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Can a human prisoner survive in a jail built for giant monsters? Keep it a fantasy please
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Chapter #5

Trading Prison for Camp

    by: Unknown
(Note: This was going to be an interactive called Monster Hollow but because of a grave injustice, this is all anyone's ever going to get to it.)

You see Destiny impatiently tapping her fingers before you're forced to make the decision. "You win Destiny," you say with a sigh. "Send me off to Camp Darkly." Destiny nods her head. "Good, you'll be on your way first thing tomorrow. I recommend you behave yourself Wade. There are children present and twelve camp counselors who know how to deal with pests like you. If I hear any trouble, it's back to jail with you."

Well, the good news was that you could get out of this crappy prison. But now, you'd be spending the summer babysitting giant monster brats. The next day at the camp, the head counselor had gathered the staff to anticipate your arrival. There were nine other counselors, all women, mostly on the heavy side. First was a bright red skinned gargoyle woman with long purple hair worn in a ponytail. She was very pear-shaped compared to the rest of the staff.

Next was a chubby, pale skinned blonde girl with a white jack o'lantern for a head. Next to her was a big-bellied, black furred and red-haired hellhound with long horns and a devil's tail. Next to the hellhound was a BBW kappa woman with yellow-green skin and green hair. The kappa girl was eating a bag of marshmallows as a heavy set weresheep with golden wool took her seat next to her.

In the second row there was an hourglass shaped ogopogo woman, she looked similar to Lockette except more eel like with bright yellow fins going down her back and neck. Her skin looked like the color of an aurora. She must've been Odile, Fate's former roommate.

Next to her was a brocken specter, a rainbow colored ghost who looked like she was rising from the floor. Her face looked like a Haunter's and she had empty eye-sockets. Next to the brocken specter girl was a manticore woman in an apron. The manticore girl looked like Belladonna, but had purple skin, horns and leather wings as well as tattoos all over her body. The last monster was an obese creature that resembled a reddish brown furred lioness with the shell of a tortoise and six arms. She was a tarasque and from the looks of it, she wore a nurse's outfit.

The head counselor was a bright blue skinned qilin with grayish pink hair and golden antlers. She looked in better shape than the rest of the counselors and had a grim expression on her face as she was taking attendance of the staff. "Nat." She called. "Here." Said the jack o'lantern girl. "Venus." "Here I am Kaylee." Said the winged manticore. "Dolly." "Here." Said the weresheep. "Miranda?" The qilin paused and then looked around in annoyance. "Where are Miranda and Edgar?"

Suddenly the last two counselors ran forward; first was an obese, bright yellow furred werewolf girl wearing a red hood over her head and the other surprisingly was a human young man with bright silver hair and tanned skin. "Sorry we're late Kaylee." Said Miranda, the werewolf." The human stopped to pant while the weresheep, pumpkin girl, gargoyle, tarasque, kappa and hellhound all looked at him with lust. "Hi Edgar." They said in a singsong voice.

Edgar walked forward before the kappa girl finished her marshmallows and bent over. "You look beat Edgar," she said. "You can ride in the dome on my head. It's full of cold refreshing water." "UH thanks Skyla." Replies Edgar nonchalantly. That's when Dolly, the sheep giantess knocked Skyla out of the way. "Why take cold water when you can have warm wool Eddy." She says in lust. That's when the hellhound girl tried to push Dolly away only for Dolly to bite her and make her scream. "Hey!" "Hey yourself Heloise," says Dolly. "You're just gonna shove him down your purse. You know Edgar hates that." "Too bad," says Heloise. "I'm his fiancee." "Funny," says Nat, the pumpkin girl. "How can you be his fiancee when I'm his fiancee?"

Odile lets out a sigh as Venus picks at her teeth with a spatula. "Yikes, Summer's just started and they're already at it." The tarasque girl stepped in and tried to make a grab for Edgar but Heloise breathed fire on her back. "What do you think you're trying to do Martha?" asks the hellhound giantess. "Edgar's tired and bruised from his run here. I'm the nurse," says Martha, the tarasque, rather angrily. "And more important, his future wife." "You're gonna need some medical treatment yourself nurse." Says Skyla the kappa.

That's when the girls heard a whistle. The gargoyle giantess had picked up Edgar and placed him in her cleavage, much to her rivals' dismay. Martha in particular was enraged and showed her claws. "Curse you Janet! Just because that gargoyle hussy has the biggest rear of the staff, she thinks she's got the only hot guy in camp in the palm of her hand." "Technically," says the brocken specter. "She does." "Bettina," says Miranda. "Don't encourage them." "Will you stop it!" yells Kaylee as a storm suddenly appears in the sky.

All the counselors settle down and take their seats before Kaylee calls the meeting. "Okay, Camp Darkly opens tomorrow. But as for today, we're expecting a new counselor to the staff." Edgar lets out a gulp. "Oh," he groans. "If it's another stalker." Nat however smiles from cheek to cheek. "A new face in the camp. This is gonna be so fun! I'll get the confetti!" "It better not be a succubus," says Skyla as she opens another bag of marshmallows. "We've got enough competition here." Edgar looks at the girls nervously. Obviously he didn't exactly like all the attention.

"Actually," says Kaylee. "We're expecting a human. Another boy." Venus spots a bug on the table before squashing it with her spatula. "That's actually a good thing. Now Skyla, Dolly, Janet, Martha, Heloise and Nat will be fighting over two hotties." Odile however is outraged. "What?! Another human? You might as well fire us all and replace us with humans Kaylee! Is that it?" "Odile," says Edgar. "Why are you always so paranoid. "There's a human right here you know." "Shut it shrimp." says Odile. "No," says Kaylee. "You shut it Odile. This counselor is a prisoner from Under Gloom undergoing rehabilitation."

Heloise lights herself a cigarette with her fire breath before speaking. "Been there," she said. "Done that." Kaylee glares at Heloise and suddenly the cigarette turns into a candy cane, much to Heloise's dismay. "Really Kaylee?" she asks. "Think of the children Heloise," scolds Janet as she bounces her breasts and Edgar between them. "You're setting a bad example." Kaylee then focuses on Odile. "Odile, you don't have any right to complain. This is an order from Warden Destiny herself. You remember Destiny right Odile? Went to college with her daughter? Didn't you borrow money from Fate years ago to buy a textbook?" Odile groans and slaps herself in the face. "I should've paid her back when I had the chance." The ogopogo complains.

Edgar and Miranda share a laugh before Kaylee turns to Miranda. "And Miranda," says Kaylee. "Do not eat him when he arrives like you do with Edgar all the time." Miranda blushes slightly. "Come on Kaylee, why pick on me?" "Because A)," says Kaylee to the werewolf. "You're the only counselor who eats humans. And B) Unlike Edgar, this guy can't regenerate." Miranda glares at Edgar as he ducks down between Janet's breasts. "Can I help it if I'm immortal." Edgar grumbles to himself.

"So Kaylee," says Venus the manticore as she proceeds to scratch her belly button with her spatula. "Who's the new counselor." "His name is Wade Wilson." Says Kaylee. Janet's eyes pop upon hearing this. "Wilson?" the gargoyle giantess asks. "My big sis Petra told me about him." "What was he in for?" asks Bettina the brocken specter. "He's a career troublemaker with a rap sheet as big as a phonebook," says Janet. "But specifically why he's in Under Gloom, he set a mummy on fire for accidentally stepping on his car." "Yikes," says Edgar. "And he's coming to a camp for little girls. Robyn's not gonna like it."

Kaylee grabs her hair. "I don't care what that bureaucratic bigmouth hobgoblin likes." "You kinda have to Kaylee," says Miranda. "She's the inspector and she's coming in a few days." Kaylee then makes her eyes glow before she grows tens of thousands of feet tall and storm clouds fill the air. The rest of the counselors cower before her. "Quiet!" shouts the qilin giantess. "He's coming at noon and we are to make sure he doesn't cause any trouble! I have enough to worry about regarding this camp so it is up to each of you twelve to keep an eye on Wade. Got it!" The other counselors nod their heads nervously before Kaylee shrinks down to normal size.

"I hate it when she warps reality." Groans Martha the tarasque. At that time, you're on a bus heading for the camp. Destiny has one of the guards escorting you because she obviously doesn't trust you. This guard was a gigantic cyclops woman with bright red skin and orange hair and a blue tattoo around her singular eye. The cyclops has you stuck between her breasts as you're shaking. "Hey Iris," you say. "You don't have to hold me all the way to the camp." Iris just shakes her head and glares at you. "The Warden doesn't really believe you've changed. She sent me to accompany you because unlike the other guards, humans upset my stomach. You better behave yourself for the counselors though. Remember, there will be children present. At the first sign of criminal behavior, you'll be sent back to Under Gloom."

You just stick out your tongue. You heard about Edgar, the other human counselor and couldn't figure out why he could possibly enjoy being around monster brats. But soon you'd be in Horrorville and reach the camp.

Which point of view to follow now?

You have the following choices:

1. Wade's P.O.V.

2. Edgar's P.O.V.

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