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Review of I Saw a Dragon  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderful story in a poem format. I love this my husband out of law loves dragons. He collects all kinds of dragon pictures and figurines. This was a smooth read, and the rhyme was good. I think this is one of my favorite that I have read about the dragon.

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IDa


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is beautiful. I think that memories of being together are what life and love are made of. My ideal valentine would be to snuggle and watch a movie., any movie. I love just being held.

That being said, you poem has as smooth flow. The message is well received.

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the poem. The flow was smooth. THe rhyme was such that it created an easy read. This I find more than true. I like the introduction with advice. I think that this is well written, and I love the little self reflection on how the flowers makes the giver look at his wife's work.

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful rhyme. I love the story. It made me smile. I live in the sunny Sarasota Florida. Here we don't really know when the groundhog sees his shadow. I love this because it gave the character that I have know since childhood a personality.

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Review of The Gift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good of a well written third point of view story. The paragraphs were well formed. I found no spelling errors or grammar. This is a good story that kept my attention. I like the comparison of living to existion. I think that the statemtn is one that needs to be though about.

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Short Stories: Finding Your Passion
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Review of Routine  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
First I want to welcome you to the Writing.com family. I see that you haven't been on here long. First thing that I can suggest for those of us that have a hard time reading is that you create a larger font and put a line between paragraphs.

Speaking of paragraphs you have created well formated sentences. The flow was smooth.

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Review of Too  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have to rate this a five. I know that we have all been there. Not only other people judging us but we have a bad habbit of doing the same. I like how the poem ends even though it is a type of judging. I am glad that you covered a subject that a lot of us have experienced from childhood.

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IDa


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I found this in a newsletter:

Spiritual: February 12, 2013 Issue [#5507]

The emotion was strong. The characters were interesting. Paragraphs were well written. I loved reading about found treasures so to speek. I have found so many things at my mom's that could supply me with memories for years.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was an interesting story. The dialog worked well with the message in the story. The characters were introducted well to us. I like the conversation with Annie. She seemed to be the anchor in this story. She knew what to say, and she did so in a way that was just conversation.

I found you story in the newsletter Spiritual: February 12, 2013 Issue [#5507]

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IDa


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
I know how hard it is to start. Shoot I am still starting out. I had one book published by Publish America, and I still have no sales. Right now I am having a problem with even doing a contest called Please Make Me Laugh. NO one seems interested. This story really touched the struggling writer inside.

I found this item in the news letter Spiritual: February 12, 2013 Issue [#5507]

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Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The characters were well introduced. Alex was a surprise to me. The story is frightening. To think about someone hating you so much or just having a reality where money is more important than your own mother. I do love the calm deminer (forgive my spelling). I'd like to think she did find paece, and that we can too.

I found this item at Spiritual: February 12, 2013 Issue [#5507]

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Ida


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Review of Remediation  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is well written. You have a great a smooth flow even with dialog. This carries a good message. The paragraphs were well formed. The characters were relatable, and the events were easily imagined from your description. I enjoyed this read. I found this in a newsletter:

Spiritual: February 12, 2013 Issue [#5507]

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IDa


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Review of My Place  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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This has a nice rhyme. The flow was smooth, and the story line was excellent. I could see (in my eyes) a child brought over here. They are unable to see if they are better off here. All they know is that this is not home. They miss their friends and family.

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IDa


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Find that this is the hardest kind of poem to write for me. That being said, I admire those who have a talent for writing such poems. Here is snapping to you. I would love to go to a performance reading. I have never been. I think that this has a smooth flow.

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Ida

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Rated: E | (4.0)
I found this to be informative. I am glad that you have become a part of the writing.com family. The only problems that I picked up on are those that are just issues for those of us who have problems reading. I think that you should double space between the paragraphs.

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Ida

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a wonderful peice. I found a place where you did not capitalize an I, but other than that I did not see any errors. I think that the story is hard to put into such a few words. I like the futurelistic storyline. I am happy to have found this in the newbie page.

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Ida

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
THis is a good play. The Subject and the characters were all well described and formed. I think that what I like the most is that you have great stage direction. I find this skill hard when writting a play. You make the task seem effortless. I have taken a class called One Act Play. I loved the class.

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Ida

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This has caught my attention. The introduction has my mind wanting more. I see that you are new to Writing.com family. I am happy to have you joining us here. Your paragraphs were well formed. You kept the same verb tense throughout the introduction. I will be back around to read more.

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Ida

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is being reviewed because I found it in my contest. I feel that this is a wonderful start to my contest. The flow was smooth. The rhyme was excellent. And most of all, you made me smile. This is a funny story written in poem. I always love that. A read in rhyme is so much fun.

Thank you for entering my contest.
Ida


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Review of Who Am I?  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love this item. I think that this is something that I would like to discuss in person to person email. I am forty four, and it nice to meet you. I am happy to read survival in your words. I want to ask you questions about your research of witchcraft.


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
I found this an interesting story. I did not know that withness was a word. I enjoyed the story in such a good story in such a few words. I like that this is showing a testomny. I really think that this is well put together with formated paragraphs.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Happy birthday. I know that you have been on here for two years now. I hope that you have found it as a family. This review is to say happy birthday. I love the message that you have offered for us to read. I know that writing and drawing are the loves of my love of my life.

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Ida


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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is a wonderful piece. I loved the poem and the flow. I am one of those who need to remember the message that you have shared with us. I know that I really need it sometimes. Thank you for the inspiration to keep our chins up.

I found this in a news letter.
"Spiritual Newsletter (February 5, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida


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Review of Fleeting  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I enjoyed this read. I love the descriptive wording of all the things in the story. YOu were able to share with me the decription of the atmosphere, the emotions, the family, and the flow. I found this an easy read that was able to bring me into the family dinner.

I found this in a news letter:
"Short Stories Newsletter (February 5, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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IDa


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Review of A Fish Tale  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was so sad. I find it in the same catagory as the Titantic. I enjoyed the read. I really found the flow of these well formed paragraphs. THe read was smooth. The story line was a true tear jerking experience. I felt the emotions that you creativly convey to your reader.

I found this in a news letter.

"Short Stories Newsletter (February 5, 2013)" Open in new Window.

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Ida


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