If this isn't a creative piece of writing, then I don't know what is. Very well written and full of humor. In fact, I started laughing on the first paragraph and I was still rolling on the floor when I got to the end.
The group of people that wrote this are completely "In sync" with the rest of the group. This story is just fantastic. !!!
I could nopt find any spelling or gramatical mistakes and the story is so well-written, so entertaining, so eloquent.... then I had to give it five stars, even though I seldom give anything five stars.
My hat goes off to this writer for being so talented.
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Pretty good. I could see no flaws in the verses and it is well-written. Plus it is happy poem. Ends happy. Sounds to me like two people in love. Hey, isn't that waht makes the world go round? Very nice, keep writing and welcome to writing.com ........BRAVO!
This is the best story I've read tonight and I've read some really good ones. The story starts out fast and furious, and so far has not slowed down. The conversations are real and very believeable and the entire two chapters are well written. I can't wait to see the rest of this novel. Bravo for a job well done.
I found noting wrong with grammer nor did I find any mis-spelled words. I gave this excellet, well-written piece of writing five stars because it is a true story that tells of tragedy as well as valor. This story is a tribute to all scouts. And was well told by the writer.
This piece of work describes me and the "Love of My Life" ( my wife) to a T. We met online, then we met offline, and then we got married. So, my hat off to you for writing such a meaningful poem about ME. When my wife awakes I'll have to share with her.
Nothing wrong with this piece of work. It says everything with clarity. It was entertaining in the fact that I like buttons, too. Especially as described in this piece. I thought the overall poem was witty and clever. Writer has talent. Bravo! My hat off to you.
Good poem but what does it say? When reviewing poetry I try not to be too critical, because the writer has his/her own interpretation of what they are writing. However, when it is not clear what has been written, then the reader has to make his own interpretation. And in this case I don't know what to say except it sounds like a dream.
I think my rating system is close to yours already. The difference would be in taste. Things that I like real well may not be things you like real well. Plus as you can see, I have dificulty picking the right words to express myself. In any event, I like the way you describe everything in detail and after reading the above article I can't think of anything to add.
As usual you've done it again. I am going to try to design my rating system after yours. I seldom give a five star rating but in this case I'm making an exception because I can not think of anything I could add to this piece. Thank you for your continued help.
Are you a soldier? Because you hit the nail on the head. All of these traits are needed to be a good soldier. The writing is tight and concise and the article looks to be well-researched or it comes from personal knowledge. You've exhibited the talent to be a good writer.
Hooves of Fire, oh, that's too much. Cute little short story about a cow that writes stories and has an account with writing.com. And is a pretty good writer. I enjoyed the story, thought it was well-written, entertaining, and exhibits your talent for being able to put words down on paper and make them interesting for other people to read.
Sounds like every one had a good ole time. This is well-written and where there is conversation it sounds real and believable. Well presented. And I wonder how many 21 year olds have done similiar things as you and your group did, I know I did back when I turned 21,. Good job.
I read this story all the way through and to tell the truth, when I saw what Santa had brought you all for Christmas I almost cried. Boy this is a Well-written, emotional story. I'm giving it five stars. I don't see anything that needs changing. Job well done.
Now did I read this wrong, or is "Fishing Buddies" a love story? And the writer of this story is a natural born storyteller. Entertaining and well written and most important in this genre is: the story is believable.
Thank you for a job well done. Keep on writing.
Now is a very sad piece of writing. No one knows how to laugh. Very sad. But the writing itself is powerful and tells a story. One that I enjoyed reading. It was well-written and entertaining. And BoBo turned out to be a good character. Welcome to writing.com
I hope I'm the only one that sees my thoughts. Sometimes when my thoughts are exceptionally bad I get scared that they will appear on my forehead like a lit up marquee, but so far that hasn't happened. I would say everybody has these thoughts. Now keep writing and Welcome to writing.com
Hey, I was a little surprised because this was actually a pretty good "space" story. This one was written in very understandable words and actually had strong characters and a good plot. A man takes on new responsibilities but can not find his friend thaqt is lost. Strong.
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Although this is certainly a tribute to God it is also a tribute to the writer and an inspiration to us (the readers) for the way you show your love to God. I thought this was good. And also powerful in its concept. Keep on writing. And keep up the good work.
This is agood poem. For me it could have been a prayer. Because I pray for wisdom and understanding. I liked the way you wrote it, even though the meter might be a tad off in one or two places. But as far as I'm concerned, that doesn't matter, the overall poem and thus lesson learned far outweights the meter.
Jenna arrives at her condo. She gestures open the door and walks through the doorway. The Wilson Estimator kicks in and brings the temperature and humidity to optimum levels for her mood, adjusts the lighting to match the activity level of her brain, and provides an intricately calculated combination of aromas to enhance her performance in her currently desired area of interest. In less than a second, every room in her condo is at a temperature of 74.6 degrees with 34.7 percent humidity, bathed in a bright white glow, and pleasantly fragranced in a scent dominated by lavender and jasmine. Tonight is a night to study.
This paragraph, I want all of this in my house. Pronto.
Okay as to the story. Your correlation of having the NFL rule our country sounds preety good, in fact, I don't know but what they would do a better job than out last seven presidents. I'd be willing to give them a try.
This story is well-written and clever. Keep up the good, and imaginative work.
I don't see anything wrong with this very short poem dedicated to faith. However, without a prologue to let us (the readers) know what this is all about, I think it is too short to stand alone. Clever words put together to sound great, but just not enough to explain the entire thought.
This is a cute little poem, however I wonder if this line was thrown in there just because it rhymes, because it looks completely out of context: And a lover's heart the shore........
In fact, there are several lines that do not make sense to the overall poem, but seem to be put in because they rhyme. But keep writing and Welcome to writing.com
This piece is full of sincere feelings and thoughts about someone you love very much. I sincerely hope your partner appreciates you for these feelings and returns these feelings to you. ( I'm having a sleepless night myself so here I am writing reviews trying despartly to get my mind on something else.
I had talked to my dad just the evening before and he had mentioned that he was having pain in back and that he did not want to go to the hospital and sit in a chair for 6 hours but, he was going to go the next day if it was not better. ...I think this should be having pain in the back.
This is me. I hate to go to the doctor and then spend hours waiting to get in. The waiting either cures me or makes me sicker.
Once I was on the highway I began to feel a sense of panic about what lie ahead. .. should be: what lay ahead.
I saw a few mis-uses of words like above but I thought the article was GREAT. Reminds me of my own father who passed away in 1982 and even after all of these years, hardly a day passes that I don't have a memory of him.
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