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Review of Coming Out  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 07-23-15
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You have a lot to say about choices and the results that can bind us or set us free. Making the right choices is always important. Your piece is well formed and organized.
Flow is smooth most of the way. Toward the end (your final paragraph) there are some words that are not together; "t hat cliff. . ."
This may seem like a minor detail but in the whole scheme of things it does slow the pace down, because the reader has to stop and try to figure out what he/she just read.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of She Remembers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 07-23-15
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Yes the earth does remember.
Thank you for pouring your soul into this piece.
Your form and structure are foundational.
The flow is smooth.
The earth comes alive with your imagery.
The pace is slow and detail filled.
You have a grammatically clean piece too which is always a plus.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 07-15-15
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First impression: Oh man this is long.
Second impression: Wait this is interesting.
Final impression: Wow, how impressive was this massive undertaking.

Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is smooth from subject to subject.
There was even the hint of emotional tags so the reader could continue on.
Pace is slow but in no way boring.
Grammatically speaking; it's a miracle nary a jot nor tittle has gone awry.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Blank  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Anna:
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Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 07-15-15
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Ah writers block strikes again.
You did however prevail anew.
You created a poem about a blank,
One you could possibly take to the bank.

Form and structure are there.
Flow is quite fair.
Pace is a walk in space.
Grammatically your piece is an ace.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of O Mohonk  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 07-15-15
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Breathless indeed.
You were intoxicated by the many scenes.
Through it all you did lead.
The reader is awed and beguiled by the scenery.
Form is immaculate.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and detail filled.
Grammatically nary a jot-not-tittle is awry.

Write on!

Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Moxie's Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 07-15-15
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An award winning poem here.
All of this from a picture prompt?
You bring it to life; like a movie in a theater.
Form and structure is in the A-! slot.
Flow is so smooth and tense, funny, and so many more emotions.
Pace is slow and detail filled.
Grammatically it's miraculous that you are snafu free.
Proud of your efforts here, from one author to another.

Write on!

Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of The Visitor  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ah the crank call sending fear down the spine.
Reminds me of the "Scream" series of movies.
The emotion is real here and the fear can be felt.
That's great imagery in such a short piece.
Form is cool.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is not a race.
Grammatically your piece is a wowsa!

Write on and Happy Anniversary!
Copenator out!
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Cancer is a monster that truly does not care.
However the important thing to remember is that the loved ones do.
I liked the melding of voices in two different cases.
The emotion is honest and impacts the readers heart.
Rhyming is a blessing to the piece.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by the pristine grammatical format you have going on here.
Pace is slow and sensory filled. The reader is wrapped up in the poem and expresses his prayers for your health and hope that you are not alone in your battle against this. Your friends on the WdC are praying for you day-by-day.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 07-15-15
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Sobering look at forgiveness and the lack thereof in much of the world today.
You start with your family first and then expand out into the neighborhood, the city, the country and the world. It's remarkable how well you do this.
In a form that is firmly structured.
Flowing smoothly and grammatically snafu free.
At a pace that is not too fast or too slow. You got it just right.
Your word choice is efficient an the points you make are poignant.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Why in the World?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Joto:
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 07-15-15
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An amazing experience you did have in a brief span of time.
The Creator made His presence known.
You got the message, and the reader did too.
All in a form that is solidified.
Flowing with the greatest of ease.
At a pace that is slow and sensory filled.
The cantaloupe looks and tastes exquisite.
Grammatically speaking your piece is quite pristine.
Nary a suggestion for improvement can be made here.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of RAINBOW  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 07-15-15
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Speechless.
Your piece makes a solid point.
So few lines; so much message.
Wowsa!
Form is consistent.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and sensory filled,
Grammatically your piece is an ace.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Mudd's Spud  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 07-08-15
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Only a true trekie would get the Mudd.
I liked the twist on the spud.
You nailed the form as this put a smile on my face.
Rhyming is fluid, as natural as drinking a glass of water.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by grammatically clean lines.
Pace is rapid and detail filled. The punchline is priceless, and I bet Mudd had a good chance of winning.

Write on!

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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 07-08-15
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Wow what a doozy.
It's full of newsies.
Form is top drawer.
Rhyming is just fine.
Flow is smooth line=by=line.
Pace is slow and humorous to the nth degree.
Grammatically speaking, nary a problem, did I see.
Write on!

Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the spiritual Newsletter 07-08-15
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A well developed story and one worthy of recognition.
I liked the mixture of emotions, the occasional note of explanation of the terms you used.
The form and structure are tight and worthy of formation.
Flow is smooth and amazingly grammatically snafu free. Another reason the flow is so smooth.
The pace is not too slow, nor too fast. It's just right and the reader has no trouble following your tale to its conclusion.
Well done!

Write on!

Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the spiritual Newsletter 07-08-15
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An inspiring look at the sun that still shines above the clouds. There is a lot of emotional tags the reader can identify with and the form and structure you use makes for an easy read.
Flow is smooth and this is enhanced by the absence of any grammatical snafu's.
Pace is slow as the reader gets caught up in the clouds on a flight through the sky. Liked how you spun the piece to show the Lord in His love and grace for us even when we can't see past the clouds haging overhead.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 07-01-15
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Congratulations on your winning piece.
Firmly established in form and structure.
consistent rhyming scheme enhances the flow.
Flowing is smooth and enhanced by a clean slate grammatically speaking.
Pace is slow and marches inexorably to the ending lines.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of The Sirens.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 07-01-15
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Write on!

Sirens are meant to be warning signs after all.
It would make sense, under their spells not to fall.
The creatures of the sea,
Have but one plea.
In your piece you showed their intent.
It's your life they want to end.
You did it in a firm format.
The rhyming is consistent and musical in nature.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by a grammatically clean piece.
Pace is steady on, until at last the chord is struck. Fear the Sirens song!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of I am Sam  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 07-01-15
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Write on!

Creepy is the word.
Great rhyming that lends a cadence to this piece.
I like the centered format, but wonder if it would look crisper left justified. Have you tried it like that?
There is an emotional coldness to this. The character is de-sensitized over the year.
Flow is quite smooth.
Pace is slow and deliberate.
Grammatically snafu free, you deserve a ninety-three.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 07-01-15
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I marvel at the amount of people who say "perfect" and strive for perfectionism. The adage "no one is perfect", appears nonsense to them.
We can strive to do our best and when we do that consistently we will be content with the things we do and achieve.
Hey this all from the imagery of your piece.
Form and structure are "perfect"; lol
The flow is smooth and easy on the eyes.
Pace is slow and steady on.
Grammatically speaking your piece is "perfectly fine".
Overall you presented your argument against perfectionism and put in it's place offered an alternative that is attainable.

Write on!
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Review of Mathematics  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 07-01-15
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Thank you for sharing your piece with us.
You have a consistent rhyming scheme that helps the piece flow in such a smooth way.
The flow is also enhanced by the absence of any visible grammatical snafu's.
The pace is progressive, as you draw the reader into the final lines.

Write on!
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Review of In My Attic  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 07-01-15
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Your piece flows well.
There absence of grammatical snafu's helps in this flow.
Prosaic and yet poetry in motion,
The reader hears, feels and understands the emotions within.
The pace is not too slow, not too fast, why it's just right.
The canyon within your mind is ready to be explored now.

Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
To the Patriot, I did write.
To the Patriot on the bridge I gave the original manuscript,
The Patriot you did see, to him and us you gave a poem for the ages.
Stormy Lady saw the value of your piece in the latest Poetry NL.
Thx for sharing in the WdC.
Of course your page leaps to life with your imagery.

Write on!
Copenator out!


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Review of Walter Engrid  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 063-25-15
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Thank you for sharing on the WdC and welcome!
Your character study is well rounded.
The reader knows this person is "very confident" and not afraid of the possibility of road rage as he navigates the highways and byways.

Form and structure are firmly in place.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by the clear sailing grammatically.
Pace is slow and detail filled. The reader gets to know this Walter and kinda likes the ole fella.

One question comes to mind. How did you choose the name of your character?

Write on!
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Review of Wait  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ayrie:

Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 063-25-15
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Two of your items are in here. Congrats!

As I read this one I notice something.
Some of your lines feel a little too long.
Line 6, for example can be shortened to make your piece a little more symmetrical.
There are emotional tags that the reader can identify with.
Your progression from one item to the next is good and enhances the smooth flow of this.
Form and structure re adequate; save for the aforementioned line 6.
Flow is only slightly rough due to the long line.
Pace is slow and detail filled.
You get your message out and that's always what the author wants to do.
Well done!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Soulmate  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ayrie:

Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 063-25-15
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Just a word about the rating you placed "13+". Upon reading this it is more suitable as "E", for everyone.
There is nothing in your piece that would be inappropriate.
Emotion is present in a natural way.
Form and structure are awesome.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is not too fast, just right to be sure.
Grammatically you have no visible spelling errors, which lends to the smooth flow you have here.
Thanks for sharing in the WdC and welcome!



Write on!
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