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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I hope that I posted the way that the page calls for. I had fun doing this, and find the messages interesting.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Mystery Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida
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502
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is well written. The paragraphs are well formed. The flow created a smooth and enjoyable. You introduced the characters and the events in such a manner that the reader feels she/he was there.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

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Ida


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503
Review of Shadow  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to the writing.com family. I hope that you are finding us a helpful group of people. I have had a lot of support here, and it is a place that I feel comfrontable even more so than with those face to face at times.

You poem is nice. I like the words that you chose to discribe the attactment here. I can not help but think about my son who had no invisable imagination friend. He made friends with his shadow. He named his gray friend Pusher. He would say that Pusher would push him as my son would pretent to stumble. I love the thought.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

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Ida


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504
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Welcome to the writing.com family. I have made a lot of friends here, and have been helped just by being able to vent. As you are on here longer the more you learn of support from people that has never laid their eyes on you. That being said, I love you play. I don't really know how to review a play due to the different format than a story or poem, but I do like the story. I was taken into your work with you well chosen words.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Noticing Newbies Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.
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Ida


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505
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome to this site. Writing.com is a family to me. I am glad to have found your item. This is a good story. I did not find mistakes because I have found the story one that kept my attention to it instead of looking for mistakes.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Noticing Newbies Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida


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506
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I would like to review, but due to the size and the font I am unable to. I found this in a news letter. It has an excert posted there. By the post, I can say that I feel that what I had read was well written.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Noticing Newbies Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida


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507
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a well written story in poem form. I did not find any mistakes. The message or story was one that many can relate with. The flow made a smooth read. I found this one of my favorite items.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Poetry Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida


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508
Review of Acquiescence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a wonder poem. It is written in a format that I admire, and I have to learn. I love that you are captured the message as though you were speaking to the reader. THis is a well written peom with an enjoyable read.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Poetry Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida


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509
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I think that this is a very good haiku. It painted a picture of a night scene in an open field surrounded by the forest. I find peace in the words, and I think that it was a great little read.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Poetry Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida


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Review of Drum circle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I rated this a five because I found the message wonderful. I liked they lanturne shape of each stance. And the flow was easy and made for a smooth read. I really wish that I could learn different ways or types of poetry.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Poetry Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida


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Review of STARS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is well written. It has created an image of the night sky that is hard to do with such few words. I was taken into the relaxing evning with your well chosen words. I love star gazing.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Poetry Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida


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512
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love this idea. I can not promice to enter. I wish that I could write erotica with the passion that it takes to win this kind of contest. I do need to develope this skill to help complete my range of writing. I intend to come back and read the entries and rate them.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Romance/Love Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I will have to get back to this port to read more of this story. The introduction is interesting and catches my attention making me want to read chapter through chapter.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Romance/Love Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida


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Review of Dried Flowers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I love the story behind the poetry. This is a great flowing peice. The end takes me by surprise when the grandmother is said to have lied about loving grandfather.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Romance/Love Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida


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515
Review of The Color of Jade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The story had a great flow. The paragraphs were well formated. Characters were well developed and introduced. The events rolled well with the pace of the stories. I like the use of dialog. I have problems placing min in just the right places.

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IDa


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516
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love the story. I like that it is based on a true story. I feel that this is well flowing. I enjoyed this read.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Romance/Love Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida


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Review of Is You?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you for entering my contest. I thought this was funny even with a head ache. I like that it is written in poetry format, and about the problems fighting grammar rules. It tells the story well about the drama of trying to get published.

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Ida


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Review of My Love  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
THis is a very emotional poem. The flow was smooth. The stanz are seperated so that it is easy to read. I loved the story behing the poem.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Romance/Love Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida


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519
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was fun. I would like to come back and read it a couple times a month. I think that it would be fun to see how it changes the story all together. I entered my three words, and found this to be fun.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Short Stories Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida
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Review of To Do List  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a wonderful. It was well written, and the emotions in it were easily felt. I have times that I must do things over and over by habbit due to a compulsion. The paragraphs are developed without mistakes and flow well.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Short Stories Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida


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Review of Sassenach  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
The story is great. The flow was perfect. I find that you had wonderful use of dialog that helped the story line make since and flow smooth. The descriptions were written well, and the characters were introduced in such a way that we feel that we got to know them.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

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Ida


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522
Review of I wanna fly  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is beautifully written. I would like the font to be bigger, other than that this was a great read. I loved the visionary descriptions you used. The story was fun and I think that my son will love this so much.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Spiritual Newsletter (February 19, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida


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Review of INTO THE BONEYARD  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a great story. The paragraphs are well formed. I was taken into the story by your imagery. I really found that your dialoghelps the flow move smooth well. I have a problem with dialog from time to time so I notice good dialog easily. I think that this is a well written story that made an enjoyable read.

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Ida


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Review of Birth  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
If I am not mistaken, I feel anger in these words. The poem is well written with a smooth flow. I enjoyed the emotions in teh item. The only thing is that you give me a larger font. However, the line spacing made it so much easier to read the smaller font.

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Ida


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525
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I think this is a very interesting. The flow was smooth. and the beat was easy to read. The stanz flow off the eyes. I did not find any mistakes. I just would suggest that you use a larger font to make it easier on the eyes. The message was on that a lot of us can relate to.

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Ida


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