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Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of Questions  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Now here is a very funny In-and-Out. Answer a question with another Question. A very fun game to play, and one that will make you laugh to no end.

Origionality
Tell me how often can one answer a question with a question? I wouldn't know. Do you? *Bigsmile*

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar, though I have to wonder what people are thinking when they ask their questions.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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527
Review of Amber's Gift  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A truelly saddening story about a woman who gets involved in an accident and tries to keep a young girl from dying from her injuries. To be honest, I had to stop several times while reading this, so that I could take off my glasses, and wipe something that was in my eyes.

Characters
The two main characters, the woman and the little girl, are well discribed.

Plot
A woman stays with a young girl in the aftermath of a terrible accident.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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528
Review of Down the road.  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting little poem about how time slips away, and how things change, especially when one doesn't take the time to make friends that are keepable.

How I feel about this item
This item makes me think about several things, such as how one should use their time more wisely, and to make some real friends.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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529
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting little story about a dream that one person has, that thakes them to a time that was at least eighty or so years prior to their own time.

Characters
The characters that were from the past are nicely discribed, from their clothing to the technology that they have. However the main character doesn't seem to be well discribed. I want to know what they look like.

Plot
Person has a dream that takes them to an earlier time in history.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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530
Review of What Is Love  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A very nice little poem that happens to ask a very important question: What is Love. Very heart touching.

What I feel about this piece
I feel that this piece makes one wonder about love, and what it means for them, as there are many questions asked in this poem.

Spelling and Grammar
In the Third line, I'd change new to knew, as that would be a better fit. Also I'd break the poem up a bit, so that related parts are in seperate clumps. Another thing that I'd also do would be to center it, to make it more pleasing on the eyes, as well as make it more noticable.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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531
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A very interesting essay about the book "Holes", which is about a young boy who was arrested for allegedly stealing a pair of shoes, and blames it all on his great-great-"no-good pig-stealing" grandfather. Very interesting.

What I think about this Piece
I think that this piece is very well thought out in how the Yelnets' famly curse is explained to not nessesarilly to be completly bad, as the original person could of been in worse trouble than what he was.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with either spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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532
Review of Spaz  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A very intense and interesting story. A woman goes into diabetic shock and her daughter has to try to find a way to keep her alive until she comes around and gets help.

Characters
The three main characters are very realistic and highly relatable.

Plot
After a woman goes into shock, her daughter must find a way to keep her alive until help arives.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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533
533
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story set during the days of a plague. A young boy of a noble family seems to be searching for someone but is having some troubles doing it.

Characters
The two young boys are well discribed, though I am curious about when the story takes place. Is it the 1200's or the 1800's? That might be usefull to know.

Plot
A young boy searches for someone, but he's having trouble.

Spelling and Grammar
There are some spelling and grammar errors, but those are mostly for the one boy's Scotish/Cockney accent. However I've noticed that in the second half of the story, only half of the page is used before dropping down to the next line. You might want to check on that.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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534
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story in line with the story of Frankenstine, in which a man takes the pieces of several bodies and tries to create life. Very interesting.

Characters
The scientest and his creation are well discribed, as are their movements and actions.

Plot
A man tries to create life, and ends up in trouble with his creation.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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535
Review of Tales of Terror  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
An interesting contest. Create a horror story using the prompts and following the rules, and one could win some fantastic prizes, which include Gift Points, Awardicons, Merit Badges, and a few other things. Very interesting.

Origionality
There are many contests, but those that specialize in a particular genera are always great.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Best Wishes for your contest. May you have plenty of enteries.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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536
Review of Look Away  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Deffenatly a spooky story about a woman who suffers from a childhood incident that has stuck with her ever since then. A very interesting read.

Characters
The woman is well discribed, and most people could, in one way or another, relate to the fear that she has.

Plot
Due to a childhood incident, a woman is afraid of something, and resolves to find a way to deal with it.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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537
Review of The God Factory  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting little story about a man in his office as he deals with a member of the board of directors for his company. Interesting piece.

Characters
The man who is talking on the phone is interesting, but I'd like to know more about this "Fred" he is talking to.

Plot
A man is on the phone talking to a member of the board of directers for a company that deals in strange people.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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538
Review of A chat with Litsa  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting story about a man who has an interview with a young girl about what it is she does for a living, and what she is like as well.

Characters
The young girl is well discribed, from her unkempt hair to her oversized clothing. The Interviewer however isn't to well discribed. I want to know more about him.

Plot
There doesn't seem to be any real plot, beyond the interview. Perhaps a sequal is in order.

Spelling and grammar
I see a few grammarical/spelling errors towards the begining, but nothing major.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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539
Review of Mirror, Mirror  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story about a woman who has to deal with an abusive husband and finds out about how to make her life better with magic. I hope to see a sequal of it. *Bigsmile*

Characters
The three main people, the woman, her husband, and the old witch, are discribed quite well.

Plot
A woman tries to find a better way of doing things with magic.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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540
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A nice contest for people to enter both for a chance to show off one's work and to have a chance to win some very nice prizes, which include and Awardicon and Gift Points.

Originality
There are many contests, but anything that challenges one to write is great.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Best Wishes for your contest. May you have many enteries

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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541
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Now this is a highly funny story. A guy goes to a beach party and goes for a swim when something gets ahold of him and drags him out to sea. A very funny story and I'm having trouble keeping myself from laughing.

Characters
The people are nicelly discribed, and very discriptive.

Plot
A young man finds himself in some trouble when he decides to go swimming.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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542
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting story about how a woman and her family deals with a hurricane, and manage to get through the whole ordel and everything that came with it, including the destruction of their house.

Characters
The woman is deffinatly someone relatable to almost anyone who has gone through really bad storms, especially those that cause damage.

Plot
A woman and her family fight to protect their belongings from the ravages of a powerful hurricane. Nicely writen.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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543
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well it seems that the Manimal Sagas has yet another mission to go on when a plot to kill one of their friends is told to them. Also so of them meet up with old friends and new companions.

Characters
Very interesting, and highly discriptive in what they do.

Plot
The team learnd of an assasination attempt on their friends and must find a way to deal with the trouble.

Spelling and Grammer
Some minor errors, but none too serious.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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544
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An intereserting poll for those who like to write about dominance and submisive stuff, especially where it concerns the use of capitals for use in names and the word "I" for first person stories.

Origionality
Well I can say that I haven't seen a Poll like this on the site.

Spelling and Grammer
I can see no spelling or "grammer" mistakes, except that of the names. *Bigsmile**Laugh*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!!!

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545
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It's not easy being both a mother and a writer, especially when your children are being very agrivating.

Characters
You have a mother who is trying to do some work while at home, and her two children are causing her some serious problems.

Plot
It's a tough job being a parent. Very humerous though.

Spelling and Grammer
No spelling or grammer mistakes that I can see.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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Review of Canned  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Oh this is a funny story about a guy who had a bad day while he was at work. It took me a while to stop laughing so that I could do this review.

Characters
You have a young man who is just trying to do his job, but he ends up colliding with an old woman who just freaks out.

Plot
Guy has a bad day on the job. Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammer
I don't see any problems.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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547
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A very funny letter to a former boss from an ex-employiee. I just have to sit back and laugh as I read this.

Character
You seem to have a boss who is fed up with his employee, who is supposed to have done various infractions and potentially illeagle things.

Plot
Guy sends a letter to his boss explaining the things that he did. Very nice. *Bigsmile*

Spelling and Grammer
No problems that I can see.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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548
Review of Dry Food For Dogs  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
An interesting little comparioson between an office job and a dog pound and how they are related to in a sence.

Chatacters
No real characters except for the metionings of various dogs and what they are like.

Plot
No real plot to speak of except for comparisons.

Spelling and Grammer
No problems to be spotted.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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549
Review of Granny Fields  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An elderly woman has a talk with the police after she gets involved in the death of a young man. Nice story.

Characters
Wonderful discription of the old woman and what she says happened.

Plot
A woman has to talk to the police after someone attempts to rob her house.

Spelling and Grammer
No spelling errors but you seem to mention that the young man snuck up on the old woman twice.

Suggestions
Have some space between paragraphs and upping the rating from E to at least 13+ due to content.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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550
Review of A Wasted Life  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting story about an old cop close to retierment having to go on one last case and face some old enimies of his. An interesting read.

Characters
Very descriptive looks as to how the cop and his partner, and the gang members appear, and how they talk and so forth.

Spelling and Grammer
None that I can see, though I did have a bit of trouble keeping the names straight. Perhaps using just first names or just last names might be in order.

Plot
An old cop goes on one last case and faces old enimies. Very interesting ending.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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