This is a sad but good story. I would imagine many people can relate to it. I'm glad you won first place, the story deserved it. I did not see anything that needed correcting.
This is a great poem. I don't critically review poetry, because I don't write it and don't know the forms for poetry. I always just say I like the poem and how it makes me feel. I understand the feeling of the poem. Reminds me of trying to write my short stories. Sometimes it just does not come.
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Dianne
A sad story, yet not sad. I enjoyed it very much. Kids can be extremely cruel. It is sad that it ended that way for Milton, but now he is whole and happy. I am sorry his mother will be the one to suffer now. Maybe she will be able to do something about bullying at the school.
I like this story and the way it ended - a knight in shining armor. I hope they made it out safe and sound and had a happy life. I did not find any issues with grammar or anything that needed changing. I followed the story through and really enjoyed it.
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