I have to admit this is a bit different from other things I have read. However, I like it and the insinuations therein. Thanks for sharing Geoff. p.s I was in Alaska with the 75th Rangers back in 71, almost moved there.
I thought this to be very speculative. I like SciFi and this seems like the beginning of a good movie.
Well written and the words flow very well.
I can tell you have a gift of writing and you are an excellent wordsmith.
This sounds like the beginning of an interesting novel.
The writing is smooth, transitions well done, and descriptions abundant.
The only recommendation I would make is to make shorter paragraphs for easier reading.
Well done Jimbo.
I had to read it because I just finished one titled RESURRECTION OF THE DEAD
and the title caught my eye.
Very good writing job for 300 words or less.
Keep up the good writing
Payback is a B..........!
I hope she never gets payback for what she did and learned something from her lesson.
Well done...again.
The writing and transitions are very smooth.
and
"A MOTHER’S PRAYER " .
Poetry is meant to bring forth emotion, at least that is why I try to write it,
this was very emotional and
thank you for it.
Hi Brom21
I read
The Griffin's Search,
Creation's Mystery,
Beyond the Veil
The Myth
and
O to the Reviewers,
and found all of them very well done.
I like this one the best. It has a special flavor.
I tried my first free verse a few days ago, and, I guess it's OK,
But I really enjoy this path of free verse you use.
Thanks
Very informative article Lynda.
I have personally been in half a dozen light houses from Main to the Gulf Coast. I was amazed at some of the things I discovered. For instance, the wick in one of the light houses was enormous, about the size of a large rope. The stairs in another were so steep it was like climbing a shaking ladder. The reflective dome behind the wick in one was about the size of a 12 foot mirror.
The earliest lighthouse? Wouldn't that be the Colossus of Rhodes in theory?
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