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Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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826
826
Review of A day in the Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting little story about the daily life of a man on another planet at some point in the far future.

Characters
Nice personal discription of the man's behavior, but I'd like to know what he looks like becouse it is mentioned that he might be the last of his race.

Spelling and Grammer
No problems that I can see.

Plot
Other then what this person normally does, I see no plot. Perhaps a sequal is in order.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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827
827
Review of Borrowed Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A very interesting story about four hunting buddies who meet up every year to talk about what had happened to them when they were younger and had been involved in a hunting accident.

Characters
Truely unique and indivdual personalities from all of them.

Mistakes
None that I can really see.

Plot
An interesting introduction of the four at the campfire, and a nice ending.

A very interesting story.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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828
828
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A very interesting poem about the Phoenix, about how it is the everlasting avitar of the world, and what it does to make sure that it contenues to exist, by gathering up special materials so that the process can contenue. Wonderful use of colors.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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829
829
Review of The Bug  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story you have here. You have some sort of bug biting people and injecting something into them. The people then start to have some very serious problems and eventually start to biting others themselves. Very interesting. I hope to see more of it.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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830
830
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting story. After being hospitalized due to a neck injury, a woman searches for a set of pictures that she'd taken as a gift for her mother and sister, because she believes that they might help her with her recovery, but she is unable to locate them. Then, out of the blue, she gets a phone call aboput them. Very nice.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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831
831
Review of The Quills  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
An interesting contest. Nominate a friend's item, or items, in the chance that your friend will win some very nice prizes, which include Merit Badges, awardicons, and Gift Points. A very interesting idea.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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832
832
Review of Daeva  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story. You have a man who managed to escape from a massacur heading towards his home planet. When he gets there he sees a woman acting strangely. When he finds out why, he is shocked, because it is happening again. I hope to se a sequal of this story, as I want to know what's going to happen.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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833
833
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting Chapter segment. You have two men out in the woods, cutting down trees and taking them home. The end up meeting with a stranger, who gives them an eirry feeling. Then when they get home, they end up in a fight for their lives. An interesting start.

A few suggestions, have some space between your paragraphs, as that will make reading easier. Also, use Word to check for basic Spelling and Grammer problems.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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834
834
Review of WINTER YEARS  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
A nice short little poem about a woman in her later years and close to death. Her mind seems to wonder through her past, thinking about what has happened, and what could of happened. Very nice.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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835
835
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
An exciting intro to what looks to be a promising story. You have a young man fighting in a gladatorial-type of arena using magic. However, his wife, who is watching the battle, goes into labor. He tries to forfite the match, but certain rules must be followed. He manages to get to where is wife is being cared for, but there is some very tragic news. Very interesting.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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836
836
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A very interesting rant about baseball, and whether or not players who did drugs in the past should or shouldn't be allowed to be in the Hall Of Fame, as well as what to do with them. An interesting read.

Of course, I do have a suggestion, bump the rating up a bit, from E to like 13+, as you are talking about the issue of drugs in sports.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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837
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
An interesting rant about multi-term politicians, and how one person thinks that they are ruining the whole country. A very interesting read.

However, I have a few suggestions to offer. One is to check on your spelling a bit. I noticed that you misspelled people in one of the sentances. Using Word might help out with that. Another thing would be to up the rating of this item from E to 13+, for some mild content. Other than that, very good.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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838
838
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting poem about the aches and pains that one feels throughout the day. The person wonders why it is that they suffer these things, day in, and day out. He/she wonders what plan does GOD have for them. Very interesting, as well as heartfelt to those who have their own aches and pains.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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839
Review of Goodbye George  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A nice little tribute for your friend here. A very nice way as to how you and your cricket teem will always remember him.

Of course, I have some suggestions. For instance, "into hospital" would work better if the was inserted, making it "into thehospital".

Also I'd suggest that you put a space between your paragraphs. That would made reading easier.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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840
840
Review of Useful Software  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Unratable.)
A very useful article to read, especially to look for places to help protect one's computer from viruses, spyware, and more. After all, by keeping ones own computer say, one can help keep other computers safe. Very useful.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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841
841
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting start to what looks to be a promising story. You have what appears to be a young man who has been living at this school most of his life, rarely leaving it. You have him getting ready for some meeting, as well as thinking about an event that happened when he was ten. Interesting.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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842
842
Review of GOD'S GARDEN  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A very interesting poem. A person tries to grow a garden, with plants all in a nice order. However, it seems that there was some force that didn't like it, and the garden failed to grow. At first the person wonders why, but when they take another look, they see that there was another garden, one that they hadn't seen. Nicely done.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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843
843
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A very touching poem about an elderly couple watching each other. The blue color seems to have something of a somber note, as if something sad is happening in the poem, like as if one of them is dying. Very touching.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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844
844
Review of Angel Army Award  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A nice Award for being Angel of the Month of March 2010 from The Angel Army. Truelly something to keep around and hung up on the wall, as it were. Of course, I do have a few questions, such as how you got it and who was it specifically that gave it to you. After all, people want to know about that stuff.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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845
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting little item. This little Bulletin talks about how reviewers who take part in both Showering Acts of Joy and the Merit Badge Bonanza can help each other out, like how Showering Acts of Joy will give the Merit Badge Bonanza GPs for the reviews that mention it, as well as how to do it. Very interesting.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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846
846
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
An interesting contest. One has to figure out which combunation of colored shapes goes with which letter and solve the message. Those who are capable of doing it have a chance to win a nice sum of Gift Points. I hope plenty of people try it out.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!

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847
847
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
A nice image of one of your rewards. It's always nice to be given prizes for thing. Of course, I'd like to know a few thing. What item was it for, as people might wish to know, like was it for winning a contest or some such thing. Another question would be who gave it to you, as people might want to meet up with them and such.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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848
Review of Space Holder  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
An amussing little item. To start Writing.Com's item numbers off at 100,000 I needed a "spaceholder" item at 99,999. An interesting idea, and it seems to be like a little joke in a sence. Very nice.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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849
Review of Swastika  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting poem. It is about someone who was paid a visit from a White Surpremisist, specifically a Nazi. The Nazi tells the peopson about why he thinks that whites are superior to other people, but the guy retorts back, saying as to how it was only by chance that the Nazi was born looking like he did. Very interesting.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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850
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
An interesting and informative item. It talks about all of the free services that Writing.com provides to those with an acount, things such as creating items, adding to interactives, joining and adding to campfires, and many more things, all for the low low price of FREE! Very informative.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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