Very nice. It had that arbitrary, dreamlike, fairytale feel. If it hadn't been a fairy tale I would be objecting strongly to the lack of motivation, lol, but the genre works that way.
I especially liked the part where the vamp princess is revealed to be so very much smaller than the victim princess; that was smoothly done. I felt the story overall took too long to tell, but that was the only thing.
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