chubby  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a good story if a little sad. Poor Little Chubby, I feel sorry for him. I have an artificial tree, it doesn't die but will wear out in time.

Good Work Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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