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Review of Untitled  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I want to read more of your story. Welcome to WDC. Lots of stuff to see and do here. Be sure to fill out your Bio to let people know who you are and just a little about you.

Keep Writing
Lazy Writer
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I like this and I think it is written well.
Keep Writing
LW
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Review of My granny  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A most beautiful tribute to your Granny!!

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LW
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for entry "Coming Soon." 
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I wish I could still write to my mom, she passed in 2001 and I miss her greatly, we did not get along all that well either. She did the best she could with what she knew at the time and that is how I raise mine, I do the best I can with what I know right now and that is all anyone can do.

Rest and relax and try again with your mom.

Keep Writing
LW
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Review of Uranium Eyes  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like it and did not find any thing wrong, I hope you keep writing.
LW
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556
Review of The Rat Woman  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Was not what I was expecting, but I enjoyed it, I think, anyway. I thought the writing was good and the story flowed.
Keep Writing
LW
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Review of God's Telephone  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a really good story and I enjoyed it very much. I did not see any problems.
Keep Writing
LW
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so true, would loved to have heard this sermon.
Keep Writing and believing
LW
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Review of On Angel's Wings  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very touching and moving!
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LW
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560
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this poem, I cannot critique form or style, only tell you what I like, and as a reader I really like this poem.
Keep Writing
LW
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Review of My Friend  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't review a lot of poetry because quiet honestly I don't understand a lot of it. This poem I understand and really liked - I cannot review how it was written etc. but to tell you that I thought it was good, I understood it, and it made me smile.

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LW
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Review of Santa's Gift  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love stories of Christmas and of kids and believing in Santa - this story was perfect!
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LW
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Review of Reload  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't know enough about poetry to critique it - I liked this poem it made me smile - and also remember that I am not really a morning person.

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LW
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Review of Roots And Wings  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I think this is a very informative piece and I found it interesting. I think it is written well and did not see any errors. Although I have different beliefs I commend you for speaking out about yours. If more people practiced what they say they believe the world would be a better place.

Keep Writing
LW
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Review of What If  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like the way you are writing this story in journal form. Your character sounds very believable to me. Keep Writing
LW
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I think you wrote this very well and there are some days we should never forget September 11 being one of them.

Keep Writing
LW
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Review of One Day at a Time  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem - reminds me how to gain on a couple of mountains I have.

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LW
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Review of A Mother's Love  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
We always miss and love our kids no matter what they do or how they treat us.

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LW
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed reading this piece, I am a grandma and I am raising my granddaughter, I hope she will remember me as well as you remember yours. I am sure she watched over you and is still watching and looking after you. Keep Writing.
LW
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Review of Evening escape  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this poem.
Keep writing
LW
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571
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the poem - I could see the little girl standing alone on the shore - I think this might make a good short story.

Keep Writing
Lazy Writer
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Review of Without a Sound  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think you are a very talented writer. I could see it as I read it. I hope you keep learning and writing.

Lazy Writer
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Review of Voices  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Livv,

I enjoyed this poem - I think this how most writers must feel at times.

Keep writing and learning.

Lazy Writer
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