Nice poem. I have had a love loss. I actually divorced him because I found him in bed with another woman. Every heart does have it's destiny. Good luck.
Nicely done. Great descriptions. I grew up in Hull Massachusetts right on the water. I could imagine everything you described. The water has always facinated me. Great poem.
You had me in tears with your poem. I had a cat that was awesome like that too. Her name was Mittens. She always purred her best purrs. I had to put her down a number of years ago but I still miss her terrribly.
Yes diet is the root of most illnesses. I am attempting to change my diet to a healthier one. It is easier said then done but with small changes every week it is possible.
I fell in love once too. For pretty much all the same reasons. I married him as well. Unfortunatelly I had to divorce him because I found him in bed with another woman. Ever since then I have been very leary of love. I hope you have better luck. Your little story was great.
Your poem is very good. I am sorry you are not feeling well. I know that is tough. I have Bipolar and Borderline Personality Disorder and at the moment I am battling depression that seems to have come out of nowhere. It is a hard battle, not feeling well, I can understand. Good luck to you.
Nice little story. Does Finn finally notice her? It would be cool if he did. But add a twist of something like he falls for her friend or that he is gay.
I am really sorry for your loss. Losing a loved one is never easy. When did your mother pass away? How are you dealing with it? How are you doing? I cannot imagine loosing my parents even though I know it will happen one day. I don't know how I will deal with it. Good luck. Again I am sorry for your loss.
I liked your poem. The comparison to football was great. I loved the last line, "I don't like science anymore ... nor football." I was cracking up. Good writing.
I liked your poem. I know how words can sting. Even though I am forty-five my parents always use those stinging words to make me cry. It is to the point where I only talk to my parents once a month.
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