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2,535 Public Reviews Given
2,697 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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601
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A rather interesting story. A Sultun gives two men a challange to see which one of them is suitable to be his Visir, to see who would do the most in his name, the loser would lose his head. One man does lots of grand things in the name of the Sultun, but doesn't help anyone. The other believes the Sultun to be a cruel man, and does nothing in his name, but he helps people reguardless, even at cost to himself. Very interesting as to how things turned out for the two of them.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!

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602
Review of Tea and Blossoms  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting story. A wandering samuri kills a murdering monk and is hired by a local lord to be his son's bodyguard. However, the young man is arrogant, and the samuri eventually betrayes him in order to help out a young woman. A rather sad ending.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!

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603
603
Review of Island Storm  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
An interesting story about a romance that blossoms between the daughter of an Air Force general and an ex-marine after a storm causes them to share the same place some years after the second world war. A very interesting story to read.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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604
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story about a young werewolf who lives at a special shelter, and how she finds out the truth about her parantage, in that she is not just part werewolf, but part vampire as well, and then to finally meet up with him herself after fifteen years, and learn his story.

Of course, you might wish to work on the punctuation and sentance structure a bit to make this story slightly easier to read, but a very good story.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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605
605
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well here is an interesting group. If someone wants to buy a package fore one of their friends, this is one of the groups that they can go to, and have them give a friend, or two, a few gifts, such as reviews, merit badges, awardicons, and other fantastic gifts.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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606
606
Review of Visual Poetry  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A rather interesting image/poem about what is visual poetry. In the shape of a heart it has a great deal of font types and styles, all showing a wonderful work of word art, as it were. A very interesting and visual piece.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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607
607
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A very nice story about a person's memories about their grandfather, such as how he would tell them how much something would cost back in their day, or how they would go to the racetrack and bet on a horse or two, and how he encuraged them to start their own computer company and many other things. A wonderful tribute.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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608
608
Review of On Angel's Wings  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A truelly touching poem about what one writer feels that their mother, who had cancer, went through when she passed away. It seems to have been writen in a light-hearted view, with the positive things that the person could of experianced, such as seeing one she loved once again. Truelly a heart touching poem.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!

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609
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting begining to what looks to be an interesting story. You have what seems to be a mixture of science fiction mixed with fantasy as two groups fight a war over the land and the people and more. Deffinatly interesting.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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610
Review of RAINBOW ROSE  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A nice and lovely looking image of a multiple colored rose. Also, ih has the words "Finding Insperation" put right on it. Deffinatly something that is worth stating for sure, as it helps people find their own insperation.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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611
Review of The Good Cleaner  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story about a person known as a "Cleaner" who is bent on wiping out his enemy. It seems to be from the view of one of the aliens in the story The War of the Worlds, who is hunting down humans. Interesting little Fan-Fic.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!

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612
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting Fan-Fic about the Shrek Christmas Special and what happens afterwards.

Santa makes a stop at Shrek's place to drop off some presants, but when he leaves the place, he finds out that Donkey's wife Dragon has eaten his eight reindeer and hillarity ensues as Shrek and the gang try to find out how to save Christmas. Very funny.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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613
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Well here is a place were those who do Product Reviews can come and post them for the group that they are part of and get some credit and recognition for doing them. Also, they will be given some nice prizes as well, including a Product Reviewing Merit Badge, which is quite nice.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!

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614
Review of BARNYARD POLITICS  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting short story about how crazy politics can get, especially when it concerns barn animals and barnyard matters, as a donky named George talks with one of his friends about how crazy the whole thing just seems to be. Very funny.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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615
Review of The Frozen Land  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story about a man and a woman who are living in what seems to be a frozen land, somewhere in the far past. A very interesting little piece.

One thing that I'd like to see is a prequal, to see how the couple was transported there, and perhaps even a sequal.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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616
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A list for those who have entered the contests that the group Non-Humans R Us has held. A very useful thing, as it is a way to keep track of who has gotten what rewards for their enteries in it. Very useful, especially if people want to check out the items for themselves.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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617
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting poem about a guy who goes out to slay a dragon. Along the way, he does some thinking, about things like, "If others slew dragons, where is the proof of the deed?" Of course, it seems that he didn't recall some of the important things about dragons, such as how they and Gods seem to be very similar. The outcome, well, it just goes to show that you really need to think about things before you go off and pusue them.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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618
Review of In Glen Coe  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting story about a person's trip to Scottland, so that they can learn to speak English better for their classes at some University they went to. There they end up traveling through a storm to get to a B+B that they are renting a room from and the owner asks if they are related to someone. After that, the person is told the tale, a tale of trechery and murder. Quite interesting.

One suggestion, leave some space between your paragraphs. That helps make reading easier.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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619
Review of My Web Page  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Here is an interesting Web Page. It shows ones things, their favorite links, several of their items and more.

In fact, there is even a lovely poem here, one about creating hope, even when one can't find it right away. Very touching.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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620
Review of The Silent Queen  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting piece for your entery in the first contest held by Non-Humans R Us.

You have the story stary out with a bug-like wolf creature stuck in a trap. It's fasmily has been wiped out and it seems to be the last of his kind, However, a young girl, who is being chased by others comes and frees it. The creature then takes the girl and runs. Interesting way in which you told their stories, first the bug then the girl.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!

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621
Review of The Pack  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Nice piece for your entery in the first contest hosted by the group Non-Humans R Us.

You have a young male wolf creature on the run from human military forces which seem to be bent on wiping out his whole race. He is injured and falls unconscious. When he wakes up he finds out that he is being cared for by a young human woman who is on the run from the law. Together they manage to get to a place where his people live. Then, they get a mi9ssion, to destroy the main military base. Quite interesting, especially the ending.

Very original.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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622
Review of Cellmates  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Interesting piece for your entery in for the first contest that the group Non-Humans R Us has hosted.

You have a young girl being thrown in a dark cell, and she is trapped there with a wolf creature. The girl is scared because of the rumors about the creature's kind from the recent war with them, especially since her father died during it. The creature is able to convince her that he means no harm and that he knows a way out, but that they'd have to work together to get out. The girl decides to put aside her predjudices and the pair work together to get out. The ending is quite the surprise as well.

Very original.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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623
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
WHOW HO!!. Now this is funny.

Here is a piece where one writer explains a few of the reasons as to why they might rate someone some way, like whether or not they've had their hay today, or if they had to stay in the barn because of bad weather. Very witty and full of cow puns.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!!

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624
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting way to show off ones work for when a person's portfolio is full of so many things that it is hard for people to locate the thing that they are looking for. By having a list, people can help others find the item, or items, that they are looking for. Quite nice.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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625
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interersting story about a woman, who has just moved to a new home. Her husband left her so he could see about getting things squared away at the motel where their family had been staying but didn't return home. She then hears on the news about a person who'd been driving in a U-haul who had died in a tragic accident. As such, she is worried. Imagine her relifew when he finally returns home. Deffinatly heartwarming.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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