Thank you for sharing your wonderful piece--it's unusual and creative, your descriptions are lovely and gracious. You have your own style and write with your own special voice. The driven way your character pursues perfection (or her own version of that) which leads to a heart attack is quirky but something that we can all relate to. Her heart attack is a well orchestrated surprise. I hope you continue writing. Will be fun to see more of your work.
A lovely thought and always so nice to read that someone appreciates his or her partner. Thank you for sharing this. It was obviously written from the heart.
I love your poem. You rhyme well and the poem has a nice
rhythm. It's light and fun too. I hope you keep writing.
I'm new too. This is a wonderful resource, made that much
more interesting and exciting by the ability to read and offer support to other new writers like you, all of us working to grow and improve our writing skills. Having feedback and gaining exposure is so important in this very solo endeavor. Thanks for sharing your work.
I love your poem; it's unique and lovely, expressing hope and optimism. We sure do need that these days ! Thank you for sharing you writing with us. I Hope you'll keep on writing. You have the ability, and like me, you need to keep at it and keep on honing your skill.
Best of luck to you. GabriellaR45
I love this story--keep at it, you're an engaging, adventurous writer. I feel sure you'll do well with this. I hope to see the next chapter. Thanks for sharing it; it was really fun to read; I raced through to see what would happen next and was disappointed when it ended. Keep on writing. Good luck with your next chapter. I know you'll do well ! GabrielleR45
A wonderful and inspiring piece. Thanks so much for sharing it; it's a great gift. Isn't it wonderful to
have someone with strength, convictions, passion
and an immense hunger for learning and conquering
new challenges in your life ! My aunt was that person
in my life. She helped set the stage for what I was
to do with my life. You write beautifully and your
work serves as a great example. GabriellaR45
I'm so touched by this story. It was one of courage and endurance. A year is a long time in a situation like this. My heart goes out to this family. Your story made me wish for more.
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