I like this drawing because it is good. It shows a group of friends and since it appears to be done in charcoal, it is reall outstanding. The artist shows creativity in the workmanship. Keep up the good work.
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Interesting article about being different. Of course being different means life is not boring. I wouldn't want to be the same as everybody else. The story is well written and interesting. Good job.
Keep up the good work.
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This is a well written testament to faith about a girl named Jasmine who really had (all odds against her) a rocky start in this world. The way it was presented made it interesting and entertaining and also informative. Good job.
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This writing has asked for a "plea for prayers." Because his mother has kidney failure. (This reviewer has kidney failure and has been on dialysis for 4 years, so if you have a moment then take the time to say a prayer for spidey's Mom.
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This is a well written piece of work, a tribute, if you will, to a "soulmate." The writer spent a little time in setting up the complete description of the writer's complete devotion to this "soulmate." Well done and interesting in the creative approach the writer used.
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Excellent! I'll bet their are a lot of people with "Christmas boxes," and in them one will find many small treasures. This was a creative approach to what may seem like a inconsequential subject but is actually a storeplace for untold treasures and memories. Well done.
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This was an intriguing piece of work for me. However, this part seemed to stand out:
Yet if ashes go back to ashes, my instant goes not back to me
and is lost forever'
open my arms, and let streams of light
confuse you
and let my soul plunge in it - yet you fear..
And this part summed up the piece:
sweet was the dream, sweet was the desire, yet i did not love you enough
Good job, well done.
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Now this is one great - looking photograph. Two very ahppy subjects who are some one's "pride and joy."
The photo is sharp and in focus. And depicts two happy kids. And when I first viewed this shot it seemed to "Jump at me." It is what one would call a striking photograph.
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This is a very articulate poem about love that shows much emotion. Note to writer: I review and either like what I read or don't like it. I like this. Unfortunately, I don't know how to write poetry, so can't make any changes. But for me it reads good. Keep writing.
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There is truth in this poem especially these lines: We all live in our jar of secrets
Ajar--no one,no one can shake it Well written and entertaining this is a good piece of writing. Writer exhibits creativeness.
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This is an interesting article on rank. And this statement really came home to me: It is constantly preached to us that we should have a questioning attitude. However, in reality, if we have a questioning attitude we are suppressed, counseled, or reprimanded in some way.
This statement is a profound statement.
And so true.
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A well written verse about being alone. Or one who is alone due to circumstances beyond their control.
Its almost as if the writer is writing about the "zombie" state. If so, then they truely are alone. Well done.
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This is a nice little poem. Light hearted and interesting. And the writer spruced it up a little by changing the colors in the text several times. And this is the first one I've run into like that. Good job. Write on.
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This writer shows a depth pf knowledge when comparing love and death. Not many writers take on that concept and do it well, but in this case it is done well and the writer exhibits the creative qualities of a poet.
This is an emotional pleas to Santa for a heart for a boy's mother. Well done and concieved. Creativeness displayed in the message. I liked this poem because of its content. This writer exhibits qualities of a poet. Good job.
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This is a well written story that although is well done I think would be better portrayed as a short story. (personal opinion)
Unfortunately it depicts the low level teenagers can reach. This is a tragic story. Even if this reviewer did not like dogs (I do like dogs) it would be a cruel and tragic story.
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While what is written is not nicely, this writer needs to finish "trains of thought." Actually it woulod be nice to see the writer do just one story, start to finish.
In the first story, the writer needs to pay attention to detail. Writer mis-used writing.com tags and they apeared in the story.
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A few mis spelled words but other than that it looks okay. Well written and entertaining and the situation plot in this one is as real to life as it gets. Typical mom/daughter relationship where more understnading is needed and the writer did a good job of portraying this.
This is a well written and interesting story that has a moral message. I like stories that are not only entertaining but also teach a lesson. The write uses creativity to present this story in this fashion. I enjoyed reading it.
This was an excellent story, well written, entertaining and interesting. I actually got to the very last line before I got it and that is what made it so good. It held my full attention all the way to the end. Very good job. Keep writing.
Yes, this is a bit different. I found it interesting the way you wove the history of the area into the story. I don't know if the history is fact or fiction but it was still well written and interesting. Aslo your characters were well developed and interesting. Keep up the good work.
I think the writer of this survey had a good idea. It will enable people within the group to get to know one another and to understand each other alot better. I would ber interested in seeing the results from everybody that participates in this survey.
This is a vividly written story about drunk driving and the tragic results of someone dying. In this case it is the love of the driver which really does cause the driver to be in a private hell. This poem is well written and interesting. Writer exhibits creative use of words.
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