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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
WOW! THis second part of the Witch's Diary is as well written as the first part and draws the reader deeper into tale. I'm like Melissa and have a zillion questions running through my mind about the creature and such. I shall definately read more of the WItch's Diary.

I didn't see any mishaps with spelling or grammar.

You did a great job and I'm looking forward to read more of this tale.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review of The Bottle of Rum  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a nice poem. It's awe inspiring. I'm jealous. I can't write poetry very well.

Your poem paints a vivid picture of the setting and two souls intertwined as one. I love it when I can see a picture in my mind of the characters and setting, even in something as short as a poem.

Well done.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
BRAVO! THis wee tale brought a tear to my eye. It is wonderfully written and goes straight for the heart. I love the details that describe the land and the chalice. ANd the surprise and shock of the wee girl when she cleans the chalice off and it starts to sing.

Do you plan to write more of this tale? I would like to know what cause the land to go silent. Where the chalice came from and why is it lying in the mud near the river? Was it lost? Stolen then hidden away? There are many possibilities here.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Nice job. Your poem is simple and to the point. I can see your vampire and the lady in love. Your use of rich detail gives the poem a vivid picture in the mind's eye.

The only mishap I spotted was the use of double i in the word passions. Or perhaps you did that on purpose.

This was well written.

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Morning arakun,

WOW! What a great beginning for a novel. You got my attention right away and held it all the way to the end. I can't wait to read more of the WItch's Diary.

I love your references to Children of the King by Stephen King and the old soap opera, Dark Shadows. I use to watch Dark Shadows when I came home from high school. Oops! I Just dated myself.

You have used enough details to paint a vivid picture of the old house and the young witch. All in all your visual details give your tale its flare.

Great job!

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with TGDI Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Evening EvilEgg,

Nice handle. Just took a peek at your article, SteamPunk: A List of Themes. Thanks for writing such an informative piece. I didn't have any idea what SteamPunk was before reading this. It was quite helpful.

You did a great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review of Crack  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
WOW! Your wee tale, Crack paints a very vivid picture. The details make it quite easy to see Magenta and Ben. The end surprised me.

The only suggestion: perhaps you could put a few more spaces between paragraphs. I noticed many of your paragraphs are rather short. Pehaps grouping them by threes or fours.

Otherwise you did a great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review of Over A Cup of Tea  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with TGDI Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I just read your tale, Over A Cup of Tea and it brought a few tears. It is a well written wee tale full of emotion. Your descriptions paint a vivid picture. I can see the steam rising from the cup of tea and can see the kitchen with it's window in need of repair.

I didn't see any mishaps with spelling or grammar.

You did a great job with such a wee tale.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review of Silver Quill  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW! I love your poem the Silver Quill. It's short and straight to the point. It has a nice rhythm to it. It gave me a strange feeling within my heart after I read it.

I didn't see any mishaps with spelling or grammar. You did a great job with this wee poem.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review of Personal Trek Sig  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey Eyestar,

CeruleanSon did a fantastic job with this signature. The Enterprise zooming fron an eye with the iris a bright shining, new star with blue edging. The galaxy of stars that surround the eye and the eystar in bold letters. The whole signature grabs one's attention. I'm jealous.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes.

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey eyestar,

Neat wee poll you have here. I just had to vote for the Wrath of Kahn, since I've always had a thing for Ricardo Montleban since Fantasy Island was on TV.

Once more you have done a great job with an article or poll. Your use of color always adds a brightness to all the text.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Morning eyestar,

THanks for another interesting article or in this case poll to read. Nice Star Trek patch at the beginning. It is well written & easy to follow. THe use of color get each of your points across & liven up the page. To be honest it was hard to choose just one captain. I also favor Benjamin SIsko.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Morning eyestar,

What a cool sig at the beginning of the contest page. You have once again done a fantastic job.

THe colors grab the reader's attention. The blinking arrows of each side of the prompt make it impossible to miss.

Poetry about Star Trek how cool.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
FREEZE!

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WOW! What an article. I never took the time to think about all the different kinds of writers there are. It's kind of scary to realize that there are so many different type of writers out there. Yet as I read thorough your post I realize that I've sort of known all along about all these writers that are listed.

It's a well written article. I didn't spot any mishaps in spelling or grammar.

Thanks for sharing.

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

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Review of Consequences  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Consequences is a nice little tale. It is well written and holds the reader's attention. I like the lesson held within the tale that nothing good happens to those who wish to be dishonest.

I didn't see any mishaps with spelling or grammar.

The only thing I didn't like: there's no spacing between the paragraphs which made it a bit difficult to read. I realize that many of the paragraphs are only one or two lines. A space after every fifth or sixth paragraph would help.

Great job writing this. Thanks for sharing.

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

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Review of Willow  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Top of the Morn,

WOW! Willow is a powerful poem. It made my heart ache at the love and lost of that love. I can see the willow tree standing next to the water by the sea. The poem has a nice pace and flows from one line to the next smoothly. It paints a vivid picture.

I didn't spot any technical errors in spelling or grammar.

Great job!

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review of Valkyrie  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Top of the Morn,

Once again you have written a great story. Your fantasy is as good as your tales of horror. To be honest I prefer fantasy to horror.

I got a great big grin at the mind's eye of Sven, a seven foot giant crinching on the ground. The end of the story brought tears. Great job!

I didn't spot any technical mishaps in spelling or grammar.

The story is easy to read and follow. The details give a reader a vivd picture.

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review of A Guide  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I just read your poepm, A Guide.

WOW! What a powerful piece.

Your words paint quite a vivid picture of the little girl and her cat.

Unless I miss my mark, the poem suggests the little girl is being abused. Am I right? Or am I wrong?

I didn't spot any technical mishaps in spelling or grammar.

Like I already said, what a powerful piece. It hit me in the heart and for some strange reason brought tears to my eyes.

Fantastic job!

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

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Review of Hide & Seek  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I just read Hide & Seek. It is well write. It has a lot to say about society.

I didn't spot any technical mishaps in spelling or grammar.

May I make a suggestion? SInce it's mostly one line paragraphs, it's a bit difficult to read as is. I would suggest that you put a space after every four to five paragraphs to make it easier to read.

You did a great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I just read your poem, egg with bacon and a side of toast. Well done. Your chose of words paint a very vivid picture. Parts of the poem makes me hungry, while others make me what to puke.

It has a nice flow to it which makes it easy to follow.

I didn't see any technical mishaps in spelling or grammar.

Great job!

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.
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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Just read, Andy's Black Magic Healing Spell, very cute.

I realize after reading this spell you wrote it on a lark. But it did make me smile and chuckle in several places. It is well written and quite entertaining.

I didn't spot any technical mishaps in spelling or grammar.

Great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a great sig. Nice and bright. The colored pencils are a nice touch.

How would I go about creating a sig of my own. My daughter drew me a Ladybug but I don't know how to add a signture line to it?

Keep unleashing your imagination and let lt fly where it wishes!
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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I just read, Hidden in Plain Thought- Lilly and found it well written and an enjoyable read. The story moves from point A to point B smoothly leading the reader deeper into the tale. You have a great beginning for a novel or short story.

The only rough spot I saw was: “Please recant your dream again, Ms. Kriell,” Officer Hurtt spoke calmly with a soothing tone.
Doesn't recant mean to take back? I've heard it used on crimes show the suspected recanted his confession.

You did a great job & please write the rest of this tale.

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

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Review of A Frozen Winter  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Just read, A Frozen WInter and found it a nice read. My skills at writing poetry are lacking so my reviews may seems lacking, too.

Your poem does have a nice flow and it's easy to follow and understand.

I didn't spot any technical errors in spelling or grammar.

Great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

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Review by Ladybug
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Thanks for the helpflu tips on making a character come to life. It is well written & I didn't spot any technical errors in spelling or grammar.

Great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes.
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