THis had something for both the author of short fiction and the poet in us. It was a well written story. The poem had a good flow the two together told a wonderful story.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This is well written. The paragraphs kept constant verb tense. THis is a skill that I have a problem with. I enjoyed the read and the descriptive words that you used to bring your reader into your vivid story.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This is a very well told story in a poem form. I was wondering if you could tell me the form of portry that you used? I love the descriptive word use that you chose.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This is well written. The paragraphs are well formed. The flow created a smooth and enjoyable. You introduced the characters and the events in such a manner that the reader feels she/he was there.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
Welcome to the writing.com family. I hope that you are finding us a helpful group of people. I have had a lot of support here, and it is a place that I feel comfrontable even more so than with those face to face at times.
You poem is nice. I like the words that you chose to discribe the attactment here. I can not help but think about my son who had no invisable imagination friend. He made friends with his shadow. He named his gray friend Pusher. He would say that Pusher would push him as my son would pretent to stumble. I love the thought.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
Welcome to the writing.com family. I have made a lot of friends here, and have been helped just by being able to vent. As you are on here longer the more you learn of support from people that has never laid their eyes on you. That being said, I love you play. I don't really know how to review a play due to the different format than a story or poem, but I do like the story. I was taken into your work with you well chosen words.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
Welcome to this site. Writing.com is a family to me. I am glad to have found your item. This is a good story. I did not find mistakes because I have found the story one that kept my attention to it instead of looking for mistakes.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
I would like to review, but due to the size and the font I am unable to. I found this in a news letter. It has an excert posted there. By the post, I can say that I feel that what I had read was well written.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This is a well written story in poem form. I did not find any mistakes. The message or story was one that many can relate with. The flow made a smooth read. I found this one of my favorite items.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This is a wonder poem. It is written in a format that I admire, and I have to learn. I love that you are captured the message as though you were speaking to the reader. THis is a well written peom with an enjoyable read.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
I rated this a five because I found the message wonderful. I liked they lanturne shape of each stance. And the flow was easy and made for a smooth read. I really wish that I could learn different ways or types of poetry.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
I do wish that I could learn the different names of the types of poems. I just know that this is one of my favorite ones. I love to write poems in this format and in the format of abab abab. I have problems creating sylibols in each line. You did not seem to have such a problem.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This is well written. It has created an image of the night sky that is hard to do with such few words. I was taken into the relaxing evning with your well chosen words. I love star gazing.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
I love this idea. I can not promice to enter. I wish that I could write erotica with the passion that it takes to win this kind of contest. I do need to develope this skill to help complete my range of writing. I intend to come back and read the entries and rate them.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
I will have to get back to this port to read more of this story. The introduction is interesting and catches my attention making me want to read chapter through chapter.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
I love the story behind the poetry. This is a great flowing peice. The end takes me by surprise when the grandmother is said to have lied about loving grandfather.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
The story had a great flow. The paragraphs were well formated. Characters were well developed and introduced. The events rolled well with the pace of the stories. I like the use of dialog. I have problems placing min in just the right places.
Thank you for entering my contest. I thought this was funny even with a head ache. I like that it is written in poetry format, and about the problems fighting grammar rules. It tells the story well about the drama of trying to get published.
This was fun. I would like to come back and read it a couple times a month. I think that it would be fun to see how it changes the story all together. I entered my three words, and found this to be fun.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This is a wonderful. It was well written, and the emotions in it were easily felt. I have times that I must do things over and over by habbit due to a compulsion. The paragraphs are developed without mistakes and flow well.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
The story is great. The flow was perfect. I find that you had wonderful use of dialog that helped the story line make since and flow smooth. The descriptions were written well, and the characters were introduced in such a way that we feel that we got to know them.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
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