Good Afternoon,
You do write wonderful poems with nice presentation and this is one of them.
Wonderful lines that completed this work of art.
The last two lines makes a great conclusion of this nice work of art.
Thank You for sharing
All Along My Own
Write on
Good Afternoon,
Wow..
Awesome..
This proves the Power of Love and what love can do to a person.
A wonderful story all the way.
Nicely written, nicely presented and truly impressive.
Diego and Isabella...are meant for each other.
Destiny brings them together.
I enjoy reading this.
Brilliant...
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Lamentations through a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
Yes..writing uour deepest feelings makes a great release of all the pain and struggles we face as we continue this journey called life.
We learn and grow from experiences that push us a little further.
Be resilient.
For every effort you put in, God rewards you with strength .
Life is pure adventure and the soonest we realize that, the soonest we will be able to treat life as an art.
Keep writing and keep posting
God Bless You Always.
Good Afternoon ,
A fascinating title as Home is always a Home Sweet Home to.me where one can enter and exit with a joyful hesrt.
This well written and nicely presented free verse poetry has an important philosophical message.
It is being addressed to a very special friend.
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
Wishes...
This poem speaks of more wishes as the wish was already said or told.
Yes. The chosen lines speaks with all honesty and truthfulness and I can only wish that may all your wishes come true.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Wtite on.
Good Afternoon
A heavy drama story behind the poetry.
I love the happy ending.
Yes..in life if choice or decision has to be made we need to remember that right is right.
Wrong is wrong..
So, why move wrongly...
In this free verse poetry, the main character faces a dilemma yet brilliant mind prevails and ovorpowered the mixed emotions with love.
Highly impressive work of art.
Thank You for sharing
Choice Unveiled..
Write on.
A beautiful name in this beautiful Acrostic poetry.
BRIANA DAWN
Each line speaks of good qualities of a person...full of admirable of this
living angel who is a blessing to herself and a great blessing to others.
A Very precious and special tribute.
Good Morning,
Nice title
The Wheel of Fortune
Nice poem with a good flow and the rhythm and rhyme is nice too
The lines at the first stanza are my favorite lines.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the.
worthwhile read
Good Morning
I love this very interesting and meaningful story with a great title
Test Question
I was also very excited to know the answer of Henry.
Yes...
Henry deserves an A..
Great story.
Great question.
Great Answer.
Thank You for the Great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very captivating title,
When The Two Roads in Life Becomes Three
Brilliant lines that completed this work of art.
Which Road I choose to take ?
Great question.
I wish to answer...
The road with the right path and with a light.
I enjoy reading this.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very touching free verse poetry.
It has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
I admire the wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Meaningful all the way as in the heart speaks.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A goodbye song especially for someone very close to the heart.
Sad and lonely.
The lyrics expresses a grieving heart.
A nicely written ballad with a lonely tune, I believe so.
It is so full of love and the presentation is great
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Morning,
The given title is very true,
Our Beliefs Still Highly Regarded
Each country as well as each one of us has a belief worth keeping and practicing.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
An acrostic poetry be that is well written and nicely presented
Thanksgiving
A grateful heart will always be blessed.
The poem has a good flow.
" May we all come together for Peace Sake."
My favorite line and an admirable line.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A detective story about solving a crime.
The story has a good flow and is well written as well as nicely presented.
With the concrete evidence surely they can give a solution to fhis puzzle soonest.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Yes..it is truly an inspiring story.
It shares a great wisdom about winning in life as in
The quitter never wins
The winner never quits.
The story has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
My suggestion is about the title is
Please change the word
insperational to
inspirational
The story is a great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written free verse poetry about life and all its essence that includes all the questions about it.
Well, everyday is a sequel to a purposeful life. New challenges awaits. Each day is also a call time for our strength to affirm life which is worth living inspite of everything.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
An inspiring piece.
Captivating title
Weary Spirit
The title fits for the written lines.
The last two lines are my favorite lines. Thry show positiveness and makes a wonderful conclusion of this meaningful work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Morning,
You are so blessed to have these four seasons in your country.
Winter, Summer Fall, Spring...
You described it in your own nice and wonderful way
My suggestion in this work...
Please change u to the word...You
I never experience four seasons as I live in the tropical Philippines.
We have Wet and Dry Season.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Morning
A free verse poetry that is well written and nicely presented.
Reading the given title, I wonder what it means by the letter E
Spring Without The Letter E
Reading between the lines, what is more important is that you wanted to stay inspired by a smiling girl walking your way.
Great moments.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
An Essay or a Prose.
It speaks about dinosaurs , love, kiss, hope and many more.
The message is philisophical in its own unique and poetic way.
A precious and valuable talent to write.
Intriguing title.
Thank You for sharing
The Sky Is Pig Clear
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented
You Come Too Late
The lines are meanihgful and strong.
It expresses such special strength to stand bravely and courageously to win in life.
The poem has a good flow.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Yes..it is great to write about yourself
A biographical Essay will be nice wherein you can sum up everythiny about you in paragraphs.
Surely it will be an interesting genre to read.
I admire this short poem that is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing..
and for the read.
.
Good Afternoon,
Yes.. reading between the lines makes me conclude that in life thee are many
If Only
Yes . It is too late to realize the importance of this particular person and we can only wish these two words.
A sad reality.
Thank You for sharing
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A nicely written free verse poetry with an interesting title
The End Of The Day
The written lines fit for the given title.
Yes.At the end of the day, let me whisper Dear Lord...
Thank You for Everything.
Amen
Truly a nice Read.
Write on.
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