Good Afternoon,
The question of an innocent Rosy is a touching one that makes the day of tge foolish hearts seek for the real answer.
April 1st they say is a Fool's day
I wonder who started it. So when a friend of mine told me that his birthday is April 1 , I told him fo not tell anyone but say its April 21..we both laughed and our laughters makes us innocent children again. So full of fool Thoughts.
Back to my review.
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Wonderful poem that is descriptive of the Blue Hour..
The Poem is well written and nicely presented.
I admire the rhythm and rhyme.
The lovely picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
The blue hour that relaxes the moving spirit
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning.
A loving tribute to your dearest Grandmother.
A poem full of love,. honor and respect.
The last two lines are most meaningful as the memories linger.
I am happy for you to have a precious bonding time with your grandma..
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Good Afternoon,
A lovely poem that brightens the day.
Its positive message is inspiring
The last line makes it more lovely.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
It speaks of life and nature and many more.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon,
This is fun to read.
Truly amusing.
Instant marriage..
Hahaha
I love the sense of humor and how the story goes well all along
The character of Carly makes the story so lovable.
Hahaha
I enjoy reading this.
Thank You for sharing
The Proposal
Write on
Good Morning,
I love the given title
Listen
Yes..There is always a right time for everything and this precious time is for us to listen and to enjoy life as we listen to each sound of enormous beauty.
This is how I understand this beautiful poetry.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A beautiful Love Poetry.
This is well written and nicely presented.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
The chosen words are addressed to a very special person in your life that you delicate this adorably adorable work of art.
Highly impressive all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Another well written and nicely presented free verse poetry by a great poet.
Another sports or game that many people loves to watch live or in television shows.
Horse Racing...
Not all can do this kind of sports hut to those who do are truly physically and mentally fit to be comfortable with this big and energetic animals.
The lines fit for the given title.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Morning,
A beautiful and inspiring story.
Written for a prompt and you did it so well.
I admire the character of Stuart.
A role model.
Hardworking and determined to win in life.
The story is well written and nicely presented.
Highly admirable.
It shares great wisdom too that matters a lot
What your mind conceive you can achieve.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
WOW..
Three words with BIG Impact.
I admire this well written and nicely presented Essay with a very captivating and meaningful title
The Weight Of Three Words
Your detailed and clear explanation gives me more understanding and appreciation of its importance.
As in Perfectly Said.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A short story that tells it all.
I admire the talent, the creativeness and the short story itself
Briliant mind.
The few words that formed into two sentences perfectly telling a story is truly highly impressive.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read
Good Morning,
A nice way to change for the best of reason.
I admire each line that completed this Essay.
I love the given title.
Writing Dot Com
A community that I feel I am happily belong.
Yes..
I agree with the last line that makes a great conclusion.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The ebb and flow of life is being expressed here in a meaningful title of this nicely written and nicely presented work if art
Still
The written lines fit for the given title.
Everything is still but still moving.
The paradox of life.
Thank You for the read.
Write on
Good Evening,
Yes..this kind of flood truly makes me mad too
Flood gave me and my family terrible experiences too
Reading between the lines made me understand fully thr difficult situation.
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon
AMEN to that.
I love this all the way.
In my life, I believe that far away in the sunshine are my highest aspirations. I may not reach them but I can look up and see their beauty, believe in them And try to follow where they lead and with God in my life I can never ever be guided wrongly.
Thank You for sharing and for the opportunity for me to share my
thoughts.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
Yes.
Please listen to your doctor.
Be gentle with yourself.
Keep your faith.
Keep it with GOD.
There are plenty of difficult obstacles. Do not allow yourself to be one of them
Rest your body to serve your spirit.
All is well and all will be well.
Write on.
God Bless.
Good Afternoon,
The title is captivating as I am not famiiar with it
Kakistocracy
Reading between the lines makes me understand fully the meaning of the be word... with complete descriptions of the men that formed this kind of
government.
A kind of government that I do not wish to prosper be where ever they may be.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A Love poetry.
This is well written and nicely presented.
I admire each line that gives importance of this word
Love.
My suggestion in this piece::
The word begger..
Please change it to beggar.
In life, you may lost everything but as long as there is Love in your heart then Love makes a way to make your life most meaningful and fulfilling.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon,
A very touching and meaningful poetry based on the life of a soldier himself who survived as he served the Motherland.
As he salutes the soldier that he sees
I wish to Salute to him for the services rendeered to his country and his countrymen .
A beautiful poem all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Good Afternoon
Oh..
I'm ready now..
The story with a twist and turn at the end.
I was full of excitement reading the story with great expectations as to look forward of a great time together on their 60 th wedding anniversary.
Then, the heart attack !
Brilliant author..
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A Love Poetry that is well written and nicely presented.
I admire the chosen lines that completed this work of art.
This line is intriguing to me :
You are the beauty in the world much too cruel ..
I wonder why cruelty was mentioned here..
Possibly that is what intense love means.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A great Discovery. Yet..there are many be questions that.need concrete answers.
A very interesting and intriguing Alien Story.
Olaf City
A place that might give them the answers they need.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning..
Fascinating
Two Storms
A poetry of Love and Romance written from the heart.
So full of life magnetized by two Storms.
The poem is well written and nicely presented with a philosophical message.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
I love this poetry that is written with all candidness and sincereness.
I Want To Be Somewhere
Yes.. there is always a special place somewhere where one can relax the body to serve the spirit
The written lines fit for the given title.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Interesting place that completed this well written poetry.
The product of imagination and Yes.. this happens that we wish to go and see places as a form of break from the daily stressful activities.
I agree with the last line.
I go there now...
Not later, not tomorrow
But Now.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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