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1,504 Public Reviews Given
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Review Style
I look to be entertained, informed, and connected in some way. It may be wrong but if the first few lines or paragraphs don't hook me in some way, I will leave without even reading the rest. Also, I will notify you if I run into errors.
I'm good at...
I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
Favorite Genres
In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
Least Favorite Genres
I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
Favorite Item Types
Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
Least Favorite Item Types
pros, books
I will not review...
Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
Public Reviews
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was very well written and it was flawless. Might I add simply amazing. I have a son and right now he's only six. I completely understood everything in it. I only wish my son would keep that truthful innocence with him, but we all know different.
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527
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow. That was just really awesome. I never thought that I would ever read anything about a glass of milk talking to a little boy. That was just rerally creative. I absolutely loved it! *Bigsmile*
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528
Review of My Dead Mother  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow. I absolutely loved the effortless flow and rythym. It had great rhyme and I loved the topic.

I did see a couple of mistakes. In the line "Think I hear my mother call", you should have put 's, behind mother. Also, you had & in there. You should put the word and, not &. People know what & means of course, but no signs should be in a work.

All in all, great job!
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Review of Bat Excuses.  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed this poem. At first, it seemed like it was going to be a limerick. If you would like to make this into a limerick, I can totally help you out.
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Review of First drum set  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
That was amazing! I love how it was like I could actually hear the drums, as I read it. Just like in Edgar Allen Poe's, The Bells. Is there anything that type of poetryr is called?
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Review of "Hope Never Dies"  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like it. What an uplifting poem. I didn't catch anything wrong with this, at all. Good job.
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Review of The WDC Trip  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That was just amazing! I was here once before and I was completely overwhelmed. Unlike you, I registered that first time though. I had a few items up and was just so intimidated with the site, I gave up and left. About a year and a half later, I came back, determined not to become intimidated. What I didn't count on, was that I would become addicted. lol oh well, this is one addiction I don't want to get rid of.
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Review of life as i know it  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
That was very well done. I did not encounter one problem and it seemed effortless.
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534
Review of TOO COCKY BY HALF  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
That was pretty good. What made me want to read this in the first place, was the title. I had no idea that the article was going to be about a cockatiel. Great job!

Not to mention, quite informative. I have never wanted any bird before, but now I know what having a cocky bird is like.
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Review of A Good Friend  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
, play video games with or someone that you There needs to be a comma after with.

We were inseparable, we would hang out almost every day. I think it would sound better if there was an and, in stead of the comma.

The thing is. I knew that wasn't After is, it should be a comma, not period.

Until I find a way we won't see a lot of each other A comma needs to be after way.

Good job. Just mild punctuation problems.
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Review of Member Survey  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This is excellent. I love this survey. I don't think one thing was left out.
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537
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
I thought this was pretty good. I didn't care for the friends'll though. Thought it would sound better, as friends will, but that's just me.
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538
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That was absolutely fantastic. I usually feel like I'm witnessing something happen when I read a story. Oh, not with this one. In this one, it was like I was the father. Not just watching it all happen. Great work!
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Review of INTRODUCTIONS  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
The syllables were a bit off. The first two lines were consistent. The last line was supposed to have the same amount of syllables as the first two lines, but had more. And the middle two lines, the syllables were 5 and 6. Mabe just take out the word and, then the syllables will match up. Just a sugestion.

The second one wasa absolutely perfect. *Smile*
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540
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Love that poem. Of course seeing the title the other night, made me tink of mine.
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541
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was a great poem I thought. Great to read that is. The tone was kind of a downer, which is what you were going for. The last line was very sad. Only thing I saw wrong was the word comming, is actually supposed to just have one m.
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542
Review of Natures Sunrise  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
That's the first thing I chose to read by you. That was simply amazing! You made me use all my senses. I'm really glad that you will be my mentor. Now I must go read more of your things.
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