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2,912 Public Reviews Given
3,074 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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776
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting little story. You have two people searching the woods when something startles them, and forces them to head back to their camp, following them all the way. Very interesting, I hope to see more.

Characters
Aundrea is discribed to be a woman with military training, and while her partner seems to have had training, I'd like to know more about both of them, like why were they in the woods in the first place.

Plot
Two people searching the woods find something unexpected.

Spelling and Grammar
I see what could potentially be a spelling mistake at the begining, the word tho. I think it should be "though".

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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777
777
Review of The Lone Survivor  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A highly exciting story about a man, who survived an alien attack on a Mars colony, who ends up being drafted to participate in the 2120 Olimpic Games. Highly exciting.

Characters
Troy, the lone survivor, is interesting. Of course, I'd like to know more anout him. Perhaps a squal or a prequal might be useful, as I want to know what happened to him.

Plot
The lone survivor of an alien attack is drafted to participate in the Games.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with either spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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778
778
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Here is a very nice poll that asks how one feels about Writing.Com. Well here's how I feel about the Site, I totally enjoy it. After all, this is one place where I can post my stories and they'll get read. Highly enjoyable.

Originality
Well, considering that this is one of the oldest polls on the site, I'd say that this poll is original. *Bigsmile*

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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779
779
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An intersting little story about a young woman that works at an art museum and ends up meeting with an artist who produces some exceptional works of art. Very interesting.

Characters
The young woman and the young man are both interesting as they talk to each other. Very relatable as well.

Plot
A young woman meets up with her client, a young man, and finds something out about him.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with either spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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780
780
Review of No Way, José  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A very nice short Story about a man who goes to a party with an atractive young woman and meets up with her boyfriend/husband.

Characters
The characters are highly interesting, especially the main one.

Plot
A man goes to a party with a woman and meets up with her boyfriend/husband.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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781
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting start to what looks to be a good series. You have a group of children in a city full of death and destruction. However someone shows up, to give them help.

Characters
The children just pull out one's heart, and the woman makes you wonder what's going on.

Plot
After an attack on a village, only children and a thief are left alive.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!

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782
782
Review of Lullaby  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very cute little story about a bed asking a man to vacuum his own bed when he gets home. Very short and very nice to read.

Characters
The person and the bed a quite relatable, though I would like to see more about both.

Plot
A bed tells a man to vacuumhis bed at home.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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783
783
Review of Angel  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very nice little poem about Angels showing up to help relieve the suffering of the people who need them, and to give them strength to get through the day.

How I feel about this item
I thought that this is very moving, as it gives people the strength they need to get through the day.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar problems, though since I'm not a poet, I can't really judge on form and such.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!

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784
784
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A very interesting interactive in which the characters from Naruto end up turning into either animals or anthros, and get into a whole host of troubles, for one reason or another. A very exciting Fanfic.

Characters
The characters in most of the branches are nicelly discribed and writen.

Plot
The characters from Naruto end up changing into anthros/animals and get into a wide variaty of trouble.

Spelling and Grammar
There are some spelling and grammar errors, but that's what happens when people don't check their writing before submiting.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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785
Review of The Talent Pond  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Now here's a nice little group, one that helps other writers improve their skills an abilities. A very nice group.

Originality
While helping others is as old as time, it is always nice to see people help out.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with either spelling or grammar.

I wish your group the best of luck on your mission

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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786
786
Review of Let's Publish!  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A nice and very interesting group of people who try to help each other so that a person can get their items published in one form or another.

Originality
I haven't seen many groups that deal in helping people get published. Very nice.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

I wish you the best of luck in your mission

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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787
787
Review of Mistaken  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting story about a man who gets bitten by a venemous spider, and he becomes obsesed over the bite and tries to fix it. Quite frightening as well.

Characters
The character is very interesting, especially his reactions as he tries to deal with the bite. The store clerk is interesting as well.

Plot
After he is bitten by a spider, a man becomes obsessed with it.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with either spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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788
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Now here's a very helpfull group. Giving out Upgraded Memberships, rewarding Reviewers, and more, this is one group to check out.

Originality
While the idea of helping others is as old as time, this is one group that goes Above and Beyond the Call of Duty. Very nice.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or Grammar here.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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789
789
Review of Questions  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Now here is a very funny In-and-Out. Answer a question with another Question. A very fun game to play, and one that will make you laugh to no end.

Origionality
Tell me how often can one answer a question with a question? I wouldn't know. Do you? *Bigsmile*

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar, though I have to wonder what people are thinking when they ask their questions.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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790
Review of Amber's Gift  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A truelly saddening story about a woman who gets involved in an accident and tries to keep a young girl from dying from her injuries. To be honest, I had to stop several times while reading this, so that I could take off my glasses, and wipe something that was in my eyes.

Characters
The two main characters, the woman and the little girl, are well discribed.

Plot
A woman stays with a young girl in the aftermath of a terrible accident.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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791
Review of Down the road.  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting little poem about how time slips away, and how things change, especially when one doesn't take the time to make friends that are keepable.

How I feel about this item
This item makes me think about several things, such as how one should use their time more wisely, and to make some real friends.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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792
792
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting little story about a dream that one person has, that thakes them to a time that was at least eighty or so years prior to their own time.

Characters
The characters that were from the past are nicely discribed, from their clothing to the technology that they have. However the main character doesn't seem to be well discribed. I want to know what they look like.

Plot
Person has a dream that takes them to an earlier time in history.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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793
Review of What Is Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A very nice little poem that happens to ask a very important question: What is Love. Very heart touching.

What I feel about this piece
I feel that this piece makes one wonder about love, and what it means for them, as there are many questions asked in this poem.

Spelling and Grammar
In the Third line, I'd change new to knew, as that would be a better fit. Also I'd break the poem up a bit, so that related parts are in seperate clumps. Another thing that I'd also do would be to center it, to make it more pleasing on the eyes, as well as make it more noticable.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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794
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very interesting essay about the book "Holes", which is about a young boy who was arrested for allegedly stealing a pair of shoes, and blames it all on his great-great-"no-good pig-stealing" grandfather. Very interesting.

What I think about this Piece
I think that this piece is very well thought out in how the Yelnets' famly curse is explained to not nessesarilly to be completly bad, as the original person could of been in worse trouble than what he was.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with either spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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795
795
Review of Spaz  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very intense and interesting story. A woman goes into diabetic shock and her daughter has to try to find a way to keep her alive until she comes around and gets help.

Characters
The three main characters are very realistic and highly relatable.

Plot
After a woman goes into shock, her daughter must find a way to keep her alive until help arives.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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796
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story set during the days of a plague. A young boy of a noble family seems to be searching for someone but is having some troubles doing it.

Characters
The two young boys are well discribed, though I am curious about when the story takes place. Is it the 1200's or the 1800's? That might be usefull to know.

Plot
A young boy searches for someone, but he's having trouble.

Spelling and Grammar
There are some spelling and grammar errors, but those are mostly for the one boy's Scotish/Cockney accent. However I've noticed that in the second half of the story, only half of the page is used before dropping down to the next line. You might want to check on that.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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797
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story in line with the story of Frankenstine, in which a man takes the pieces of several bodies and tries to create life. Very interesting.

Characters
The scientest and his creation are well discribed, as are their movements and actions.

Plot
A man tries to create life, and ends up in trouble with his creation.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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798
Review of Tales of Terror  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
An interesting contest. Create a horror story using the prompts and following the rules, and one could win some fantastic prizes, which include Gift Points, Awardicons, Merit Badges, and a few other things. Very interesting.

Origionality
There are many contests, but those that specialize in a particular genera are always great.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Best Wishes for your contest. May you have plenty of enteries.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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799
Review of Look Away  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Deffenatly a spooky story about a woman who suffers from a childhood incident that has stuck with her ever since then. A very interesting read.

Characters
The woman is well discribed, and most people could, in one way or another, relate to the fear that she has.

Plot
Due to a childhood incident, a woman is afraid of something, and resolves to find a way to deal with it.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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800
Review of The God Factory  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting little story about a man in his office as he deals with a member of the board of directors for his company. Interesting piece.

Characters
The man who is talking on the phone is interesting, but I'd like to know more about this "Fred" he is talking to.

Plot
A man is on the phone talking to a member of the board of directers for a company that deals in strange people.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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