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2,700 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of Fur in Space  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Interesting story to explain how the Manimal team fought one of its first battles to protect the planet from the invading bettas. Very interesting. I am looking forward to reading the rest of the Saga.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLL!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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677
Review of Alien Wars  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Interesting story about a few young bird-like Avas who have to find a way to free their home planet after it has been invaded. A very interesting story about some very important people in the future Manamal stories in the Manamal Saga.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I enjoyed reading this.

HOWLLLLL!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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678
Review of Lightning Bovine  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a campfire about one of the important charactors in the Manamal Saga writen by Twiga. Here you will find out about how one Bill Brandy, aka the Minotaur, finds out about his mother, as well as his future. Highly exciting Campfire.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I am proud to have been a part of this campfire.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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679
Review of WaterFALL  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Well, an interesting story about a young girl finding the truth about her biological father and how he doesn't know that she exists.

Now, I do have some advice, seperate your diologe from your action, and give them their own paragraphs. Another thing is to check out your capitalization. Using Word can help with that. Other than that, good story.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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680
Review of Faint Memory  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting poem about the beauty of the world's red roses, and how one is used to remember a moment in time for a person. A very nice poem to read today.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night after reading an interesting poem.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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681
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Interesting reaction about shrine building after someone's death, especially at the site of the person's death. Deffinatly one of many difficult topics to write about for sure.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night after reading an interesting artical.

HOWLLLL!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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682
Review of The Evergreen  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A nice little poem to read about how the merical of tree's wonderous beauty is very wonderful, until it is cut down, and then for a seed to start growing. Very nice to see.

My favorite part is the use of the colors.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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683
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very nice little poem here about a father trying to explain to his daughter what love truely means. Very nice to read tonight.

Favorite Part: "Love is something I feel right now."

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLL!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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684
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a campfire that takes place at around Holloween time, one that I'm part of. It's about a former super villian, who must find a way to protect his family from a very evil force.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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685
Review of Affection  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is an interesting story about a man who is acused of a crime he did not do. He talks about his love for a woman, and what happened between them, and her father, as well as a lady-friend. Interesting ending as well, as if he was dragged away at that moment.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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686
Review of The Watercourse  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a story about a young boy and his sister near a black colored river that is full of bodies. When they try to leave the edge, they, and an old woman, are chased by savage dogs, and the only thing between them and safty is the black colored river. Very intence at times.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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687
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A rather interesting story about two kids, who heard a story about a woman who murdered her children and killed herself, and they decide to go and check out the house where it took place. A rather spooky read indeed.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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688
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A nice little poem about pixies dancing near a medow stream. A nice little ryming scheme to follow as well. Very nice to read today.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon after reading nice little poems such as this.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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689
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A nice little poem about what happens after "Dracula". It seems to be from Dracula's point of view in a sense that it seems to be about him.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night after reading a good poem about a good story.

HOWLLLLL!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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690
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
HAHAHA. Now this is why people should really read the script before they do a play. A very funny rendition of someone doing a play about Romeo and Juliet, doing the clasic "Oh Romeo, Where Art Thou?" sceen. Very funny to read.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLL!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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691
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I must say, a very short, and funny, little poem about a man remembering his first girlfriend, and remarking how eternity is not as long as to is cracked up to be. Very funny indeed.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night after reading a nice poem.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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692
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This here is a place where one can ask for images, banners, and other things to be made.

Now, while I may not order anything anytime soon, I wish this place the best of luck and I hope that it is always busy.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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693
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This here is a contest in which people can win a prize. Almost anything could be entered in it, which I like, which is why I've posted an entry. Now, while I may not win, I wish everyone else the best of luck in it.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This ius a place where people can enter their poetry in a contest, and potentially win some prizes, which could include Awardicons, Merit Badges, GPs or something else.

Now, seeing as how I'm no good when it comes to poetry, though I do have some, I doubt I'll enter this contest anytime soon, though I wish those who do the best of luck.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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695
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This here is a contest that those under the age of eighteen can enter and compete with other writes for prizes, which could include Awardicons, Merit Badges, GPs, and other such things.

Now, since I am over twenty, I can't enter this contest. However, I wish those who do the best of luck.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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696
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, I have to say, this is a very interesting story about a vampire who wants to be a cowboy. Deffinatly an interesting read, that's for sure.

Of course, one question I have is, is this a world where humans live alongside of monsters, and know about them, and such, or are they ignorant of the other races for the most part?

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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697
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This here is a place where people can request costomized Merit Badges and such. Basically, if the one they are looking for isn't in the shop, they can come here and ask for one that fits the person that they want to give it to.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLL!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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698
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
You have the Union Army marching towards the Confederate units that are stationed near Brice's Crossroads, where the two lovers are staying near. I have to say, something will happen very soon.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I am enjoying this story.

HOWLLLLL!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Interesting segment. You have the woman Union soldier going about her business, like any other Union soldier. You have her unit, as well as that of several others, including the colored units, getting ready to go after Forrest and his men.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and this story is starting to get very intersting.

HOWLLLLL!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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Review of Dream Wings  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A nice poem about how one can learn from failure, and use it to help on sucessed in their dreams, so that they can be succesful in life.

Now, I do have a suggestion, and that would be to break it up into segments, that are related to each other. That way it will be read easier.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLL!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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