So colorful, and enchanting. You ARE an enchantress with every piece you write, Megan. I'm not ashamed to tell you that your audience is young, and that you have mastered a difficult style. You are so so consistent! I'll read the rest now . . . takecare. Best Regards.
How exciting, how buouyant. I hung on every word. You could do no better in the expressions of the overs, the twisting tale, or the gory lesson. Best Regards.
I thought your treatment of "painfulness" was very well done. I like the thought that you incorporated 'the dog' theme. It worked very well. To
be a monster, maybe you just have to own one, 'eh? The
words were contagious, and I can only tell you when that happens, everybody wants it. Best to you.
You did this with such a fragile hand, it is very beautiful and succinct. Only thing: leafs should be "leaves" and the word cour should be "color". When you clear little silly things up, you can call it perfection. This poem ran just that well. Best Regards.
A very interesting work as it is in progress. I thought you did a good job of "scary" material which made we want to read it all at once and, yes, the suspense held me to it. I am likely to read more of it if you continue on. Was this the whole Chapter 2? Chapter 1 was a very meaty length and I am wondering if
you kept to that volume you would better your work and give it sizeable chapters. Best Regards.
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Excellent poem, it is somehow one I needn't even try to chastize. I like the entire set of remarks and as you build the poem builds to a pitch where we know where you have been and where you are coming from. LOL. Very good. Best to you.
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Very imaginative in a political sort of way. You have much to say here as an attitude and reason with an unreasonable man. You, too, have tried to turn what is wrong into what is write. I myself feel it is an impossible task. Best Regards.
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A well-deserved winner, the juices really flowed with this poem. One thing: perhaps, you should have a period at the end of the last stanza. Best Regards.
Very well-written story. "Val" is a center piece character with much emotion and colorful pizzazz. Liked it. Saw it in the Newsletter this week. Best Regards.
A very good article for the subject of "grieving". I am the sister of a "quad" and am mourning Christopher Reeve's death. He is the same age as my brother. If it HAD been my brother, I would have "grieved" differently, of course. I liked your article's premise: everyone is different concerning the subject. To this day, I still "grieve" that my brother can't walk or do things like anyone else. It is a special kind of loss, that I somehow must bear alone. Best Regards.
Great psyche to this piece. It tells us such perceptive steps. I heed those too, and I find that you have descriptive steps that I can totally follow. Bold typed helped the steps, yet still even without it the good psychological place in which you stand on these steps shows through anyway. Thanks for sharing this in the Romance/Love Newsletter. Best Regards.
Good advice. I also liked the references to Halloween's history in this. Thanks for sharing this in Princess Megan Rose's Halloween Newsletter. Best
Regards.
This was great. I loved the description and storyline that set it in a certain town around Halloween. True experiences are much better than fiction! You have something here. Enjoyed it. Best Regards.
I think you are trying to say something here. It
is hidden and is inside of you and you can't yet get
it out. Try using some meter and rhyme and getting into the feel of using images more sparcely so you can
feel better about writing a poem. Best Regards.
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A very bright, descriptive short story with a purpose. Moving to cities is often just what Sam says it is, and what Tiffany might dread. Truth to it. I liked the optimum in this story. Best Regards.
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