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Casual, friendly. I'll point out typos when I see them and make suggestions about quality, characters and logic, besides telling you how I feel about the piece.
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Does it make sense? Are the characters well portrayed? What's the overall feel of the piece?
Favorite Genres
Poetry, children's, anything rated E
Least Favorite Genres
Anything higher than 18+
Favorite Item Types
Poems, flash fiction, essays, articles, biographical/personal, etc
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fun and cute. I too grew up with Dr Seuss... My mom wasn't too impressed, but I thought "If I Ran the Zoo" was the coolest thing for a while. I always felt bad for Horton; he's too good hearted *Smile* *HeartT* *Elephant* Your rhyme is enjoyable and easy to read. Thanks for sharing.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice lightly romantic piece. I like how it generalizes until you realize it's speaking about a lifetime together with a loved one. It would make a pretty wedding gift, written out on fancy paper. Thanks for sharing; I'll have to check out your other works *Smile*


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Review of Welcome  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice to meet you! I'll have to check out your works more closely sometime soon. Take care.


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Review of Hysteria  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Cool, an acrostic description of a concert atmosphere. Simple and colorful, with good vocabulary and flow. I'm not sure if stages are usually intrepid, that would be more like the people performing, but we get the idea. Thanks for sharing this with us.


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Review of Nature's Realm  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this. You have a real talent for writing classic and readable poetry. Your descriptive words are picturesque and the scenery flows like a painting. I'll keep an eye out for more of your work. Thanks for sharing your craft with us, it's greatly appreciated.


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Review of The Power of One  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel like we're kindred spirits at this point. This is so much on my level: the arrangement as a song, the theme of embracing solitude and finding oneself, while readying oneself to be a good friend for others. Thank you so much for sharing this well written poem/song with us.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is wonderful! I may write it down and memorize it; I have a poetry collection. I love your meter and rhyme and the use of "we" instead of just "I". The theme reminds us to treasure each moment and use our time wisely. Your choice of words makes it shine. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work *BigSmile*


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good professional journalistic work. You explain what you're discussing and do your best to make it make sense to the layperson. The text progresses logically and cites studies well. There is some repetition between the fourth and fifth paragraphs, but nothing too distracting. Thanks for sharing.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Aw, thank you for sharing this. Your thoughts are golden and well intended, albeit perhaps a bit scattered (you can look up the phrase "stream of consciousness" for an interesting lesson.) I see you used spell check well. I like the little bits of humor and cultural references, and I found it easy enough to read and comprehend. Keep the faith and keep sharing your thoughts, even if others don't always value them.


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Review of Observations  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Spooky, with a romanticism bordering on stalking. Not sure whether I like it or not, but as poetry it’s moody and creative, employing the metaphor of an eager scientist peering at a star. Thanks for sharing.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Sad and simple, painting a gloomy picture of an unhappy drinker and a failed relationship in the rain with a few choice words. Reminds me of the themes of country music, but without the tediousness of a chorus. Thanks for sharing.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Love your smooth flow and elegant vocabulary; this ode makes me feel honored to participate in such a fine community.
My only issue is that this is not a limerick, as defined by Wikipedia (I'd put the link but I don't know how to do it tidily here.) It sacrifices some refinement (and truth) to call your nice poem a limerick. But aside from that I really like what you've composed here.

Thanks for sharing!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
That's really nice. I like the flow and the sentiment. It would make a good baby gift, written out elegantly on some fancy paper. Thanks for sharing!


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Review of Temptation  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Aww, this is amazing! So poetic, creative and perfectly crafted, with a peaceful, happy ending. Thank you so much for writing this, it made my morning *Smile* keep up the good work, I'll look into your portfolio sometime soon.
Blessings,
Amethyst Angel


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Review of Start Again  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Love the brief wording - it’s simple, direct and to the point. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Just A Dusting...  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh my! I could feel the bitter cold as I read this. Brr. But why couldn't the narrator go back inside their house to charge their phone? Where were they that defeat was so "defeating?" Also, specifically mentioning that the starter was silent implies the starter is broken, not that the car battery died from the cold. If it was just the car battery the starter would be clicking. Sorry, but I speak from experience *Laugh*
Also, the meter is a little ragged. When I write poetry I tend to use a very stiff meter, but that's just me. Yours is more conversational *Smile*
Other than that it's a crisp, cold and humorous poem. Thank you for sharing.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
A beautiful prayer. The third line is a sentence fragment; adding the word "so" at the beginning would help: "So that You are pleased with me..." Also, there should be more punctuation to make it easier to read. A semicolon (;) between "pleased with me" and "let me be" would help. And they always say "all caps is SHOUTING." Perhaps you could choose a different font or a pretty color to set the words in so it looks nice, rather than using all caps. Thanks for sharing!
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Review of " I'M Greatful "  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautiful sentiment! The word is spelled "grateful". Your lines are short and simple and I can see the simplicity of your feelings here. The blessings of good health are indeed something to be grateful for. Thank you so much for sharing with us :) take care.
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