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Review of Mission girl  
Review by AXiLeA
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a wonderful poem.

Yes, sarcastic stuff can inspire good poetry too and this item is both fun and thought provoking.

It is a pity you have to explain the title for us in a note, I wish we could understand this whole paradox from a poem.

Anyway, this is simple, straghtforward and humourous.

Well done!
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Review of Sleepless  
Review by AXiLeA
Rated: E | (4.5)
It's easy to feel close and even identify with your character.

Each action is tangible, but also conveys spirituality. I like the changes that occur between the anxiety in the first lines and the serene ending.

It's one of my favourite poems on this site so far.

Feel free to peek into my work.
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Review of 100 contest ENTRY  
Review by AXiLeA
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well done, carefully constructed.

I like the fact that you play with the last minutes and very last thoughts, introducing the idea of counting to 100.

Successful attempt and contest entry.
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Review of Morning Madness  
Review by AXiLeA
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Good to hear you like reviews to be honest!
So many people don't, they only want reviewers to say "Oh, how beautiful", which is silly and useless.

Now, I like the idea, and I think that many of us can relate to description you are giving,

You choose short, basic sentences that contain striking images that are articulated separately.

This also provides your item with rhythm that fits the content.

As this option is clearly what characterizes your item, you could improve the rhythm after "Scream!", and before the quieter images of the end. For instance: "School started" doesn't sound as strong as it should, I think.

Good ideas as a whole.
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Review of GENDER FRAUD  
Review by AXiLeA
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I don't usually give such a high rating, but your words serve the purpose extremely well.
I'm amazed at the talent and grateful for your commitment.
I would certainly recommend this piece to anyone, so does it really need to be rated 18+?
All the best.
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