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1,842 Total Reviews Given
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I look to be entertained, informed, and connected in some way. It may be wrong but if the first few lines or paragraphs don't hook me in some way, I will leave without even reading the rest. Also, I will notify you if I run into errors.
I'm good at...
I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
Favorite Genres
In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
Least Favorite Genres
I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
Favorite Item Types
Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
Least Favorite Item Types
pros, books
I will not review...
Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello Robin,

These limericks were almost perfect. The rhymes in all of them were good, but most of the syllables were a little bit off. It's supposed to be aabba. (like 9,9,5,5,9.... sometimes you have 9,10, 5,6,9) and sneaked is not a word. The past tense of sneak, is snuck.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of TV Fans in Love  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, that was orgasmically good, if ya don't mind me saying. (Not that it brought me to orgasm, but that was a good adjective) I'm a huge tv fan. I really loved how you put shows in here. Some people may not know of some shows, like "It's Like, ya know" or Lucky Louie,(which I wish would come back) but not a big deal. If they don't know, then they missed out on good shows. This poem inspired me to create one like this about something like moview or music. It won't be as good, but itlll be fun trying.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Critic,

I chose the writing.com answer. I see everyone else did too. lol Actually, I don't find time. There's way too many things to do in the day. Sometimess night too.

Write on,
Jenny
My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review of Breathing For Two  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello Jack the Lion,

This was definitely an interesting take on relationships. You should capitalize all the i's and you should put some punctuation in. You need commas and one question mark, at least.

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Summer  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Pat,

I read your poem and this style, is one of my favorites. I didn't come across any grammatical errors. It was very joyful to read, as I pictured everything talked about. I wish summer didn't have to end. But sadly, it will be winter before we know it.

Write on!

Jenny


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Review of Just a Farmer  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Ben,


I started reading your poem, and while I was loving it, I thought I'd never come across a farmer and cow. Well, reaching the end, I finally saw it. Completely unexpected. I love the style of poem too. I like writing that kind of style, but personally, it's real difficult for me.


Write on!
Jenny

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Review of Oblivious  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Ellen,

I enjoyed your poem. The rhyme and rhythm was very good and I did not run across any obvious mistakes. The subject matter was good and now, whenever I hear a bird chirping in nature, I will wonder if they are oblivious to everything going on.

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of At two  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh, this was very cute. I could picture the things happening also.

By seeing the title, I couldn't tell if it was the time, or age. Well, it's both, I see. *Smile*

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is really incredible. It reminds me of my alphabet story. Check that out, if you get a chance. I'm not certain if I could ever do an alphabet poem, like you did. That just had to take a really long time to create. Great work!
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510
Review of Refining truth  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice little poem. I saw no mistakes, it appeared to be flawless. Great job.
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Review of Taking Chances  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I liked this, although I have no idea about the actual song that it parodies. I'm not one for Celine Dion, so I can't compare to her original lyrics.
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Review of MY GRANDCHILDREN  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
They are so cute. I love Landon's birthday. It would be great to have a friend, whose birthday was on April Fool's Day. I'd love playing jokes.
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513
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
That was great. I love those kinds of poems. I know that this was created for you, not by you, but I'm still giving it a little r & r.
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I voted I love it. This is the best site that I ever came across. Well, for writers anyway. I am so addicted to this place that I hardly go anywhere else online anymore.
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was fantastic. I love reading about indians. This was a great history lesson, along with great poem.

There was one mistake I encountered. "ggrandpaw" is actually supposed to be grandpa.
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Review of Gay Marriage  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I'm all for it. I'm not gay, by the way. I don't know if that matters to you, for this.
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Loved it. I was expecting to hear the poem. Like, the sounds of the track. I was glad when I read the poem, I did hear it. Great job.
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Review of The Butterfly  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.0)
That was good. I thought it would have possibly been even better, if it was a little longer. The flow was perfect, spelling flawless. Just my opinion that it would have been better longer.
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Review of Wayfarer  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a cool poem. I loved the flawless and effortlessly smooth rhytm and flow of it.
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520
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
I chose the romantic ones are unsafe option. Well, I mean that regarding any relationship. Relationships just suck. Nice question. I have lots of online friends. It's the world wide web. Way more kinds ofpeople to associate with.
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
That was excellent. Has your teacher seen this? I wrote a poem years ago, for the teacher that got me into poetry, but I found out when I went to see her, that she died. Hopefully yours got to see this. She or he would be proud.
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Review of ABC's for DSX  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was fantabulous! I was confused by the title, but got it when I read the last line, of course.
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Review of All Mine  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow, such a short poem for something that seemed real deep. Good job.
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Review of Yeast  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This was wierd, cool, tabboo, disgusting, and great all at the same time. Well done! It both made me cringe my nose and laugh at the same time. Not many things can do that.
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Review of In bleachers bare  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have never read any kind of sport poem before. I am not all that much for sports, but I felt like I had to read it, 'cause I've never seen a sport poem. Well done! It flowed smoothly and held my interest.
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