I am not a poet, so I don't really know how to review poetry except to tell you that I liked it. I thought it flowed well and was easy to read and understand and it made me laugh.
I like this short story. I think you wrote it well. It looks like you followed the headlines a little. I really like the ending. Put a smile on my face first time today.
I liked this, Is this part of a longer write? I think it would make a great short story or longer. The only thing I saw was in 2nd paragraph is 'been' supposed to be 'be'?
I really like this poem, it flowed and was easy to understand, the story is great. I've read some poems on here, that I just don't get, so I was really happy to read this one. I don't write poetry (or very little) so it is hard for me to critique other than to say I thought it very good.
I liked this poem, it is about life how it really is, you are a strong person, don't let anyone label you. I read this as it being about you, if not you wrote it well.
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