I liked this. It took about three quarters of the way through the story before I understood the reality of the story. Before that my imagination was running wild, I like that in a read. The pace was great and the characters visually appeared in my minds eye. Good job looking forward to reading more of your work.
Great job. I was raised on a dairy farm. The description was so realistic I could smell the manure. The development of the characters can only come from the imagination of a witness. I like your way with words. I have a couple of short stories in my port that I know you will like. "Summer of 55". "Jake (The Boy )". "The Bench"
Very good job. The truths within the time we live sadden me. But I don't despair. I see our future as a glass not half full and not half empty. The glass I see is over flowing with hope.
Looking forward to visiting your port and reading more of your work
Great job. I want to read more about these two. The first step in a story is the most important. Looking forward to reading more, I will be visiting your port.
GREAT job, to catch a dream and put it into beautiful words makes for big talent. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Sorry I can't help with editing. I can't spell, and don't know the difference between a dangling participle and a question mark. All I am is a dreamer with a way with words that I personally enjoy.
This is a story about hope. It just goes to show that dreams can come true. Great job with per fact pace. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Sorry I can't help with editing. I can't spell, and don't know the difference between a dangling participle and a question mark. All I am is a dreamer with a way with words that I personally enjoy.
Kat, even the most irresistible girl in the world can let a jerk sneak into a heart looking to releave the pain of loneliness.
Kat, look out the window you sit by. Look again there it is another dream, good luck.
Looking forward to enjoying more of your words.
Sorry I can't help with editing. I can't spell, and don't know the difference between a dangling participle and a question mark. All I am is a dreamer with a way with words that I personally enjoy.
As a sailor I think your words can ride out any storm. Good job looking forward to reading more of your work.
I have a very short story in my port that I think you will enjoy"TALL TALE"
Sorry I can't help with editing. I can't spell, and don't know the difference between a dangling participle and a question mark. All I am is a dreamer with a way with words that I personally enjoy.
Very nice job. I had those same little boy dreams. The first half of my life was spent breaking, riding and training race horses. Not only can I talk to horses but also understand them. I have some sort stories in my port "Jake" that I think you will like. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
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