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Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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526
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting story. It's about a man who accidentally killed his wife in a drunken rage. One night, he's at the cemetery his wife's buried a, wn he comes across a forgotten gravestone. He ends up meeting a ghost woman, who died the same way his wife did, over two centuries earlier.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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527
527
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting contest. Write a letter to some serviceman/woman, who is still serving overseas, so that they know that someone cares about them. Sometimes those people need presents more than anyone else- they risk their lives for us, and may not come home.

Originality
I haven't seeing any other contests like this, but it's good to help out.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with your contest

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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528
528
Review of November 7, 2012  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your thoughts on the Election. Sometimes there are topics that we prefer to avoid- politics being one of them. Sometimes there is a person that we want to win. Other times, we don't know who we want to win. Making a choice isn't easy at times, as there tends to be plenty of mud in the waters.

Originality
It's interesting to learn about peoples' thoughts on politics. Haven't seen anything else about the election.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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529
529
Review of The Bible  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is an interesting poem about your feelings on the Bible. Sometimes we read something, but we still don't get the meaning, even after we've read it a dozen or more times. Sometimes we don't read something, but we know the meaning. There are lots of things that we don't know about.

Thoughts
It's interesting to learn a person's take on one of the most important books in History.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to center the poem- might make it look better.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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530
530
Review of RickysGranny  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting signature you have. It seems to have been made for someone that you cared about- be it a friend through the site, or a friend in real life. You made this to try and describe them. From what I can see, this person must have had a fiery attitude, one way or another.

Colors
Nicely Done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar, providing that the person's user name is correct.

Suggestions
You might want to list if the person has a new account/changed their username, or when the person left the site.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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531
531
Review of catwoman  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a nice signature for your mother, catwoman Author IconMail Icon. Sometimes it's the little things that are worth the most- a simple image can convey a great deal of love, far beyond even expensive jewels, especially when it is made by ones own self. Nicely done.

Color
Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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532
532
Review of Mystic Meadows  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a nice poem. It reminded me a bit of a poem I wrote regarding imagination. Sometimes the mind takes us to places we want to go, where dragons fly, and mermaids swim. Sometimes though, one has to enjoy the pleasures that we do have, such as being in the presence of family.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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533
533
Review of The Milkman  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a nice signature that you have for your friend, The Milkman Author IconMail Icon. You have some very nice coloration here, along with images that would be perfect for a farmer, such as barns, cattle, chickens, and grain fields. very nice to look at.

Colors
Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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534
534
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a very nice signature for your husband during the month of Halloween. It's a slight play on a few things- He's the Story Master, but this claims him to be the Scary Master, and has his initials, SM. *Bigsmile*. One always has to find a special item for that special someone.

Color
Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Another signiture image
535
535
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute little image, of a cat sitting on a few books, and your handle right next to it. Very nice, as it tells who you are, and some of the things that might be important to you, such as the books and the cat. Always good to show what you like.

Colors
Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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536
536
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is a cute little image- sort of. *Bigsmile* It is for the month of October and shows the lovely SMs as a witch. We all have those disguises for that month- some fit, others don't. Of course, they are always interesting to find out about.

Color
Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with either spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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537
537
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is a nice looking image. It is for RAOK, a group that specializes in helping people out, especially by giving them Upgraded Memberships to those who ask for some help. A very helpful group, and this is an image that clearly identifies who they are.

Colors
Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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538
538
Review of The Plug Page  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a nice little item. It is the logo for the Shameless Plug, which is a place where people can show off new items, and get reviews on them, or just show off things that seem to fit the occasion, or need a second opinion. Always a load of fun to find.

Colors
Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
I think you might want to post an updated link to the Shameless Plug. The one you have is a little dated. *Bigsmile*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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539
539
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is a useful little item to have. It is the logo for the Contests In-and-Out page- always a fun little place to go to when you want to challenge yourself, and perhaps win a prize for your hard work. This is well done, and does the site proud.

Colors
Nicely done. I don't see any clashing.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
I think you should post an updated link to the Contest page. The one you have here is slightly outdated. *Bigsmile*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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540
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a poll asking about Semicolons; are they obsolete, or are they still useful? To be honest, there are times that I have trouble with the darn things. But, there are times, like when I'm writing something of a list, that putting one of them down just feels right. So, I think they are still useful- as it is, I used one in this review.

Originality
Haven't seen one about the Semicolon.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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541
Review of Awardicons Survey  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a survey that asks the question about Awardicons, as to whether or not there is a problem with them.

In some instances, I think there is a problem, like when friends just give each other one. In other instances, I don't really think there is an issue. Most items tend to have earned the awardicon they get, such as when a good item manages to win a contest- though if there is a small sample, it can be an issue. Sometimes it's part of in auction package- in that case, the donor can search the person's portfolio for the item they like the most, or feel is the best. It all depends on the situation.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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542
542
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This looks like a fun little Auction that's sprung up for the 12th birthday for the Site. Let's see what we have- badges, Awardicons, review packages, and more- all in a series of twelve- each package having at least twelve items in it. Talk about a great deal of fun.

Originality
Lots of auctions. Always fun.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with your auction. Hope you made plenty.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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543
Review of Naked Pony Anthro  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This looks like the start of an interesting interactive. In a world where women severely outnumber men, there are often three wives to each man, and it seems that straight women are non-existent. Also, the women have special abilities, in that they can swallow others. Talk about trouble.

Characters
In the sections where there are stories, they look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want to work on the additions, especially those where others have added their own pages. They all need some work.

Suggestions
You might want to bump the rating up to GC- it reads a little above 18+ in my opinion. Better safe than sorry.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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544
Review of Fighting Myself  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Review for participating in my Auction, "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" Open in new Window. by donating a package/Gift Points. Enjoy.

You have a girl on her way to see her friends, after she's heard some news. When she leaves, her friends wonder what's really going on in her life.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
Double Spacing your paragraphs isn't needed, in the way that you have it.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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545
Review of My Guardian Angel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Fifth and Final review for participating in my Auction, "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" Open in new Window. by donating some Packages and Gift Points. Enjoy.

This is an interesting poem. A young person has to deal with the loss of their sister, and has lost their faith in God as a result. Then something happens, and they begin to wonder again.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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546
546
Review of My World  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Fourth of Five reviews for donating some Packages/Gift Points to my Auction "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" Open in new Window.. Enjoy.

This is a poem that seems to be about love. The person talks about they are, and aren't, trying to get the other person interested in them. That can always be tricky.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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547
547
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Third of Five reviews for participating in my Auction, "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" Open in new Window. by donating Gift Points and a couple of Packages. Enjoy.

This is about the reasons behind the use of your username. At a job you were working at, you had the idea to create a story about a kid agent- looks like Spy Kids and Agent Cody Banks ruined that idea. However, instead of letting the idea go, you changed it, and eventually created your own OC, Agent Kilo of the Sisco Organization. Nice.

spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to add this to the Genre Personal at any rate. Also, you might wish to rate this ASR, as I think this item is a little high than "E".

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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548
548
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is your First of Five reviews for participating in my Auction, "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" Open in new Window. by donating a mess of Gift Points and a few Packages. Enjoy.

This seems to be an expansion on the Bio you have for the Portfolio Page. It explains that you are from Great Britain, and use slightly different ways to spell words than Americans, along with a few different terms. You explain that you're interested in poetry and writing spy stories. Sounds nice.

Spelling and Grammar
Except for the British Spelling, I don't see any issues.

Suggestions
You might want to add this to Personal and other such genres, and list this as a Non-Fiction item.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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549
549
Review of OUT AT SIXTY  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
This is your review for donating a package/Gift Points to "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" Open in new Window.. Enjoy.

This is about your own personal life as a lesbian, and how you were sixty before you actually told anyone. However, you still had a rough life, as you had feelings towards other women, but you couldn't properly express your feelings. Also, you were afraid for your safety, in more ways than one. Things can be rough.

Characters
As a young man with high-functioning Autism, I can relate to your life- people just see that you're different and they make your life hell.

Spelling and Grammar
There are some areas that could use some polishing, like the section about your daydreams as a youth.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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550
550
Review of Spring Sprang  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (1.0)
This is your Second and Final review for participating in "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" Open in new Window. by donating a package or gift points. Enjoy.

Well, this is cute. This is actually a series of three haikus involving Spring and all of the other seasons, as Spring likes to spring its way around them, and cause a great deal of trouble. Very funny.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Since this was a contest entry to an old contest, you might want to have this listed as Contest Entry instead of Contest.

Other
Normally I'd give this 4.5 or 5.0 *Star*s, but given the rules of the contest it was in, it's getting 1.0 *Star*s. *Bigsmile*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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