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Review of Stardate 4525.3  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM T...  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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A review for you in conjunction with "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW, purchased for you by ~A.J. Lyle~ with the following message: "For you awesome participation in the power raid".

Being a fan of the show, for many, many moons. I was able to relate to this tale in so far as I could picture the characters and details with great clarity.

This rhyming creation is a great showpiece of master craftsmanship. The rhyming couplets were easy to follow and this flowed with great ease.

A great tribute for the Star Trek fans.

I found no errors, spelling, grammatical or with punctuation. The poem is centered which draws attention to the rhyming couplets and distinguishes the difference of the setting.


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Review of Night and Day  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Quotation Inspiration: Official Contest. Thanks for entering!

Dear Mara ♣ McBain ,
I will be reviewing "Night and Day for you today. I hope you can gather some useful information from the review, even if it is just to find out whether or not I enjoyed reading this story. Remember, I am but the reader, the writing is yours and you alone can decide if anything should be altered. I can merely offer my advice and opinions on what I am reading. My intentions are pure, to never do harm, only offer my opinions and views on what I am reading.

*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*How did I come across your piece?*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*
As a judge for "Quotation Inspiration: Official Contest, I am introduced to many amazing stories. When it is my turn to judge, I am always pleased to see so many great entries to read. This was entered in the July contest, so here I am.

*Vine2**Flowerv**Vine1*Thoughts and expectations from the title:*Vine2**Flowerv**Vine1*
From the beginning, I knew a comparison would be made of opposites, in the story, but as to what extent and who or what we would be introduced to, remained a mystery.

*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*How do I feel about the pace and flow?*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*
Glued to the page, my minds eye translated written word to a motion picture as I watched this friendship grow. There was no pause due to the flow. I was able to read this uninterrupted each and every time. The transition from paragraph to paragraph was smooth and free flowing.

*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*Thoughts on the ending:*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*
Each time, as in the first read through, when I hit the last four paragraphs, silent tears began to slide down my cheeks. This was a very moving story. I began to hope for something similar to the ending, from the sheer emotion of the story.

*Vine2**Suitheart**Vine1*My overall thoughts:*Vine2**Suitheart**Vine1*
This is a very moving story, much along the lines you would find from Barbara Delinsky. A piece worthy of publishing.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed.
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Review of Coloring Time  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Quotation Inspiration: Official Contest. Thanks for entering!

Dear Rhyssa ,
I will be reviewing "Coloring Time for you today. I hope you can gather some useful information from the review, even if it is just to find out whether or not I enjoyed reading this story. Remember, I am but the reader, the writing is yours and you alone can decide if anything should be altered. I can merely offer my advice and opinions on what I am reading. My intentions are pure, to never do harm, only offer my opinions and views on what I am reading.

This is a wonderful story on lessons we learn in childhood. Distinguishing our differences and yet recognizing our similarities is a great building block for establishing friendships and interaction in society.

*Vine2**Flowerv**Vine1*Are there any technical issues I want to query?*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*
~In kindergarten, you learn the letters, and how to spell your name. Many come into school already knowing how to spell their name, and recognize it, but many others do not. Having the children's names already on the wall, and expecting them to go find them, let alone, know how to spell their own name to put it on their coloring project, is something more for first and second grades.

~Points To Ponder:
CONJUNCTION
Starting a sentence with a conjunction, but, or, and , creates an incomplete sentence for the reader. These three words are coordinate conjunctions used to joinsentences or part of sentences that have the same grammatical status. Though the use of conjunctions to start sentences is becoming more of a norm in today's writings, it is still frowned upon in many writing circles. When used with slang terminology, the use of conjunctions to start sentences is a commonality. I have now come across two main circumstances where this happens repeatedly. The first is when the writer is putting to print exactly as they speak, and the other is with addressing or speaking to or for a younger audience.

*Vine2**Suitheart**Vine1*My overall thoughts:*Vine2**Suitheart**Vine1*
Overall, this is a well written piece. The grammar, spelling and punctuation all appear to be in order. The story is well written and has a great flow and rhythm.
My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed.
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Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
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I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Quotation Inspiration: Official Contest. Thanks for entering!

Dear Morcac ,
I will be reviewing "Similar differences for you today. I hope you can gather some useful information from the review, even if it is just to find out whether or not I enjoyed reading this story. Remember, I am but the reader, the writing is yours and you alone can decide if anything should be altered. I can merely offer my advice and opinions on what I am reading. My intentions are pure, to never do harm, only offer my opinions and views on what I am reading.

*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*How did I come across your piece?*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*
I am one of the judges for the July round of "Quotation Inspiration: Official Contest"   by Writing.Com Support . I am thankful for this opportunity to read your item and put forth my thoughts and ideas about it. I hope you find them useful.

*Vine2**Flowerv**Vine1*Thoughts and expectations from the title:*Vine2**Flowerv**Vine1*
The title well describes the main theme of this story. This is a short moralistic tale, a lesson in life. Some come by this the hard way, some come by it naturally, and others never see the light, they see only the differences.

*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*How do I feel about the main protagonist?*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*
I feel sad for the main character in the beginning. After all, what has had happened in his past to bring him to this point in his life. What preconditioning has he gone through that put him with this view? I like how this is a transitional story that teaches a lesson in the end.


*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*How do I feel about the pace and flow?*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*
This is a very short story. It feels like a lot is missing, and that may be due to the word count restriction.
The story jumps from problem, to solution, to resolution with no padding in between. I would suggest refining this once the contest is over.

*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*Outstanding questions or issues:*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*
~too drunk to slow
show...

~and thing around be seemed different.(should be: things around me...)

*Vine2**Flowerv**Vine1*Are there any technical issues I want to query?*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*
~traitor, why is it capitalized?


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed.
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Review of From this bed...  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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A well written poem that is a special piece. To me, this is a form, I have come to know as a rant, or rave. That would be, a poem that reads quick and swift down the page, describing an event or happening with great emotion.

The emotions are high in this poem and I liked the message it delivers. The final verse is a good hope or dream, perhaps one day a reality.
I didn't notice any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors. Well done.
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Review of Trophy Chest  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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A wonderful display case is what this is. I didn't see this so much as a treasure box, but more a jewelry box, where important treasures and keepsakes are kept. This displays many unique and talented artists in writing and imagery. I think the special touch was the letters that you treasure as well. I have never thought to keep those, though, had they been on actual paper, I would have done so.

I pick up that you are a person who places great sentimental value on all things in life. You hold your treasures dear, and proudly display them in the privacy of your sanctuary. This is a folder of greatness.
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Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Written by another, in memory of a loved one. I at first puzzled over its existence in the trophy folder. The conclusion I found, was that, this is indeed, a true trophy. It isn't something you created, so I wouldn't move it to poetry. It was designed for you as a gift or prize won, making it a trophy of pure emotion and love.
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Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Welcome back dear friend. It is has been a long time. I recognize this from your blog, I think. Beautiful sentiment that is sure to be added to those special memories between mother and daughter.

Points To Ponder:
CONJUNCTION
Starting a sentence with a conjunction, but, or, and , creates an incomplete sentence for the reader. These three words are coordinate conjunctions used to joinsentences or part of sentences that have the same grammatical status. Though the use of conjunctions to start sentences is becoming more of a norm in today's writings, it is still frowned upon in many writing circles. When used with slang terminology, the use of conjunctions to start sentences is a commonality. I have now come across two main circumstances where this happens repeatedly. The first is when the writer is putting to print exactly as they speak, and the other is with addressing or speaking to or for a younger audience.

The heart and the love put into this is pure. Thank you for sharing such a personal piece.
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Review of Will You  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello piewhackett1. I will be reviewing your item as one of the five items, selected at "Simply Positive Review Forum , for our group members to review. It is our sincere wish and hope that our members leave you with some great reviews and comments, even if nothing else other than they liked your work.

Such a beautiful poem. The first thing I think of when reading this, is how appropriate this would be for wedding vows. I could not help but to picture these words being said between husband and wife as they made that great transition from one person to one family.

The rhythmical poem is smooth and flowing with the rhyming couplets that dance down the page. I like how this centered piece draws great attention with the spacing.

Overall this is well written, with no notice of grammar, spelling or punctuation errors.
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Review of What's My Name?  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello WordsInBlack . I will be reviewing your item as one of the five items, selected at "Simply Positive Review Forum , for our group members to review. It is our sincere wish and hope that our members leave you with some great reviews and comments, even if nothing else other than they liked your work.

This is a wonderful poem. The spiritual message carries through loud and clear. The religious message comes through nice and smooth, without being pushy or overshadowing.

The poem is more a story of the boy ,and a plea for help, than it is about religion. I like how this has a rhyming free-style to it, allowing the reader to find their own voice and rhythm within the words.

This is well put together with great thought and emotion.
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Review of What Should I do?  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE NEWBIE REVIEWE...  
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
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An emotional poem which reads as a rant, due to lack of breath, or space between verses. Here, verses are dictated by periods, and I fear this is harming the poem.

ALIGNMENT
Sometimes something as simple as where an item is placed upon the page can help to determine how it is interpreted. Poetry is up to the interpretation of the reader. What a poet writes, and the message a reader gets isn't always the same, especially when using metaphors. That being said, aligning a poem to the left of a page may imply unification; all is right in the world. Centering an item so that all the lines are askew, based upon the character count, can have the meaning of chaos and turmoil in life or emotion. Though keep in mind, this is just my opinion, I am but a novice when it comes to poetry and its teachings. I feel this poem would be better off, centered, to showcase the turbulence of the emotions.

PUNCTUATION
~Some will tell you that punctuation is needed in poetry. Others will argue that it is not needed and makes no difference. Still, there will be those who say it is up to the particular poet and the poem itself. Personally, I feel that the way the verses flow down the page, that punctuation is necessary for this piece. However, using consistent punctuation would be better. Though without it, the message is still there, it just isn't as strong.

For me, I use to write poetry without any punctuation. Somewhere down the line someone gave me sound advice, and it made sense to me. The punctuation, or lack thereof in a poem, is the direction of the writer, guiding the reader. The punctuation is where the author wishes the reader to take a breath; to contemplate; to pause for dramatic effect. The lack of punctuation says the same thing, "Read in one breath, whether slow, or fast, down the page". To me, punctuation is the direction from the author to the reader. Use it, or don't, to your heart's desire and don't let anyone persuade you otherwise. However, if using it, be consistent throughout the piece. My personal opinion, this poem would benefit from punctuation.

Overall this is an emotionally strong piece. I feel if it were centered, broken into smaller verses, and proper punctuation entered, this would be a much improved piece. Though, without them, this is a nice average piece.
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Review of Whisper Of A Name  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE NEWBIE REVIEWE...  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Good afternoon C. T. Hill ! I am here on assignment from "Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers. This story is one of the five items selected for our group members to review this week. I hope you have enjoyed the attention and found the reviews helpful, if for nothing else to learn whether or not the readers enjoyed the piece.

*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*Thoughts and expectations from the title*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*
To me this spoke of mystery and suspense. I felt that a secret was being held and it would be revealed in its own time.

*Vine2**Flowerv**Vine1*Thoughts on the main character*Vine2**Flowerv**Vine1*
The main character is lost and in a strange place that has the feeling of home. There is mystery and cloud shrouding the area and the voice of the story is lost and confused.

*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*Pace and flow*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*
The story flows with a good pace, not skipping and jumping around, but on an even keel, revealing everything in its own time and place.

*Vine2**Flowerv**Vine1*Imagery and emotion*Vine2**Flowerv**Vine1*
Imaginations are sparked and nudged to expand as this tale does not give you a setting or time, it hints and expects the reader to figure out what is going on by themselves, through subtle hint.

*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*Ending*Vine2**Flowerb**Vine1*
I don't think I could have come up with a better ending. Perfectly executed.

*Vine2**Flowerv**Vine1*Technical*Vine2**Flowerv**Vine1*
~..name once, it was silent,[.] i[I]t was...
~ ...abandoned me[,] I felt myself...
~...but no,[.] I do not...
~...at my hands,[.] t[T]hey were...
~... my bones[,] and I was...
~Though[,]in reality...
~As she spoke[,] I felt an...
~Though, I would have probably agreed to anything at that point. [incomplete sentence]
~We can look at them[,] and they...
~ever seen him[,] and that...
~“He looked me over carefully and said, ‘the time has come for your service,[.] you are Azra’il[.] you are love,’ and I...

These are just a few of the items I noticed while reading this story. I don't want to edit this, just point out a few inconsistencies. Mostly, these are comma errors, something I myself am no expert on, and often refer to outside sources for help, as was this case.

*Vine2**Suitheart**Vine1*Overall*Vine2**Suitheart**Vine1*
Overall this is a wonderful story. The emotion and depth are great. The only problem I had with the story was the many technical punctuation errors. I give this a four, above average. In hopes that once the technical issues are cleared up, I can return to re-rate this.
My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed.
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Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Simply Positive!

Finding love is the theme of the poem. Having grown accustom to loneliness and all it has to offer, once again finding love, brings a whole new color to the world. With each verse the color seeps back onto the canvas, creating a view of beauty.

I didn't find any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors. The rhyming scheme was here and there, sort of scattered as the butterflies in your stomach with this new re-merging sensation.

Overall this is a wonderful free-style piece.
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Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Harry,
This is a thought provoking piece on nature and some of the survival skills that are inherent in order for the circle of life to continue. Written in rhyming couplets, this gives thought and pause to ponder.

It used to be that man had to be fit and in his best health to hunt and forage for the family. Those days are gone and we have gotten lazy and obese. If those days were to return, would we be able to run the race of survival? This really made me stop and think about my life today and how keeping fit and healthy can improve my lifestyle.

Perhaps it is just the mindset of where I am today, that put this personal spin on things. Or maybe it is the harsh reality of what is described. Either way, I leave this with a clear understanding of the hard reality and a lesson I can take home from it.
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Review of Children of Babel  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE NEWBIE REVIEWE...  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Though written as a poem, I see this also as a song. The message was clear and the story of this poem is easy to follow. The one small place I had difficulty with, was :
~to free those whose hurting

It made more sense to me, and I kept putting it in every read through, to say:
~to free those who are hurting.

A small substitute and the meaning comes through bold and strong.
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Review of Lost From God  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Simply Positive!

A plea of help from a higher power. This is a poem with a voice of someone who is lost. Lost to themselves and to others. They can see that they are lost, which means they are finding their way back, but they still need help to overcome some of the obstacles.
This is a poem based on an alternate rhyming pattern. Most of the time the lines and rhyming is sound, but there are a few of the rhyming couples that are a bit stretched.

Home to alone (a bit of a stretch, but can be made to work)
special to pretzel (stretching a bit more)
nobody to me ( didn't see the fit at all, though, a long e is at the end of both)

be to see rhyming couple is used twice and I found that too repetitive. Think outside of the box.

Overall, a good poem with great meaning, however it feels unpolished and could use some fine tuning.
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Review of Mistaken Identity  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Simply Positive!

Having come across many of your posts on facebook, I was rather pleased to see one of your items on our list of things for review at "Simply Positive Review Forum . Hopefully many our members dropped by with some insightful and helpful reviews, even if they were no more than to let you know how much they appreciate your work.

This is a wonderfully written piece. It is no wonder that this was an contest winner. It would be nice to see this rewarded with a ribbon as well.
The story is one that if I came across this in a book, as a chapter insert, I would be enthralled and completely engrossed.

The opening sentence is an attention grabber. It let me know that I was in for a real treat. The title, perfectly matches the story. I was looking for clues the whole way through, and not disappointed with the outcome.

I found no errors with the grammar, spelling or punctuation, though I am no expert.

I enjoyed reading this piece and will enjoy returning to look through some more of your writing. Keep up the great work.
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Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Simply Positive!
Written in a third person point of view, this is a tale of wisdom that is shared and an experience on what you will find at the end of the world. I feel this could be an outline for a more in-depth tale. With so much to offer, the man at the end of the world is like the library of Alexander. He contains knowledge of plenty to share with others. He is content to sit and share what he knows with any that will listen.

I didn't see any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors. I did feel it would be more improved with a first person point of view. Though, this is good as a piece written to give a background or outline. My personal opinion only.
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Review by ~WhoMe???~
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Simply Positive!

Written in a third person point of view, this is a tale of wisdom that is shared and an experience on what you will find at the end of the world. I feel this could be an outline for a more in-depth tale. With so much to offer, the man at the end of the world is like the library of Alexander. He contains knowledge of plenty to share with others. He is content to sit and share what he knows with any that will listen.

I didn't see any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors. I did feel it would be more improved with a first person point of view. Though, this is good as a piece written to give a background or outline. My personal opinion only.
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Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Simply Positive!

An amazing job has been done on this story of mystery and intrigue. The grammar, spelling and punctuation appear to be in order.
I would have liked to see additional bits on this as to her reaction upon seeing the house. Is she now afraid? Does the house represent death, or the beginning of a fairytale? The dark cloak would represent the end or death, but the bright light could be the re-birth or starting over.

Additional information would improve the story in the fact that it would wrap up the story. We don't know how she feels yet and her emotion is the key to the whole story.
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Review of Upon Graduation  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Now I am at impasse. I thought for sure, the item I wanted to award was the folder, and now, this too has no ribbon. A shame! This wonderful graduating speech went forth unrecognized...I will remedy that. You have earned yourself two awards today.

You have done several things with this speech. You recognized the many activities and things you learned from the group, and you also garnered interest from me the reader, as to inquiring of these classes, though I am no newbie.

Why would a veteran of five years need a newbie class? There is so much to do around the site, that there are activities and projects I have not ventured into, and have not the slightest clue as how to go about it...ok, I have an idea, but not the full concept of what all is involved. Your speech has given me a nudge and I am thinking of inquiring soon. After all, I hear, you can teach an old dog new tricks, if you are persistent enough...

The overall layout of this speech is wonderful. There is a nice even flow, and I didn't notice any grammar, spelling, or punctuation errors. I even learned a new word. The only thing I did notice is a broken image link... nothing too serious since it has been over a year since this was modified.


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed.
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Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Wow, you have been very, very, busy with auctions as of late. No sooner do I fulfill one donation, I am back to fulfill another. This package was won at "The Steam Powered Auction - CLOSED. It consists of two reviews a merit badge and an awardicon, since, I have already delivered your mystery sig. I hope you liked it. I might have one more in that same series, I will have to look. Having recently delivered a merit badge to you, I may look to a friend to help with that part, since I wish it to be included in your community recognitions.

~Why on earth would I choose to rate a folder? To start with, this folder is part of your main page, and it is the only item without a ribbon. Since I will be rewarding one of the items I review with a ribbon, I thought it only fitting. NO, I couldn't just go to something and place a ribbon on it. I had to actually go through each page and link referenced under the item as well. Call it port surfing, snooping around, what have you. I had to look, so I might as well comment on the organization and cleanliness of this palace.

~Each item in your port is well housed. From the groups to sigs and their respective items, all things are categorized and in its proper place, including this folder and the contents within.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed.
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Review of A Really Bad Trip  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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This is a package of two reviews, a cnote with 1000gps and an awardicon, brought to you through "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW in care of the Simply Positive Group leaders. They send "Thanks for all you do!"

When I began looking for items to review, I searched out items without awards and with few reviews. Not an easy task in your port. I had to port surf almost every folder, nook and cranny, but I did find a few things. I hope you find my reviews to your liking.

I must say, I got a good laugh out of this piece. I read it several times over, and each time a different aspect brought a grin.

*Question*Why is the opening sentence broken into two lines?

~Technical~
of Grace Kelly, You know.
why is you capitalized.

*Questionb*
I don't understand what eating his food with a fork has to do with anything? The sentence was odd and seemed out of context, unless he originally inquired while eating...

Overall this was a fun piece to read. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed.
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Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM T...  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is the first of two reviews, gifted to you from the Simply Positive Group Leaders for your Awesome Reviews. This package comes to you from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW

A light hearted, sing song poem, full of beauty and rhyming words of spring. I found beauty abound in the soft breezes and the flowers that were in bloom. This shows great imagery. It made it easy to envision the landscape as it traverses the valleys as well as the hillsides.

I could find no errors with this poem. It is well written and free of error.
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Review by ~WhoMe???~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Having gone through each sig, each folder, each piece of artwork, I found this to be the most fitting place to stick that well deserved ribbon. One thing I found to be quite remarkable, is that with each sig was broken down as to who sent it to you, in its own little sub-folder. Almost every single piece of artwork gave credit to the originating artist.

To me, this was quite thought provoking. How many of us take a sig, upload it, and just send it hodge podge into a dark corner to be plucked out mysteriously when needed. Your organization and clutter free palace has given me contemplation.

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