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Review of God is Everywhere  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is a nice poetry about god being everywhere. The essence of the poetry is showing in its lines. The rhyming is also handled well. The poetry makes us feel good about god the lord almighty. It makes us feel his power and grace. The science behind it is also explained well. It gives us a scientific perspective to our understanding of god. The souls winnings are at heaven's door. This are good lines.

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Review of A Gift of Freedom  
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice story for the flash fiction challenge. The story is intriguing and involving both at the same time. The author has taken pains to explain the situations and events. The encounter with the Romany gypsies is interesting. The idea of the story is to mesmerize the reader with the situations and the characters. The dream is also exciting. It makes the story standout.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)

This is a nice item to be featured in a comedy newsletter. The account is interesting and makes good reading. The pesky neighbor is shown well and amuses us. The idea of the story is rare and hence makes it special. The final getting of the cotton patch geese as weeders also makes us smile. The story is well evolved and seems like a real life experience.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

This is a nice story with a lot of imagination in play. It reminds of fantasy fiction episode. The characters are described well and make us connect to them. There are a lot of spelling mistakes in the text, which have to be corrected. The story is long winding and can be of shorter length to make it more interesting and involving. The reader might lose connection reading so many pieces.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice chapter of a story. There are some spelling and grammar errors that should be checked. The story is interesting. The imagination of the author comes to the fore. The characters also come alive. The story could be done better if the same tempo of story telling is maintained. The story is amusing to read. The idea of the story is to capture the imagination and does it well.

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Review of Awoken On Impact  
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is a nice poetry titled awoken on impact. The idea of getting roused on impact is good for us to understand. The poetry is written with much meaning and clear explanation. The events leading to the impact is captured well. The vehicle is driven by a driver. The poet thinks the accidents happen to other people. But, he is seeing it happen to himself. This idea is very endearing.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)

This is a nice monologue or account of the author's thoughts. The conversations between the characters are captured well. The account is engrossing of how his attempts at getting a girlfriend is turning futile. The final match up is heart warming. The conversations between the friends make interesting reading. The narrative is kept in constant flow and is necessary to make the account standout.

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Review of Twin Towers  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)

This is a nice tribute to 9/11. The poetry makes us remember the event again. The twin towers are seen as a symbol of the 9/11 tragedy. The twin towers are described as watching over the city. This makes the towers a watchdog for the city. The falling of the towers is described well too. The nation is united against the crime. The many souls who perished are also mentioned. The twin towers will watch the city bustle. This is hope shown in the poetry.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice poem about pride and playfulness. The poem offers an explanation about the pride in the game being played. The feeling of pride is developed with the game. This introduces us to the concept of being joyful about the game we play. The shove makes him wonder about his pride. The pride is too precious to lose. A person comes along and tells us we are wrong. This makes our pride suffer. The poetry has much meaning and sense.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a good poem about the poet's love for his loved one. The story of love is depicted in poetry form. The poetry winds around the poet's feelings and emotions for his lady love. His heart pounds as he sees her. He watches her secretly without her knowledge. Her eyes are compared to Irish Meadows Green. This comparison is welcome and heart rending. Eventually, the poet says someday she will be his. This shows his hope and faith.

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Review of another ramble  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is an interesting piece asking to carry the author back to the time when things were nice. The love between the two is very visible. The first smile, the butterflies in the stomach, the first time they held hands, the first kiss, the first love making are all chronicled. The ability to exist with just the other person is also very inspiring. The loved person is tired of the author's lies and being in love. All these points make the piece interesting and involving to read.

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Review of Sweet Sorrow  
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice poem called sweet sorrow. The poet expresses his sorrow with things in a very meaningful manner. The memory of pain has been erased. The actions could have been done differently. The past cannot be changed. Only love is left behind. There is a lot of meaning and artistry of words. The small things shared are precious. All the things contribute to the sweet sorrow.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)

This is a nice letter written by the author to herself. It states all the points necessary to get published or improve as a person. The struggling writer shows in the passages. The goals for 2010 are nicely described. There are some spelling mistakes and the text has to be checked for the same. The author confesses to have talent, but lack in self discipline.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is a nice story about trolls. It is imaginative and creative. Oorgmph is a well made character. The story could have been longer to make it remember able. The bells falling off is a climax and catches us by surprise. His launching himself is heroic and will add to his credits as a well done deed. The passersby are amused by his behavior and comment about it. A nice story to read.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice article about an Indian girl. It describes how she is protected by people and how she feels like a rebel. Feminism is also described as humanism. She calls herself a feminist. She starts hating men, but starts understanding them in the end. There are spelling mistakes in the first line. The grammar and English has to be given a check once again. The idea of the story is interesting and makes the reader get to know more.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (3.5)

This is a nice account of the New York Mets adding a reliever. David Robertson is planning to come to the queens. The Mets are in talks with the Chicago White Sox on this. The White Sox members want Mets outfielder Michael Conforto. This is not seen well with the Mets. The account is short but makes interesting reading. The figures in the end of Robertson are also helpful to know more about him.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice poem written in the virelay format. The fire in Baltimore is described well. The explosions blow the roof to schmears. The embers are thrown to nearby buildings. The flames spread quickly. The city hall and the court house too are engulfed in flames. A new flame starts the next day and half. Nobody knew its intent. The firemen are tired and exhausted. The explanation of the fire is done well and must be given honorable mention.

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Review of Last Man Standing  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a good poem titled last man standing. The events described are many and the person is the last man standing. The lines "Take all the cake 'cuz it's what you earned and then take some more on the next person's turn." are inspiring. It tells us to take the cake because you have earned it. In the summer, the poet asks us to relax and to take the time. A nice poem to become the last man standing.

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Review of Quote the Nutter  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

This is a nice story about a bar pickup gone wrong. The person is bound in his apartment. The dialogues are well crafted and keeps the reader attentive. The lady is shown as nasty and temperamental. The way she goes about things is to be appreciated. The author has taken pains to explain every detail. The man is shown to be scared and afraid. The emotions running through him is well captured.

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Review of Temple Child  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice poem about the temple child. There is a lot of emotion attached in the poem. The description of the temple child is done well. The poetry winds its way through things the temple child will have to do as he takes his stage. He is inside his four walled kingdom. He is ordained by god. This makes him special. He has to do what must be done.

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Review of Tiffany's Plight  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice story about Tiffany turning into a lizard. It is very imaginative and holds the reader's attention. The deal with the fairy godmother to be kissed by five men is really very riveting. The way Tiffany gets her kisses makes interesting reading. There are some spelling mistakes that should be corrected to make the text perfect. A review for grammar and spelling would help. The final change back to human form is heart warming.

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Review of Hope  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is an interesting account of keeping hope alive. The light is left on in the closet all night. This is done to watch the crack under the door. The poet lies in quiet darkness. She watches through wet eyelashes. It is like believing god is on the other side. Hope is kept alive by the light that is on in the darkness. Inspiration is also derived to write it into a poem.

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Review of The Weather King  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a good poetry about being the weather king. The taking of the station is important for a weather man. The camera's and lights await him. The job is well done and the poet proclaims himself the weather king. The description of things that go on in the poet's mind is of importance. The mental programming of a weather man has to be perfect to deliver the news. He does the same.

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Review of Mystical  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a good poem titled mystical. The rhyming is held on with no importance to the spelling of the words. This makes the reading interesting. The contemplation of the inevitable is done while remembering the forgettable. The poet gets lyrical and it is very typical of him doing this. He has to keep hold of his mystical with an air of sophistication. The rhyming keeps the poem going.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice poetry wishing merry Christmas to the site. The poetry is written with art and style. The rhyming is also nice. The joys and toys of Christmas are on display. The Christmas tree is a German tradition. This information is shared with the readers. The socks are hanging from the fireplace. The poinsettias are from Mexico. The different details make interesting reading.

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