Very good poem. Great lines. One thing: Is there a word missing between "fatallly" and "toward"? I just picked it up, like as if : "fatally leaning toward dead". However, your fancy is what is best. Perhaps, the break in meaning was on purpose? Yes, Best Regards.
The depth of meaning can't surpass a friendship like this. Repetition in this poem goes well with the author's sense of kinship to knowing how long a friendship can last. Best Of Regards.
Not as good as most of yours, but very clever. I like your treatment of each subject you have ever dealt with, and this one is no exception. With an off- -the-cuff poem such that this is, the "beast" doesn't look as awesome as I would have liked. However, I enjoy your poems. Your talent abounds, and you have again bent light on an interesting thought. Saw this in the Poetry Newsletter. Best Regards.
A kind of abstract poem, this poem holds up to any other good one. I liked this kind of poem, it has good line breakage in its free verse. Very well done. Best Regards.
I relish the meaning in this sort of poem. You have ties to women here and it is subtle. I really liked this one, and as always, you are always a very good poet. Best Regards.
Way to go, Harry! Such a good one. I noted your book at LuLu, I had considered them for a time. Other thing, my girlfriend's cat is named Tiger. I love that name. Well-done. Such stories . . . Best Regards.
A great picture of what this looks like in reality, perhaps. Chivalrous and fragile, the poem lends comfort to the eye and gives us the feeling of serenity, in a sense. "The Briar Rose" is really done well. I enjoyed it. Best Regards.
Such a good poem! The word "rotten" was the only word I was puzzled about, the words flow, the poetry sounds so sweet, it was such a great read. Best egards.
What a rare piece of work. This is so fragile, so classy, it's got a great story-line behind it, and is expectionally poetic. I really liked it. Saw it in the Poetry Newsletter. Best Regards.
Suddenly, after reading Chpt. 1 of Sara's Port, I decided to continue on and see what it was all about. I couldn't let go of my mouse! I read the whole thing in one sitting. It was such a wonderful experience. It almost made me cry at some points. At others, I viewed the whole affair as so romantic, so carefree, and I really got away from my troubles this Sunday by reading it! Best Regards.
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