Very good on the poem. Of course I would choose the positive one if I could but like you say we don't get a choice. I have been dealt a fairly good hand at life but recently I have been having struggles. Yet I find myself trying to stay as positive as I can. Keep writing.
Your poem hit home. I have Bipolar and Borderline Personality Disorder. I wear masks all the time. I am scared to let my true self be seen. Writing is wonderful for me because it lets me be me without judgement. Keep up the awesome writing!
Your poem is very good. I love the last line, 'an inner child, still wanting to see the snow'. Your descriptions are wonderful. I have nothing negative to say about this poem. Keep writing!
Very interesting poem. I have been alienated because of my illness. I have Bipolar and most people do not understand it. Either I sleep because I am depressed, I am up all the time with no need to sleep because I am manic, and then there is the normal mood. I am in a normal mood phase now. But I get the strange and hurtful looks.
I liked your poem. I get dreams from the dead. I have talked to my Grandfather and Grandmother. I got messages to give to loved ones. I have dreamed of my dogs and my cat, letting me know that they were okay, and waiting for me. When I first started getting these dreams it scared me but then I quickly realized that there was nothing to be afraid of. The dreams now calm me and I actually look forward to them.
Your story had me in tears. Very well done. It is never easy loosing a loved one. Our companions are with us for such a short time but it seems to be harder to loose them. They give us unconditional love and they simply accept us without judgement. I lost my Mittens a few years ago and it was heart breaking. I still cannot get another cat for it doesn't seem right. Lucy loved you very much and try to remember all the good times you had with her.
I am sorry to hear about your illness. My father is in remission, he had throat cancer, which was very scary. I was terrorfied that I was going to loose my father. My father is a strong man and he fought and won. I am sure you will beat this.
Honestly I thought that this poem would be better. I really could not relate to it. I am sorry. It flowed nicely and there were no spelling errors. I am sure you have a gift for hearing spirits but it is hard for you to hear what they are exactly saying. Keep writing.
Your poem has me in tears. Very well done. I am sorry you have had to feel this way. It is not fun. If you ever need to talk, please contact me, I will always lend an ear.
You are right. Right now is what matters. The past is gone and the future is not here yet. It is fun to think of the future but we have to focus on the here and now. Great poem.
Secondly, I love the poem. You are dead on with this. If you are not stick thin or you do not look like a barbie doll guys turn their noses up at you. It is so frustrating.
I liked your little article. I too have Bipolar. It is a blessing in disguise in a way. I think we are more creative. I have struggled with Bipolar and over come obstacles that most people would never overcome. Good luck with your illness and remember recovery is real.
I loved your poem. Old age does come on and it seems like it is all of a sudden. I am only 45, not too young but not old either, and I am noticing the aches and pains are already starting. I got injured on the job, I was a paramedic, and I hurt my right leg. I have had to have a right knee replacement and now the left knee needs one too. My knees ache, my hips hurt. I now wear glasses to read and when I am on the computer. So many changes. Happy New Year Donna and I hope it is a great one for you.
I hear you. I really liked your poem. I did not make any resolutions either. I am just grateful for every day I am here on earth. I will take each day as it comes.
Happy New Year!
I am not fond of this poem. I thought it was very repetitive. I am very curious. What is the meaning of this poem? You cannot conquer time for time is endless. I think this poem could be a lot better. I am sorry for the negative review but I wanted to be honest.
JJDel
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