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Review of Dear Me  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I just read your Dear Me letter for 2014. Very good important goals. I hope you made them.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think you did a very good job on the poem. I love unicorns, and I like this poem. I hope you win whatever contest you enter it in.
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Review of WDC & HALLOWEEN  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very good poem. I don't know how to review poetry because I don't understand all the mechanics of writing poetry. However, I know what I like, and I like this one. Hope you win the contest.

Dianne
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Review of When I Write  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very good poem. Glad you won!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very sweet. Ive lost touch with a soldier i once wrote to as a teenager. His bame was Joe.
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Review of Sea Runner  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
These creatures might be of some help in today's world. I like this creature, and I like the way you described them and their abilities.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of The Fire  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am glad he was able to save the dog. Sorry, he did not save himself. Fire is a dangerous thing. My husband and son were both firefighters. Fire is tragic. Glad his father was there to see him home.

I think you wrote a good story, and I enjoyed reading it.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the beginning. Are you going to be giving more info about these characters? Do you have the next chapters ready? I would like to read more of this story.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of I REMEMBER WHEN  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very sweet and touching poem to your Daddy! I loved it. I could feel the love springing from his little girl and the love returned by your Dad.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was great! Having a money tree would create quite a problem. You would have to guard it day and night!

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this poem. We all like to hide sometimes. It takes special people to bring it out in us. I am glad you started writing as I like to read what you write.
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Review of Whose Magic?  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I just cleared the rating I last gave this story. You added more, and it is a good story. I enjoyed it very much. I love magic and magicians. Spacing between paragraphs will make it easier to read. Be sure to check your punctuation. I am bad about that! I use Grammarly to help with editing.

Good luck, and Keep writing,
Dianne
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Love this story. Written very well, I see no need for improvement.

Dianne
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good story. I like the 'take me to your leader' part. Though I'm not sure we have one.
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Review of Pure White  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem. I think you wrote it well.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a great story. I really enjoyed it and am so glad it ended the way it did!

Glad you won the contest.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of The Gift  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A good story. I don't know that I would want that ability. Well written.

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Dianne
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Review of Princess  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a well-written poem. I don't write much poetry, but I do like to read it. If this is real life, I am so sorry. You will be ok.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Pieces of Me  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I admire those who can write poetry so well. I felt the pain all thru the poem.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Whose Magic?  
Rated: E | (3.0)
I enjoyed this, but it doesn't feel finished. It needs to be proofread and correct the spelling and spacing errors. I would like to read it completed, sounds like it could be a really good story.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I think you wrote this well. I understand the self-doubt, I think it will always be there, but we can't let it be first. We have to believe in ourselves, believe that we are good and our writing is good.

Good luck, and keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good poem, but don't trust the devil. He lies.
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Review of Higher Ground  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
What a good story! I enjoyed it. So glad Beth decided to help Jaylynn and Lucy. Good thing the driver stopped to help her.
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Review of Captive Audience  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a great poem! I hope you win.

Dianne
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh, I loved this story! I am going to try my hand at it too. Not sure what yet, though.

Good Luck,
Keep Writing
Dianne
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