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2,920 Public Reviews Given
3,082 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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801
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story in line with the story of Frankenstine, in which a man takes the pieces of several bodies and tries to create life. Very interesting.

Characters
The scientest and his creation are well discribed, as are their movements and actions.

Plot
A man tries to create life, and ends up in trouble with his creation.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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802
802
Review of Tales of Terror  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
An interesting contest. Create a horror story using the prompts and following the rules, and one could win some fantastic prizes, which include Gift Points, Awardicons, Merit Badges, and a few other things. Very interesting.

Origionality
There are many contests, but those that specialize in a particular genera are always great.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Best Wishes for your contest. May you have plenty of enteries.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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803
Review of Look Away  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Deffenatly a spooky story about a woman who suffers from a childhood incident that has stuck with her ever since then. A very interesting read.

Characters
The woman is well discribed, and most people could, in one way or another, relate to the fear that she has.

Plot
Due to a childhood incident, a woman is afraid of something, and resolves to find a way to deal with it.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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804
804
Review of The God Factory  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting little story about a man in his office as he deals with a member of the board of directors for his company. Interesting piece.

Characters
The man who is talking on the phone is interesting, but I'd like to know more about this "Fred" he is talking to.

Plot
A man is on the phone talking to a member of the board of directers for a company that deals in strange people.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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805
805
Review of Dilation  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting story. A young man uses a time machine to go back in time to see the university that he goes to as it was being constructed and discovers something amazing.

Characters
The characters are well discribed, and are very interesting, especially the true founder of the university.

Plot
A man goes back in time to see his university as it was being constructed and discovers something amazing.

Spelling and Grammar
I do see a few grammar errors, but nothing too serious.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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806
806
Review of A chat with Litsa  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting story about a man who has an interview with a young girl about what it is she does for a living, and what she is like as well.

Characters
The young girl is well discribed, from her unkempt hair to her oversized clothing. The Interviewer however isn't to well discribed. I want to know more about him.

Plot
There doesn't seem to be any real plot, beyond the interview. Perhaps a sequal is in order.

Spelling and grammar
I see a few grammarical/spelling errors towards the begining, but nothing major.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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807
807
Review of Mirror, Mirror  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story about a woman who has to deal with an abusive husband and finds out about how to make her life better with magic. I hope to see a sequal of it. *Bigsmile*

Characters
The three main people, the woman, her husband, and the old witch, are discribed quite well.

Plot
A woman tries to find a better way of doing things with magic.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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808
808
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
A nice contest for people to enter both for a chance to show off one's work and to have a chance to win some very nice prizes, which include and Awardicon and Gift Points.

Originality
There are many contests, but anything that challenges one to write is great.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Best Wishes for your contest. May you have many enteries

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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809
809
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Now this is a highly funny story. A guy goes to a beach party and goes for a swim when something gets ahold of him and drags him out to sea. A very funny story and I'm having trouble keeping myself from laughing.

Characters
The people are nicelly discribed, and very discriptive.

Plot
A young man finds himself in some trouble when he decides to go swimming.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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810
810
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting story about how a woman and her family deals with a hurricane, and manage to get through the whole ordel and everything that came with it, including the destruction of their house.

Characters
The woman is deffinatly someone relatable to almost anyone who has gone through really bad storms, especially those that cause damage.

Plot
A woman and her family fight to protect their belongings from the ravages of a powerful hurricane. Nicely writen.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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811
811
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well it seems that the Manimal Sagas has yet another mission to go on when a plot to kill one of their friends is told to them. Also so of them meet up with old friends and new companions.

Characters
Very interesting, and highly discriptive in what they do.

Plot
The team learnd of an assasination attempt on their friends and must find a way to deal with the trouble.

Spelling and Grammer
Some minor errors, but none too serious.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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812
812
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An intereserting poll for those who like to write about dominance and submisive stuff, especially where it concerns the use of capitals for use in names and the word "I" for first person stories.

Origionality
Well I can say that I haven't seen a Poll like this on the site.

Spelling and Grammer
I can see no spelling or "grammer" mistakes, except that of the names. *Bigsmile**Laugh*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!!!

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813
813
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
It's not easy being both a mother and a writer, especially when your children are being very agrivating.

Characters
You have a mother who is trying to do some work while at home, and her two children are causing her some serious problems.

Plot
It's a tough job being a parent. Very humerous though.

Spelling and Grammer
No spelling or grammer mistakes that I can see.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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814
814
Review of Canned  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Oh this is a funny story about a guy who had a bad day while he was at work. It took me a while to stop laughing so that I could do this review.

Characters
You have a young man who is just trying to do his job, but he ends up colliding with an old woman who just freaks out.

Plot
Guy has a bad day on the job. Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammer
I don't see any problems.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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815
815
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A very funny letter to a former boss from an ex-employiee. I just have to sit back and laugh as I read this.

Character
You seem to have a boss who is fed up with his employee, who is supposed to have done various infractions and potentially illeagle things.

Plot
Guy sends a letter to his boss explaining the things that he did. Very nice. *Bigsmile*

Spelling and Grammer
No problems that I can see.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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816
816
Review of Dry Food For Dogs  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
An interesting little comparioson between an office job and a dog pound and how they are related to in a sence.

Chatacters
No real characters except for the metionings of various dogs and what they are like.

Plot
No real plot to speak of except for comparisons.

Spelling and Grammer
No problems to be spotted.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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817
817
Review of Granny Fields  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An elderly woman has a talk with the police after she gets involved in the death of a young man. Nice story.

Characters
Wonderful discription of the old woman and what she says happened.

Plot
A woman has to talk to the police after someone attempts to rob her house.

Spelling and Grammer
No spelling errors but you seem to mention that the young man snuck up on the old woman twice.

Suggestions
Have some space between paragraphs and upping the rating from E to at least 13+ due to content.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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818
818
Review of A Wasted Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting story about an old cop close to retierment having to go on one last case and face some old enimies of his. An interesting read.

Characters
Very descriptive looks as to how the cop and his partner, and the gang members appear, and how they talk and so forth.

Spelling and Grammer
None that I can see, though I did have a bit of trouble keeping the names straight. Perhaps using just first names or just last names might be in order.

Plot
An old cop goes on one last case and faces old enimies. Very interesting ending.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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819
Review of The Watcher  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story about a man known as a Watcher, and how he is always watching over the people in a city, never interfering in anything, yet watching for an unknown enemy. Interesting.

Characters
Interesting way of depicting the man and what he does on a daily basis.

Spelling and grammer
No problems spotted.

Plot
A man watches a city for signs of danger and finds some troubling signs. Nicely done.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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820
820
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story. A young woman who is engaged to be married is staying in a lakeside house wondering about what to do. Also, the lake has several legends about people vanishing.

Characters
Nice discriptions of the woman and the man she talks to.

Spelling and Grammer
No problems to be seen.

Plot
A woman talks to a man about her wedding problems and he shares a late supper with her, and tells her what's happened. Very interesting ending, one that is begging for a sequal.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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821
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A very funny and satarical what-if story about what could happen if the use of micro-chips is implimented on a wide scale and all of the potential consequences that could arise. Very funny.

Characters
No characters mentioned, except as "we/ they/ you/ I".

Spelling and Grammer
No problems to be found.

Plot
No real plot, but plenty of nice "What-If" senarios.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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822
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
An interesting story about a woman who finds within her the strength to take herself, and her children, out of a bad situation, and an abusive relationship. Very interesting.

Characters
Nice discriptions of Shyla, Jeev, Priya and Nobi, and how they treat each other.

Spelling and Grammer
I see no errors in this piece.

Plot
A woman finds a way to get away from a bad relationship. Nicely done.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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823
Review of Slider Exchange  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A nice little activity to get involved in. Dealing with the new feature known as "Sliders" this is a place where people can come and show off their "artwork"/"Magnetic poetry" to other people and comment on the slides that other people have made. A very nice looking activity.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!

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824
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Now here is a nice raffle for people to take part in. Sixty percent of the Gift Points raised go towards helping out several groups that help out around the site. The rest of the Gift Points, as well as some other prizes, go to holders of the tickets. Events like this are always fun to participate in. *Bigsmile*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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825
825
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
A nice short story about a young woman's morning activities just before heading to school.

Characters
Nice discription of the young woman and what she does.

Spelling and Grammer
No problems to be found.

Plot
Other than what a young woman does in the morning, I don't see any real plot. Perhaps a sequal might be useful.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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