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A husband and father creates a shrink ray, someone gets their hands on it. PLEASE ADD!!!!
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Chapter #9

Eat you

    by: Marcinballa Author IconMail Icon
Derek lifted Li's tiny body up to his face and licked his lips. He felt himself growing more and more excited at the possibility of eating a tiny person, particularly this beautiful, shrunken woman. "Mmmmm," Derek started to say. "I think I wanna eat you."

Li looked shocked. "Wait what?!" she screamed in horror.

Derek just smiled. "You heard me." With that, Derek extended his tongue and began to lick Li's tiny body. He enjoyed hearing her scream and fight for her life.

Down beneath his dresser, Debbie began touching herself. She could see as Derek had put Li in her mouth and began sucking on her. This was driving her crazy.

Derek continued to suck on Li and played with her with his tongue. Then out of nowhere, he swallowed. He could feel Li screaming, struggling down his throat. "Ahhhh," he said, and sunk into his bed.

Debbie could not believe what she had just seen. Her son had just swallowed and eaten another person, and for some reason she felt proud.

Up on the bed, she heard Derek say, "I'll have to thank mom for the little snack." This caused Debbie to smile and even blush. "Maybe I'll need her to get me a few more."

Debbie liked the idea. She liked the idea so much she began to leave the room at her shrunken size. She really wanted to get her son more shrunken people to rule over. However, she then turned around as she saw Derek getting off the bed.

"Oh shit," Debbie said to herself, thinking she was caught. Did Derek see his inch tall mom?

You have the following choices:

1. Yes, he recognized her

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2. Yes, but he didn't recognize her

3. No, Debbie goes to shrink more people for him

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