This is an inspiring poetry about autumn and how winter is approaching. The poet builds the momentum for winter by reciting lines for autumn. Bright colors, crisp air, heat relief, tasty pumpkin pies, food feast, hay rides, leaves dying, drying, flying are all descriptions of autumn. Winter is expected and finally comes in the final lines.
This is a nice good poem about one's faithful servant. It makes us think about the faithful servants we have and how well they serve us. It says "you weren't always right" making us think about how servants can be wrong sometimes. The poet wants to hear this first words when he dies. A good poem for a faithful servant.
This is a nice short poem about fire and ice. The cold heat is described as blistering. The thaw is freezing and it is sweltering. The frost is boiling and forms itself. The lava is flowing from glaciers. The poetry is nice to read. The final lines of melted flames of fire and ice make it complete.
This is a good poem about how to read poetry. The poet says to break its spine and open it. To the level of meat and guts, so that it bleeds words. The way of describing the actions is very articulate and qualifies for good poetry with meaning. The last lines of "illuminates the valleys of your soul" are good and inspiring.
This is a nice poem about London and the life that goes on in London. The different events are described well. The Polish builder, the turkish barber, the yoga teacher, inmates, the gambler, sex workers are all described well. In the end it says enjoy your stay, but don't feel pity. The poem is interesting to read.
This is a good poem about bowling with a consistent speed. The author explains how speed can be achieved in bowling. It makes interesting reading to discover the different nuances of a sport. The author has bowled for 3 leagues for the past 11 years making him an experienced player.
This is a nice poem about death and how we are standing in a queue. The order of people in a family is amusing to read. The eventuality of death is shown well in the poem. The queue is all set for generations upon generations to follow. Young people give little heed to death, but have to confront it later.
This is a nice poem about blue page. The blue page is the protagonist of the poem. The poet wants the blue page to do several things outlined in the poem. It sounds like a verse book from which chants can be muttered to make things happen. If the blue page can do wonders, it will be good to have it.
This is a nice story about women being sorcerers. The story line is long and keeps the reader engrossed. The aura of people are amazing to be seen. The conversation between the characters reminds of a fiction book story. But, the story is also too long winded.
This is a good poem dedicated to forgotten heroes. It is a good tribute to those who were willing to fight. Bravery should be rewarded and this poem is a fitting answer to that. It evokes a sense of pride in soldiers, who have fought in battle. The fear of nuclear war is also clear in the poem.
This is a nice article about ratings on wdc. It analyses why ratings can't be a perfect five. The arguments are interesting and make reading wonderful. The rating system must be evaluated and can be the way as given in the article. There is much already available in the rating system being used. No change might be required.
This is a nice story about a woman and her doll or imaginary girl Nora. The script is well written. It could be a play or a skit. The dialogues are carefully handled and describes well what the character says to the doll. The actions in brackets are also very replete with movements to describe the woman's activities. A good script.
This is a nice poem about bluebirds. It is written for children and hence will be enjoyable to them. The bluebirds feed on worms and pie. They go peep, peep, peep. The language sounds like ancient English. The bigger bluebirds fly high in the sky. The poetry is interesting to read.
This is a nice poem titled train. It seems like a train of thoughts of the poet. The ideas shared are inspiring and make interesting reading. The poetry goes on to explain how the poet feels about the other person. The feelings and emotions are well described. It makes us feel good about how the train of thoughts go.
This is a good story for a flash fiction challenge. The detective is in hunt for the killer who commits identical crimes. The situation is baffling for him and his colleague. The murders are of brunette, brown eyes, 30 yr old waitresses. The plot is intriguing and makes interesting reading. It is written in a very short span of words-276 and hence is commendable.
This is a nice poem about going out on a summer's day. The poetry evokes a sense of well being in the reader. It makes us feel good about taking an outing. It says to "walk along the avenue of trees". The winds are blowing gently and leaves are rustling. The two people are in love and would go hand in hand.
This is a good poem about a midsummer's dream. The lake is at first frozen. Later it transforms to a stream and then to a beam of light. This transformation is very interesting. The poetry attracts us to the poet's thoughts. Finally, they sing and dance to the extreme as they feast on summer's shrine. This is explanatory of the joy the summer brings to them.
This is a nice poem about isolation. The poet says I am isolation. He also says I am nothing. The words resound in the mind. It makes us think isolation is the only thing. It also says "I have befriended isolation". It is his only friend. The poem is nice to read. It makes us think about one's isolation and the need to be one with others.
This is a nice prose about the importance of love to mankind. It gives the idea to love others as we would ourselves. The text has some typographical errors. For example: "witch" in the first line. It is important to control our egos and give importance to others.
This is a good story about Adam and Julie. The text has a lot of typographical errors and should be corrected to be taken seriously. Being a good writer, one has to refrain from spelling and grammar errors. The story makes us excited and we need to know what happens next. It is interesting.
This is a nice newsletter about Jane Austen. It has a plethora of information about the author. Following this newsletter would inform the readers about Jane Austen's writing and books. A Janeite is someone with a lot of affection for Jane Austen. The cookies are also something to look forward to.
This is a good poem about wearing hats. Hats are a style statement and this poem makes us realize it. Different styles for different heads. They are cool and flashy. The poem says donning a worthwhile hat implies one has charm, inspiration and worldly pizzazz. This is very true.
This is a nice short poem about coffee. It is described as acrid and bubbling. It arouses the poet from his dreamland to wake up and drink it. The meaning is clear to us. Coffee makes us feel better and is a good drink to have. Also, the aroma can make us think about things we never thought about.
This is a good article about making mistakes on one's computer or hitting the wrong keys. It makes us wonder how mistakes happen. Wrongly typed words can convey the wrong meaning. The mistakes in the article are intentional and hence amusing to read. The spelling correcting algorithm in programs can check such mistakes.
This is a good account of the author at her office. It is written in a very straightforward way. The encounter with the boss is short. It does not tell why the "Mafia boss wants me as his". The talk with the receptionist is handled well and can be seen as a day to day interaction with office colleagues.
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