Good Afternoon,
The missing dog with the missing duck.
The combination to run away is not
reasonable so probably both drowned and died in the process.
Sad to note that this happened to
Max.
A sad story behind the poetry.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A love story behind the poetry.
So full of happy moments and sweet togetherness.
A very meaningful life and the good by reason is the love thst colors the world.
Yes..
Love Is The Next Step
Thank You for sharing this and for the worthwhile read.
Good Afternoon,
A funny way to differentiate fatigue from tired.
Tired for ne is the absence of energy to follow the necessary things to be done while fatigue is getting tired afterna lot of activities.
And we all experience this whiie we are still alive.
Good Morning,
A nicely written free verse poetry that speaks of the facts of life as in yesterday and today.
The poem has a good flow.
The chosen lines fit for the given title
JUST LOOK
Yes..just look and see.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Wtite on.
Good Morning,
A deeply emotional piece.
The story behind the poetry pierces deeply through my heart.
Sad and frustrating to know that such sad happenings jn life occurs.
Reading the given title I was thinking of a song with the same title.
Reading between the lines makes want to stand and shout to the person who caused you pain to stop ir now not later but now.
Very touching.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Morning,
A true to heart situation and it seems the world is tumbling down you and there is no one to turn to .
Then...the lines at the last stanza said it all...as Prayer is all powerful.
The poem is well written.
It is nicely presented too.
Yes .our faith is an affirmation of our human worth and continuity.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Best Regards
God Bless
Good Morning,
A poetry about faith...
A deep belief of the Most High.
With God in our lives and the faith we ive by is peaceful, hopeful faith in the goodness of our spirit.
Thank You for sharing
God's Pure Grace: A Positive Force
Thank You for the read too
Good Evening,
You are sharing a very important topic that is the number one issue also in our community as well as in our whole country and the. Whole world in General.
Yes, this is well written and nicely presented.
I hope and pray that my this can be given a solution soonest.
Write on
Good Evening,
A very meaningful free verse poetry with a good flow.
Very true ..we are blessed to have thoughts that keep flowing as we continue the journey called life.
The chosen lines fit for the given title
Tingling Thoughts
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A Halloween poetry. It has a good flow
and is nicely presented.
Some witches dancing and gather every year and have a wonderful time at the Halloween and the story goes on and on.
Thank You for sharing
The Witches Dance
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A love poetry that shares wonderful moments with a dearest one
Walking Under The Snow Covered Trees
A happy poetry that is well written and nicely presented.
Reading between the lines makes me conclude that you are greatly blessed.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon,
A Lovely poetry that expresses the true feelings of the heart.
The message is being addressed to someone very special in your life that makes you write this fascinating poetry with a beautiful title
You're My Life Song and as you are singing the song of your life the love between two hearts flourishes and stays stronger and livelier
A nicely written free verse poetry.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A three line poetry.
A HAIKU to me .
The given title is of great importance
The Value Of Kindness
Three precious lines that completed this work of art
I agree with each written line.
This shares great wisdom.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry with a good flow.
Descriptive of
The Macho Blue Tit
The poem has a wonderful rhythm and rhyme
The conclusion is intriguing to me.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art .
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A Live5 Poetry
A poem about two people united as one living in harmony with the world.
Two people loving and caring for each other
A blissful union.
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
It shsres a beautiful love story.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
An archaeologist story.
These treasure hunting enthusiasts has a great Discovery that surely makes them hunts for more.
The title is captivating as well as intriguing.
I believe this is written for a prompt
Thank You for sharing
As Old As Time
Write on
Good Morning,
Reading between the lines proves that True Love do exist.
A nicely written free verse poetry that expresses the true feelings of the heart.
The poem has a good flow.
It speaks of a mutual feeling.
Yes . True to the lyrics of a song
Love is real.
Thank You for sharing
Just A Touch
Write on.
Good Morning,
Lawyer... interesting title.
Not all can become a lawyer.
It is not easy to be one.
It takes a lot of years to study, a lot of books to read.and a qualifying examination to be one wherein only percentage passed and eventually become a lawyer.
A poem with 16 words and it completed this work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The title is beautiful as Every flower is truly beautiful.
Flower
I love flowers and I admire how you describe it in your very own poetic words that completed this work of art.
The message is philosophical and needs a clear understanding to get to know this flower.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Awesome way of explaining through poetic words that completed this work of art.
Yes..
Vocabulary
We need to be very good with this as a writer.
I admire the unique way of writing this poetry.
Very clever.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
A new life.
A new beginning with
Mr. Dog.
Nice name for a dog.
A short story that is well written and nicely presented.
It has a good flow and what makes it special is the presence or the character of Mr. Dog.
Fascinating.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
A short story with a sad title
A Bitter Betrayal
The advantage of the camera being installed in the area is one quick way of solving a crime committed.
Truly the title fits for the written lines that completed this short story.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry is sentimental and meaningful.
Two people spending quality time and that moments were considered the Sweet Memories that forever lives in the heart.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
Truly a wonderful read.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry with a philosophical message.
Based on a Biblical read.
It speaks of our temporary existence that emphasizes like a morning mist.
So we have to make the most of it.
Truthful and meaningful.
Thank You for sharing
Vanishing Vapor.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Very true .
I agree with this writing.
This generation has more time in their gadgets than spending time with the whole family and activities in living.
A completely different world where everything is easy with just a touch of the finger.
How can we stop progress on not to hamper the health.
That is something that needs to be taken action Asap.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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