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Title is very good and appropriate for the content of the poem. As far as spelling, punctuation, and grammar are concerned, I could find no errors. Good assonance and alliteration. Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading. The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Really enjoyed your poem!!
P.S. Please take a look at some of my work, would appreciate any advice. Thank you and Have a Great Day!!
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember -- only you know what is right for your writing!
Title is very good and appropriate for the content of the poem. As far as spelling, punctuation, and grammar are concerned, I could find no errors. Good assonance and alliteration. Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading. The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, the flow is nice and easy.
Thank you for allowing me to write your writing- I consider it an honor and privilege.
P.S Please take a look at some of my stuff would really appreciate any advice. Thank You and have a Nice Day!!
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember -- only you know what is right for your writing!
Title is very good and appropriate for the content of the poem. As far as spelling, punctuation, and grammar are concerned, I could find no errors. Good assonance and alliteration. Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading. The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent. Excellent poem!!!
Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.
P.S Please take a look at some of my stuff, would like advice. Would really appreciate it. Thank You and have a nice day.
Title is very good and appropriate for the content of the story. As far as spelling, punctuation, and grammar are concerned, I could find no errors. Good assonance and alliteration. Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading. Form of the story is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout.
Really enjoyed your story. It is always great to look back at our memories. It seems like you really enjoy being with your family, which is so great. Great Job....
Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.
P.S Please take a look at some of my stuff, would like advice. Would really appreciate it. Thank You and have a nice day.
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember -- only you know what is right for your writing!
Title is very good and appropriate for the content of the poem. As far as spelling, punctuation, and grammar are concerned, I could find no errors.
Good assonance and alliteration. Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. Very heart breaking that the soldier went away. She is longing for him to return to her. Good job, really enjoyed the poem.
Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.
P.S Please take a look at some of my work would like some advice. Would be very much appreciate. Thank You
Have a great day!!
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember -- only you know what is right for your writing!
Title is very good and appropriate for the content of the poem. As far as , punctuation, and grammar are concerned, I only found one error which was you spelled together wrong where it says : I bet you my heart we'll be together.
Good assonance and alliteration. Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout. Woman speaking of a man she desires to be with and hoping someday, some how that they will be together. Really enjoyed the poem.
Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.
P.S Please take a look at some of my work would like some advice. Would be very much appreciate. Thank You
Have a great day!!
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember -- only you know what is right for your writing!
Title is very good and appropriate for the content of the story. As far as spelling, punctuation, and grammar are concerned, I could find no errors.
Good assonance and alliteration. Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading. It grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps the reader's attention throughout.
Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.
P.S Please take a look at some of my work would like some advice. Would be very much appreciate. Thank You
Have a great day!!
The poem is beautiful. I bet your girlfriend loved it. It was very heartfelt. The construction was good and flowed well. Kept me interested from beginning to end. Good Job, keep up the good writing!! Have a nice day!!!
Please go take a look at some of my work, would appreciate any feedback. Thank You!!!
This is a very good story. It kept me interested from beginning to end. I really felt sorry for the boy that it brought tears to my eyes. Abuse is never acceptable under any circumstances. Very good writing. Thank You for letting me read your story. I really enjoyed it. Have a good night and keep on writing.
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