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It was interesting to read and you make good points for how many still tend to believe or fear the Dark magic when really there is much more good that is being created. I am not sure about the price part--but maybe that is from the negative side and the honouring of polarity. 
and certainly has been passed through time as you say in these practices.
I noticed a bit of glitch in this line:
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The imagery is vivid and the aura is potent as one is drawn into the sorrow. The theme is one I am sure noone wants to contemplate, yet it happens. I ownder if the title could be more relevant as the word Memories is so generic. 
I am not familiar with the series you mention in your brief intro but it doesn't do any harm as I can leap into the story and get the drift of it. I like how each new person adds their character details as they jump in! You have some unique characters and the addition of the alien who has to eat raw meat makes for a challenge within the ranks.
The last line of your intro is a bit off grammatically with the phrase "as animals" at the end.
I look forward to more of the story.
Haiku do not use capital letters or much punctuation so you can easily tweak that issue.
The description of the the children is vivid. I did wonder about the one not being given a name, at least initially as a baby in the home. I think someone would have had to look after him as a baby or he would have died. In the writing about him it seems like you do jump a bit ahead when you say he was not well liked etc.
Hope you enjoy WDC and the upcoming 16th Birthday Bash! 
The poem is balanced in form and fun to read. The rhyme is consistent and while the rhythm is not even in each verse, it does not detract from the read and message. The use of midline puntucation is effective for dramatic pause. I wanted to put an exclamation in the last verse line "Don't call me old" as it felt that a potent protest! I could imagine this wiry old lady still in her prime! 
The structure is solid with each paragraph revealing a different theme or idea of how Jane is perceived in our world through a variety of venues. It was pleasant to read and the charming soft positive tone was effective. 
The letter format is relevant and I could tell I was reading one as you neatly weave in your own experiences with and opinions of the Austen phenomena. I think she would be so thrilled to learn that there are shops and festivals but that you personally honour her right here at WDC and inspire a fan club. 
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful tribute and letting her know what you feel. I am sure in spirit she may be aware and smiling! 
I loved it!
The title is a good hook and gives a good clue to the theme of the story. It presents a vivid image and gave me a smile. 
The writing is coherent and interesting. I had to read to the end and could really see Boo and his personality as you describe so lovingly and with clarity. Good job. I loved the picture you paint at the end. I could so visualize that look! 
Thanks for sharing your personal experience that inspires laughter and appreciation for pets! An entertaining read! 
Wow! Yay! I just found this exciting new contest on the newsfeed! 
Wow! I so enjoyed reading your evocative poem. The imagery is so vital and alive and the repeating verse-a rhyming couplet is like a song refrain and adds to the atmosphere. The undertones are potent.
I was lured into the first verse with its clarity and appealing soundscape, which you continued in the next verses. I love the alliteration, some inner rhyme and your use of consonance and assonance is so effective. "drift, lift, whisper", "gate will grate", "brush, bramble and thorn"! It was so fun to read. oh and "flowerless hours"! 
Oh, I am back for more as I do like the mystical and fantasy. This has a truly old world aura and I could visualize the image clearly. 
Could be I missed something.
You really have captured the essence of your theme in this expression.
I did not notice a clear structure in the poem as the verses have different number of lines but there is evidence of rhyme which adds to the flow.