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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem one that caught my attention.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Good imagery, which helps the reader to see in her mind's eye what the poem is about and it also stimulates the imagination to see beyond the poem. This poem deserves:. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is good and the flow is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a short but nice poem, I would have liked to hear more about the meaning of life. You have some good ideas in this poem. This poem deserves:. If you decided to work on this poem, I would be more then willing to do a re-review for you. All you have to do is email me.
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Title: Good title and it caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: The only suggestion I have is about punctuation. The punctuation, or lack thereof in a poem, is the direction of the writer, guiding the reader. The punctuation is where the author wishes the reader to take a breath; to contemplate; to pause for dramatic effect. The lack of punctuation says the same thing, "Read in one breath, whether slow, or fast, down the page". To me, punctuation is direction from the author to the reader. Use it, or don't , to your heart's desire and don't let anyone persuade you otherwise. However, if using it, be consistent throughout the piece. My personal opinion, this poem would benefit from punctuation.
Overall: All in all a cute poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every line. My favorite lines were:
For I’ll be the happiest Aunt among the rest
While I hold them both – one right, one left.
These four lines are such a beautiful phrase, excellent in depth of emotion and the imagery is gorgeous with this phrase. This poem deserves:
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: All in all a good poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. Brought back memories of the day when I first started school as a freshman. But, that was many, many years ago. LOL!! I still remember all those feeling that you speak of. Very good with your emotions on this poem. This poem deserves:. Good Job!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation:I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every line. A beautiful poem written straight from the heart about a man loving his wife or girlfriend. That was utterly amazing and heart felt! This poem deserves: . Good poem and good job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: the rhythm is good and the flow is nicely done.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout.There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. You have good ideas with this poem, but, I would have liked more. This poem deserves: . If you decide to work further on this poem, I would be more than happy to do a re-review for you. Just email me.
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a good poem. But, I would have like to read more of what you are wishing for. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. This poem deserve: .
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Title: Good title and it caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all, this is a wonderful poem, and a good read. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I really loved the imagery of this poem. I like how you highlighted and capitalized the first word of every line, this I think truly brought the poem to life. I usually have a favorite line or two, but, with this poem I enjoyed the whole poem. This poem deserves: . Beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing and good job!!
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Title: Good title and it caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is good and the flow is nicely done.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a good heartfelt poem. This is a lovely poem about about a woman who speaks of love she has for her man. Very touching and heartfelt. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every line. My favorite lines were:
Love at first sight still comes to mind,
When I think about how you were made mine.
These lines struck an emotional cord with me because, when I meet my husband, it was love at first sight and I just know he was the one I was going to marry. This poem deserves: .A beautiful poem written straight from the heart that I hope many people have a chance to read and enjoy this as much as I have. Good Job!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a good poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I really enjoy the imagery of it. I can really paint the scene and you did a great job setting the mood to it. I really think the picture brought the poem to life. This deserves: . Good Job!!!
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Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is good and the flow is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a good poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. My favorite lines were:
When true love comes around let your gaurd down,
because that is when true love makes its loudest sound.
I liked these lines because they are so true in life. That when you do find true love you need to let your guard down to let that love begin to grow. This poem deserves:. Good Job!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: This poem is so heart catching, breath taking, and tear dropping. It speaks of a little girl that goes missing and her parents can not find her. The sad thing about it is, now a days that happens much to often.
I just loved your imagery with the picture, it truly brought a tear to my eyes to see one pink glove laying there all alone. It even sent shivers down my spine. The picture really brought you poem to life. This poem deserves: . All though this poem was quite sad, I enjoyed reading it. Good Job!!
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Title: Good title and it caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all good poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This is an uplifting piece about the importance of faith in our lives. You make many excellent points about the need for faith in our lives. I enjoyed reading this spiritually motivating piece. This poem deserve: . Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is good and the flow is nice
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Such a sad and heart wrenching poem about bullying from one child to another. So much that they want to end their lives. Today there is so much of that in our society, it is really a crying shame. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is very strong depth of emotion and feeling in every line. I cannot imagine a child having to endure this situation. You conveyed the pain in this poem very well. This poem deserves: . All in all good poem. Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None. Good just the way it is.
Overall: A wonderful poem. It's nice to see such loving words here. It puts the reader in to a happy place for a while and that is great. It shows clearly here the the love that you have for that special person in your life. Just Beautiful!! Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. This poem deserves: . I really enjoyed reading this poem. Good Job!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is good and the flow is nicely done.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: What a nice poem you've written here. I was moved by your poem and it reminded me of when I meet my husband and we fell in love. As, brought back memories of the day we were married and joined as one. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is beautiful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. This poem deserves: . Good Job!!
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Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: Good title and it caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Very nice originality and imagination to this poem. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. I really enjoy the imagery of it. I can really paint the scene and you did a great job setting the mood to it. Wonderful! You've painted lovely pictures in the reader's mind. This poem deserves:. I enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for sharing. Good Job!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is good and the flow is nicely done.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This is such a sad, heartbreaking poem of someone going through depression so bad that they want to end their life. I too suffer from depression, so I know of what you speak. Absolutely pulled on my heartstrings...brought a tear to my eyes, because I have thought about suicide also. I did feel the agony of the depths of deepest despair. You brought forth your emotions and I felt as if I was feeling them myself. I am so sorry that you have to suffer this way. Deep expression of emotion. Powerful. You express the pain very well in this poem. This deserves:. If this is a true story, please keep trying and you are in my prayers!!! Good poem and Good job!!
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Title: Fits the content well.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhythm is pretty good as well as the flow. The form is very nice, being centered on the page, which I think looks attractive. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Overall: Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is beautiful depth of emotion and feeling which comes through in every
line. A wonderful poem. It's nice to see such loving words here. It puts the reader in to a happy place for a while and that is great. It shows clearly here the the love that you have for that special person. This deserves: . Good job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy. The form is very nice, being centered on the page, which I think looks attractive. This, of course, is a matter of taste, and what I prefer.
Rhyme: Rhyme is nice.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a good poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. A nice heartfelt poem which makes me think that you are writing about a real, personal experience. The writer is speaking of love for someone who lies to her, but yet she or he believes that they were meant to be. It's clear that you write from your heart... Very touching!!! This deserves: . Good Job!!
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Title: Good title and it caught my interest.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a good poem. But I would have liked to hear more about this young girl that is a mother. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. This poem is a very sad and emotional one about a young girl who is now a mother, but still needs to mature. It is really sad, because you hear of these young mother's these days who have babies and they are babies themselves. Very sad life this young mother has to endure. Very touching poem. This poem deserves: . Good Job!!!
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Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is excellent, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: Good poem. Very nice originality. You caught the reader's attention from the very first line and kept the reader's attention throughout. There is wonderful depth of feeling and emotion in this poem and it shows through in every phrase. I like the tone and subject of you piece. It gets the reader thinking. My favorite lines were:
But what am I reading, you ask?
Why... it's just the tale of life.
These two lines were an Awesome why to end your poem. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. This poem deserves: . Good Job!!!
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Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: As far as grammar, I found no mistakes. But, in spelling I found some errors. In the 4th line the word: "invisible" 6th line the word: "An" needs to be capitalized. The same goes for the lines 7,9,10 and 11. Also found many mistakes with your punctuation in this poem.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme was okay, but the flow was not very good.
Rhyme: Rhyme is good.
Word Choice: Word selection is good.
Suggestions: The suggestions I have are to put this in a different form. Such as:
Emotions take control,
Over my body mind and soul.
Fill me with anger, and fear,
Occasionally cupid appears.
I would do this through out your whole poem, it would make for a better flow of the poem and also make an easy read. Also, the punctuation is all wrong in this poem, which makes it hard for the reader to concentrate on what they are reading. The punctuation is where the author wishes the reader to take a breath; to contemplate; to pause for dramatic effect. The lack of punctuation says the same thing, "Read in one breath, whether slow, or fast, down the page". To me, punctuation is direction from the author to the reader. But, this is only my personal opinion.
Overall: I think with some work that this poem could be just beautiful. You have great ideas in this poem, but it needs some work. Sorry, but I believe this poem deserves: . If you decide to work on this poem, I would be more than happy to do a re-review for you. All you have to do is email me with the revision of the poem.
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Thank you for allowing me to review your writing -- I consider it an honor and privilege.
Please remember that I am an author, just like yourself, and as an author I am also reviewed by my peers, and I know what it feels like. Please remember that these are only my opinions, and they are respectfully given to you. You may do with them as you wish-- only you know what is right for your writing!
Title: A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation:I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice: Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: All in all a cute little poem. Nice originality to this poem. I enjoyed the smooth flow and the clear imagery in this poem. This poem speaks of the hard times that people are living these days with the economy the way it is, it is hard for some people to make ends meat. You conveyed this feeling very well in this poem. I also think the picture really brought the poem to life. This poem deserves a: Good Job and keep on writing for our community!!!
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Title:A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.
Spelling,grammar and punctuation: I could find no errors.
Flow/Rhythm: The rhyme scheme is very good, as is the rhythm. Form of the poem is good, and the flow is nice and easy.
Word Choice:Word selection is perfect and makes for easy reading.
Suggestions: None.
Overall: This is a great concept for a poem. You're use of imagery makes the poem and gives it heart. I like the tone and subject of you piece. It gets the reader thinking. Nice originality and great imagination. This poem captures the attention of the reader from the very first line and keeps the reader's attention throughout. My favorite lines were:
All the water in our land,
Will be forever gone.
But then we'll all just cry again,
And the ocean is born once more.
These four lines were the perfect way to end your poem!!! Good Job!! This poem deserves a: Keep sharing your writing with our community.
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. Very nicely done, and a pleasant read to boot. 
I still remember all those feeling that you speak of. Very good with your emotions on this poem. This poem deserves:
Janice