Good Morning,
A song that expresses a very courageous heart and spirit.
This is well written and nicely presented.
The lyrics give a message of dtrength and a great sense of belonging.
Sjng your song... Hear my song...
Nice conclusion to let the Music goes on and on.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written free verse poetry that sounds like a nice song to me.
A poem that has connectedness with the novel that you wrote
Wow..
A very talented author.
The written Videography that gives a detailed information adds more meaning into this work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
This is a deeply emotional piece.
The story behind this nicely written free verse poetry is sad in its own way.
The message addressed to someone is philosophical.
My suggestion in this writing..
Minimal only
" When you get your ears pieced...
Please change the word piece to
pierced
Thank You for sharing and for the
read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Perfectly Said.
I agree with You.
This is an honest to goodness opinion and writing.
No pretentions.
This is a very important topic and you explained it so well.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
I wish everyone can read this as it shares great wisdom.
Good Morning,
A question..A Love Poetry.
The story behind the poetry is intriguing as in expressing a feeling of you are so near yet so far and vice versa.
Yet the question as the title remains
Where Are You ?
A nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Morning,
A unique and nicely written free verse poetry in a biographical as well as documentary form. It is a great part if history that you are sharing here as you write about an important person named
Willie
A wonderful artistic and awesome writing.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that expresses great longings to someone very special in your life as being written through the lines.
This is nicely presented all the way with wonderful rhtyhm and rhyme.
Thank You for sharing
In This White Wave
Thank You for the worthwhile read too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
One of the four seasons in your country that you describe here through poetic words and what is all about it
Summertime Blues
We are also having this summertime heat here in our country the Philippines.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
Write on
Good Morning
A horror story like a horror movie.
Very convincing.
Full of suspense and the thrilling moments.
The story has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
Sad and horrible.
Thank You for sharing
The Guy from The Blind Date
Thank You for the read too
Write on.
Good Evening,
The story behind this Essay speaks of the truth. I have many relatives who are my now living abroad and considered their stay as a dream come true.
If you have family and friends nearby then missing home is not that difficult then.
Thank You for sharing
To Live Abroad
Write on.
Good Evening,
A very interesting letter addressed to the agent that has a connectedness with the book or novel that you are writing .
Hope that the publication of your novel will go on smoothly without BB any hassle at all
Good luck and God bless.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very beautiful story about two brothers Sam and Tommy and the great importance of
The Shirt
I admire their very close relationship highlighted with the cleaning of the T-shirt and all turned out well.
The story is full of love and care.
Wonderful as it is.
A great read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
This is one of the most beautiful and highly impressive writings in this Awesome Community.
I love it all the way...from the start to the very end.
Precious and brilliant words that formed meaningful lines thst completed this
The Journey..
Reading between the lines as it has connectedness with my life and all its essence
I may say,...
The vision is clear.
I am enjoying my journey.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A story that is well written and nicely presented.
It expresses a very caring and loving heart and soul.
I am sorrry for Efren and my heart cries for him.
In life, there are so many less fortunate like Efren and it is so sad that instead of moving for the right actions he turned into sniffing chemicals that can lead to more destructive results.
Yes. This is a sad reality.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A great combination of nature's beauty and bounty and here is a wonderful poetry.
The title is captivating
24- Karat Carrots of Merit
Meaning a great achievement
The two last lines makes me hungry as it also serves as a great conclusion of this nicely written free verse poetry.
Thank You for sharing
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very captivating title in of an Essay
The Value Of Time
Very true.
Everything that is being written here speaks of the truth.
It speaks of time and it's great importance.
A time lost can never be regained and Time is powerful by itself.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The title ecpresses power and strength.
GOD
Or The Most High
I admire the chosen lines that completed this work of art.
It is well written and nicely presented.
A poem that speaks of the Creator , who slso made the heaven , earth and the sea and who created me.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning
A very interesting question that needs an interesting answer
What Is Love ?
The poem is deeply emotional snd seeking for an answer..
I can answer it through a lyrics of a song...
Love is a many splendored thing...
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
It expresses the true feelings of the heart.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A meaningful poem addressed to the Most High. A poem, a prayer, a conversation with the Lord..to express the happenings of the day, the life's journey as a psrent and all the essence of life that go along the way.
Precious and Sacred.
Thank You for sharing
The Divine Art of Parenting
Write on.
Good Morning,
This is a wonderful poem.
It is well written and nicely presented.
I admire the chosen lines that completed this meaningful work of art.
" When my whole being bows
In gratitude to the Sublime Presence "
My favorite two lines in this wonderful work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that expresses the Most Powerful Hand that makes everything.
A poem that shsres knowledge and wisdom on how powerful our Creator is.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A Haiku poetry about
Summertime.
Concise, Nice and wise.
I love the three lines that completed this work of art.
Very special in its own way
Fascinating happening in the
Summer sunshine.
Thank You for sharing your talent and for the worthwhile read.
Good Afternoon,
The poem that tells a secret.
A beautiful secret of aa child.
The secret of the
Late Night
A secret that makes the heart smile and happiness filled the whole being
Playing with the teddy bear.
WOW
Awesome
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
HHahaha
The card reading ?
Possibly it tell lies as you find
The Reading Boring
Hahahs
Possibly the message be changed into
You win a billion dollars in the lottery
Yet the problem.is
You did not buy a ticket
So how can you win...
Oh. So boring...
Hahaha
I enjoy reading this.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A deeply emotional piece that is well written and nicely presented.
Very touching and meaningful lines that completed this free verse poetry with a good flow.
Truly it is sad to be alone and blue.
The last line
Alone I rise.
It expresses a great hope for a brighter tomorrow.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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