Wow this was great. Brought a tear to my eyes thinking about my Pop. I have a story in my port that I think you might like "SUMMER OF 55" it is in my contest winners folder.
Your father sound like a man I would like. I have two girls and they have made me the man who has everything.
Thanks again and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Billy, Billy, Billy, my heart is still pounding. What a great job you did here my man. I have been very busy working and have not had a lot of time to read; but after this I see how much I miss it.
I can't tell you what I liked best in this story each line can be a story in itself.
When I read this it gives me hope that America will be able to over come what some are trying to do from within.
I am sorry for your loss and this monday I will add Staff Sergeant John T. Self to the list of many friends that gave their lives so all American's can have a dream they can call their own.
AZ, Wow, the pace was as fast as my pounding heart. Very, very good job on this. The end of the world has been done many times but you captured it from the point of young love. I like yopur style, you do have a way with words.
Thanks again and I will vist your port. I look forward to reading more of your work.
"When I say so, it is not out of any REAL hatred of the great American nation or the great American people,"
I read your piece. This nation has opened its heart to ALL people with a gift of freedom. Many nations should look to America and dream their own should live with freedom.
Look at the nations that hate us. They are all nothing more than nations of slaves.
My heart was pounding with the pace of this piece. You did a great job of letting me look inside the mind of a young woman who's mind was trying to control her run-a-way dreams. I wanted more.
Thanks again and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Very cool, I loved the ending. You did a great job with this. I felt uneasy when the shadow moved across the path. Just another bad day for the fat boy.
I like your way with words and the pace was perfect
I have a Vampire story in my port I think you might like "MY SPECIAL CHILD"
Thanks again for the read and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Geoff
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