This is a good chapter. Girl meets boy, they go out on a date, thye eat, go see Shrek 2, (One of my favorite movies) then go back home and boy gets a surprise kiss. The writer has written an introduction, a plot and an ending. Nice job.
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A wonderful story written in prose about an ugly
Christmas tree. This was a nice little story with the moral, I guess, that even ugly trees can look beautiful wearing Christmas decorations. Well written and entertaining. This was a good job.
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This narrative about a long trip does make a statement. "We were late." I always say better late than never. This true account of the trip from Texas to Canada was well written and interesting. Thank you for sharing this with this community.
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Although this is short, it is well written and entertaining as it tells of a mother's love for her children. It is done so very well. It is interesting that the mother wanted twins and got them. I liked the names also. Good job. Keep writing.
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My attention ws drawn to the word mandala and I looked it up and this is what it gave: Any of various ritualistic geometric designs symbolic of the universe, used in Hinduism and Buddhism as an aid to meditation.
But, that is still a creative use of the word.
And the way you described the fish that got away, that was neat. I felt like I was there and saw it. Good job.
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I enjoy poetry about angels. This one was well written and interesting the way the writer explored the many ways angels can help us all in our everyday lives.
I liked the line where it says: "May they live through your memories to keep." That is priceless. Good job. Write on!
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Hey I do not think I can wait until you post the next chapter. I enjoyed reading this well written first chapter. From the first paragraph you caught my attention by writing in such a detailed way talking about the job the same way I talk about my job. Really good work.
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The reference to Batesville caught my attention, I grew up around Hardy, Arkansas and when I was a young lad, it was a big event to go to Batesville. Batesville became a main town to go through because when I got older I went to college at Conway and when going to or from school I'd go through Batesville.
The letters from home had special meaning to me also. I rember in my travels all over the world, my grandmother, parents, sister, and friends kept in contact through the US MAIL and the letters always had special meanings to me. Now, with e-mail no one writes like they used to, even me.
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Like some reviewers that write lenghtly reviews advising the writer how to rewrite their work, I review as I see it. For me this was great just like it was. It sounded like a prayer and then at the end that what the writer did. Good job. Write on.
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This was an article unique unto itself. The line that hit home for me, although I do not think it applies to me, but rather to some men: Some men think we are shallow, not capable of deep thinking. In fact, most of the women I know are deep thinkers and not very shallow and that definitely includes my soulmate. But, on the other hand, a lot of my male friends do think the way you said.
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this was a great short story about sailing, the sea, and the characters that inhabited the sailing ship. The fact that the guy's wife died with a knife in one hand and a potaot in the other hand was tragic in one way and humerous, if I may, in the other. Good job.
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This is a well written testimonial to writing.com and its founders. The writer tells how he started to write and also lists many of the advantages that writing.com has to offer the apiring or professional writer. This really belongs in the testimonial pages. Good job, Dr. Taher.
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Reviewer's note: I'm an insulin dependent diabetic. This story was sensational. The ending is not the way I would want it. The emotions and the problems are are delt with, they are all well done. It was definitely an interesting story. And entertaining.
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Philosophy, in its elementary level. I liked the explanation since I've heard the question put out thousands of times. In this case the writer did a good job of suggesting the question and then explaining the answer. The writer should continue to writer.
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Although I think I gave an honest rating, some writers are on an ego trip and might rate themselves higher than they actually are. However, it is still a good poll and makes one stop and think about where they are when it comes to writing.
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This is a cute, light hearted little piece of work. I enjoyed reading it because it was light and the clarity was understandable. The writer did with just a few words an amazingly good job. And this writer should keep on writing.
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The poem is good. To be quite fair, poetic justic and poetic license come into play here for the reader. Poem is too vague to convey what the writer intended. Some people will not get the interpretation right, but that does not take away from the poem.
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A well written little poem about butterflies or children. Interpretation is up to the reader. Interesting and entertaining and simple it its form. This is a rewarding piece of writing. Good job and the writer should keep on writing.
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This is an interesting story about being 55 years old. I just turned 57 on 12/15/04 so I guess I'm speeding. And in fact I am in the middle of the next adventure. This story was well written and interesting. Good job to the writer who does need to keep writing.
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This narrative is written well but it reads like an exerpt with not enough information to be story. Interesting and very vividly descriptive, it still, in my opinion, needs more background or filler to make a story.
Still the writing is good.
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This story starts off to a great start. However, with over 2300 chapters it is more of a project than a novel. A project that wuld take an awesome amout of time to study. Also with so many characters, it might be hard to keep up with what is going on all of the time. This is awesome.
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This story gets out to a great start. It is interesting and entertaining and the characters are well developed and act like they actually exist. The dialogue is believeable and realistic. The writer has a vivid imagination. Keep on writing.
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This narrative tells of a hero. It is inspiring and interesting. It shows their are heros still out there. Few and far between. It is well written. There could have been more detail. But as it stands it is a good piece of writing. Good job. Keep on writing.
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Excellent, entertaining, adult poetry that is very erotic. The verses are good and seem to flow one to another. The poem is well written and the writer shows that she is very articulate with words. Keep on writing.
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This is a well crafted human interest story if I ever saw one. I have rescued many a kitty that I found starving and abandoned. Some ended up becoming good cats and some just remained wild. But all in all, all of the ones I rescued survived. This was entertaining and well done.
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