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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of Untitled Western  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Here is the start of a good Western series. A man is about to meet his end by some peopl he knows, yet he is trying to escape. Very good.

I have found a few problems, like "knife goes through the knife" should be "knife goes through the rope" Also, instead of "E" the rating should be, at least, a 13+ level, as there are referances to tobaca use as well as violence, just to be on the safe side.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I hope that this helps you out.

HOWLLL!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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752
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This item tells people about the different points of view that one can use when writing about their charachtors. Personally, I tend to use a third person point of view, and depending on which person that I'm writing the segment from, I can change from one person to another.

In any case, I hope that people come to check this item out.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I enjoy writing stories.

HOWLLLLL!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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753
Review of The Snow Globe  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, I must say, a very interesting story you have here. Two guys get into a car wreak, and are taken to a hospital. The doctors worry that they won't make it. The one doctor makes the comment that it reminds him of a dream, one he hopes comes true. Then, there is a flashback, in which one of the men shakes a snow globe, and the next day, when the doctor checks on the patiants, they are gone, as if someone when back in time and prevented the whole thing from happening.

I must say, well done. The problems I found had to do with a missing " where you have "call. Summoning" and perhaps the commas and periods for the diolog. But, other than that, good story.

This is the BIG BADWOLF and I enjoy a good story.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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754
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.0)
The writer seems to have writen about a painful event, the lose of a loved one, and what happened after that.

Now, I'm no poet, but one thing that might help you would be if you broke this up into little segments.

Also, putting this into the proper genras, like personal, emotional, and such, could help boost the number of rates and reviews you have.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I hope that I have helped you out.

HOWLLLLL!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
755
755
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is by a writer, who wrote about a very painful subject, the lose of his wife. It is a subject that few dare to write about, as there are memmeries beyond memmories, as well as feelings and emotions, when it comes to something like this.

Now, normally this would be the part where I howled, and put up my signiture, a howling werewolf, but, out of respect for this man, and his wife, I'm not going to put them up.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I respect your courage to write about what you saw.
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756
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a place where one can find out how to promote one's public protfolio. By doing so, it causes more people to check out the site and eventually those people may become members themselves. I myself remember how I found the site, but that's not for here.

Anyways, I hope that many people come and join the community.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I enjoy my time on writing.com.
757
757
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This here is Spidey's Guest Book. Basically, if you check out her portfolio, and rate and review an item or two, come here and tell her Hi.

Well, I best be going, as I have to check out a few things on my portfolio.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I enjoy Writing.Com.

HOWLLLL!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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758
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a poll that asks writers about the letters on their keyboards for their computers. Basically, the poll is asking how worn are the letters on the keys for the keyboard that one has.

So, if you want to tell someone how faded the letters on your keyboard are, this is the poll for you.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and my keyboard is just fine.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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759
Review of Rate Yourself!  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a poll where writers can come and rate themselves. Personally, I think that I'm a 4 star writer, as I have many great ideas for my stories, but I know that I can imptove my abilities.

So, should anyone wish to rate themselves, come and check this poll out.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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760
Review of Endgame  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Here is a very good story. A man visits one of his rivles, who is in a prision cell, so that he can help them, so that they can bring down someone who is an even bigger enemy to both of them. Very inteesting story. Personally, I'd like to see a sequal to this.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I enjoy a good story.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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761
Review of A Forest Walk  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
You have a nice little poem about someone on a nature walk. Reminds me of when I go out on walks along the creek near my place, when it isn't freezing cold out.

Of course, that doesn't mean that you can't take a nature walk in one's own head.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I enjoy having a nice walk.

HOWLLL!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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762
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a very good story here. It is about a man who was experimented upon and has the genes of an animal in him.

If there is one problem with it, it is the fact that it is very long. If I had writen it, I'd of broken it up into two or three parts.

But over all, it is well done.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I love a good story.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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763
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This here is a place for those who like to write about anthros, monsters, aliens, and such, can meet up and talk about their charactors with other like-minded people. I myself helped found the group that is behind this forum. So, come on in guys.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and this is what I have to say to all of you guys out there.

HHHHHHOOOOOWWWWWWLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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764
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
This story tells about a young boy who knitted a blanket for the Christmas Nativity sceen in his town. Everyone, except his mother, subtily say that it is a piece of trash, as it is a mismash of different colored yarns, and say that it should be put someplace "Special" ie into the trash. The boy's mother, angry by the comments that the others are saying about her son's truelly caring handiwork, steals the blanket that had been meant for the sceen, and replaces it with her son's. That night, while everyone is at the sceen, the pastor sees this, and longs to get rid of it, but instead sees the boy's mother, probably with a smile on her face. Then, he sees the statue of Mary come to life, and caressed the blanket, as if it, and the baby Jesus, are the most precious things in the whole world.

Needless to say, this is about how sometimes the most "dreadful-looking" thing, is actually the truely best of things.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I enjoyed this story.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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765
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Interesting as to how charactors seem to make the story. I myself happen to really go into depth with my charactors, so I probably subscribe to this philosophy in a sence.

Anyways, anyone who is interested in creating a charactor for a story should check this out, as you will find information on how to bring them to life in a sence.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I enjoy writing.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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766
Review of Oldwarrior today  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I must say, if Oldwarrior calls his mugshot ugly, that's his opinion. *Laugh*

I, however, see a man who has seen a lot of things, some of them good, some of them bad, and some of them, well, horrid to say the least.

I will say this though, he is one man that anyone could be proud to calla friend.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I concider Oldwarrior to be one of my friends on the site.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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767
Review of Oldwarrior  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This here is a picture of Oldwarrior when he retired from the military after his many years of service. If you look carefully, you can see how his experiance has aged him beyond his years, much like with any soldier, who can finally put down his rifle, and pick up the plowshere again.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I salute you Oldwarrior.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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768
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This item is something of a Question and Answer guide for those who like to rate/review items. Basically, if one has a question about rating and reviewing, they should come here to see if they are having a similar problem with one of the many questions in this item. and they might find a solution that works for them.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I enjoy rating and reviewing.

HOWLLLLL!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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769
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This item tells reviewers about things that Should and Should not, be in a review, especially a public review. So, for those of you who enjoy reviewing, or would like some help with your reviewing, check this piece out, as it will give you plenty of help.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I enjoy rating and reviewing people.

HOwLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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770
Review of Non-Humans R Us  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a group that I created with the help of my good friend. Basically, all of you anthros, monster, aliens, talking animals, and whatnot out there, come on in and visit. (Note, humans are allowed to come in, provided that they are in the company of a non-human at all times. *Laugh*.)

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I'm Proud to have found this group for those who like to write about anthros, monsters, aliens, and such.

My Signiture, a gift from a friend. HMMM might need to get this changed a bit.......... Na.

(Oh, I better pay MY dues, which is JUST 10 GPs, and that's not a typo guys.)
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771
Review of My World  
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is Nicki's web page, where she displays several lists, such as who her friends are, the items she's made, the groups she's part of and so forth. It also shows a window into her life as well.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.

PS. Sorry for any trouble that I caused.
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772
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poll asks people if they like pie or cake better.

I only have one question; Where's my apple pie and chocolete Cake?

(Here you go sir.)

(Thank you)

(Ow, I didn't think that I could finish both of them. Ow.)

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I LOVE pie AND cake. YUM!!!!!!!!!!

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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773
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting poll. It asks women if they would still date a guy if they found out that he was a cross-dresser.

Personally, as a guy, I wouldn't be caught dead wearing a dress. Then again, I've never had a girl who would of found out if I was, which I'm not.

Of course, if I had a girlfriend, and I wanted to marry her, but the only way she'd let me marry her was to wear the gown and everything that comes with it, well, I might think about it, especially if I truelly loved her. (nervous chuckle)

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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774
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting poll here. It asks people as to which big cat is the coolest in the animal kingdom. Personallly, I'd vote for all of them, but there be only a few options, and that isn't one of them.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Meowwwww!!!!!!) (Okay, who let the cat out of the bag?) *Laugh*

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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775
Review of Stray Seasons  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You have a very interesting poem here. It seems to be from the point of view of a stray dog or cat, one who was taken to the pound/pet shelter, and no one has addopted it yet.

Well, I must say, very good. In fact, perhaps you should see a group called the 4-A Society, as they tend to deal with animals and animal-related stuff on the site.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Signiture, a gift from a friend.
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