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I look to be entertained, informed, and connected in some way. It may be wrong but if the first few lines or paragraphs don't hook me in some way, I will leave without even reading the rest. Also, I will notify you if I run into errors.
I'm good at...
I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
Favorite Genres
In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
Least Favorite Genres
I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
Favorite Item Types
Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
Least Favorite Item Types
pros, books
I will not review...
Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.0)
Brittany,

What an interesting poem. I'm not exactly sure you captured the girls true feelings. UNless of course you are this girl and this is how you felt. I just felt that for a twenty first birthday, a one night stand may not be as big of a deal as this poem implies.

Now since she had her head laying on the bar afterwards, I guess it's safe to assume it happened at the bar? When a one night stand happens, the person doesn't know that it's a one night stand until later. Also, happening in the bar, makes it seem more like rape. These are only my opinions though.

Write on,


Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Kay,

I absolutely loved this. I loved how this long list had a bunch of humor. Humourus lists are always awesome. There's a lot of things about you, that I share the same traits. Like I'm sarcastic, stubborn and a night owl. Just to name a few.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Artie,

I just love to read about people. I feel like I really know who you are now. I liked how you made it colorful, when it was called for.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Harry,

This was a teriffic poem. It flowed nicely and had a good rhythm. The subject was also good and I couldn't agree more. I think that this war is completely senseless. I just can't wait until his term is over with. (which is soon)

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Jealousy  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Karyn,

This was great. The story was excellent and the band names fit in the story very nicely. I didn't run into any errors either. I hope you will enter again and please spread the word. *Smile*

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of Season of Sorrow  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Vivian,

This was incredible. I only wished I just read fiction. I started reading along, then I got sad when I saw that your 1 day old daughter died. (I had a really week frail premie on x mas of 01, born 15 weeks early, but he made it) Now, I can understand a tragedy happening to someone during one holiday season, but I can't believe the things you go through on the holidays. (I do believe ya though) I really hope that this holiday season will bring nothing but joy. I will be thinking of you around the holidays now.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello Mel,

This was good I thought. The only mistake I saw was this line "Please help me-What should I do." That should end in a question mark. That's the only help I have to offer for this though.

Write on,

Jenny


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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello missbiggs,

This was excellent. I have thought of some of these things. For character names, I like to make alphabet lists myself and see what I come up with. (not a lot though) Luckily, because of this place, I haven't suffered from writer's block. In fact, quite the opposite.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Carol,

This was awesome. Of course. Wonder what kind of bird that was. An eagle? *Laugh* This was just perfect. Loved the story. Bette sounds like quite a character.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Carol,

You did it again. I was really laughing out loud. I really would love to hang out with you and Steve, seeing what kinds of things would happen because of us. (me and you, as Steve was just a witness) *Laugh*

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Dreamer,

The good news is that, the subject of this seemed well thought out. The bad news is that, there were many gramatical errors.

I will just name a few of the mistakes. The first sentence, should have a question mark. The last sentence of the first paragraph is a complete run on. Maybe you should replace a few of the commas with periods. These are only suggestions of course.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of In the Dark  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello arakun,

This was a cool little halloween poem. The rhyme and rhythm were excellent. The only thing I had a very minor problem with was "said he", but that's not a great big deal. It's called poetic license and I've done that, myself. lol

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Stallion,

I voted other, because I wanted to pick more than One option. Maybe you should have an option "all of the above". I was just going to say mullet. That one is the most comon. I don't ever see anyone walking around with a beehive. I gaurantee that I would laugh if I did.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Philip,

Great piece, but I have a few suggestions. First, I think it should have some sort of rating. I also really think that you should explain why your siblings started calling you Phil, if your name was Clyde.

Grammatical errors....everytime, is supposed to be two seperate words. You have the word "comical". It is supposed to have two ms.

On a side note: I think it would be kind of funny if you had the middle name Dale.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Thea Marie,

I didn't vote, because my answer was not there. Personally, I look for items with things wrong with them, so I can offer my assistance and hope it helps. Since this is a poll, maybe you should put something like my option in there? If you don't want to put all options in there, then maybe it would be better as something other than a poll. Just my opinion.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Rush Week  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Jeff,

That was just simply great. I loved the story.

I have just a couple of suggestions. Give the main character a name, perhaps. Also there was this sentence: Frantically scraping at the earth with the trowel, he was now become frantic. I think that sounds kind of repetitive. Maybe change the adverb frantically, to some other adverb. Or maybe just change frantic. Then, I think this story will be absolutely perfect.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Robin's South  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Robin,

This was great to read. I've heard many of these. Some people here, in the midwest do some of those things. I must admit, I don't know the difference between a southerner, hick, redneck, and "being country" though. lol

Write on,
Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Hrry,

This was a very well thought out poem. I absolutely loved it and I completely agree.I also didn't encounter any errors.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello emerin,

This was just so awesome. I don't think I do these. At least, I don't do the majority of these. Typing this review out after reading this makes me paranoid. Thinking that, I'm doing things that are a no no. I do know that I am comma happy. I am trying not to be so comma happy but it's not so easy. I loved the humor in here too.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of hair  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Handle,

I haven't had real short hair, since I was 9. Now, my hair is down to my waist. Needs a trim, but I won't part with more than 6 inches. Nice poll.

Write on

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello A.K,

I am nuetral. I have heard all kinds of opinions though. I do hopee that after the election, all this stuff as in war, would miraculously end.

Jenny
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Review of Cats or Babies?  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello SolarFlare,

What a strange question. I'd like to know what made you ask this. Well, I chose cats. They are my favorite animal. They don't require as much attention or nurturing as babies. When they get sick of you (or vice versa), they go into the other room or something.

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello rowdymiss,

This was just fantastic! I happen to know a little four year old boy named Hayden. I was picturing him throughout the story, seeing his face and everything. What a bad deal for a little kid. hah but entertaining to read about.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of Ghosts  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello kings,

Very good. I liked the flow of this and of course the subject matter was cool.

There was a mistake in here. You said. "more frighted you become" Frighted isn't a word. Change that to frightened and it will be better.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of Wicked Thoughts  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Ben,

This definitely held my interest from the very beginning. It was quite funny and I just loved some of the things in here. I loved the entire fist paragraph. (that's the one, that hooked me in)

As far as grammatical errors, I saw none.

Write on,

Jenny
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