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Two very different people learn valuable lessons from a new perspective on life.
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Chapter #5

Aaron hears the commotion

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James was speechless and dazed from what had just occurred. The loss of his manhood would shock anyone. However, he didn't get a lot of time to think about it, because the silence was suddenly broken by a knock on his door.

“Hey James! Are you alright in there?” Aaron asks from outside the room, likely having heard the commotion.

Now under normal circumstances, James would probably have just said everything was fine and Aaron would have just gone back to his room. But given the shock of losing a man’s most important appendage, still in shock, James slowly staggered to the door. He then opens the door with a pale expression on his face and simply said, “It’s gone…”

In response, Aaron looked at him like he was crazy. James didn’t really look like he wanted to talk about it but to break the silence Aaron responded.

“Wait, what’s gone?” he asked with a concerned look on his face for once.

“My.... ah…” James stuttered, having trouble finding the words. Though, he did gesture between his legs.

Aaron was confused since, for starters James did not look like he was joking and even if he did this wasn’t his kind of joke.

“Wait. Are you saying you don’t have any balls?” Aaron asked. James reluctantly nodded his head in agreement; somewhat embarrassed by the way Aaron phrased it.
Aaron then busted out laughing, “Wow nice man! I needed a good laugh” said Aaron, thinking it was all a joke.

As Aaron turned around to go back to his room, still laughing to himself, James finally snapped out of his shock in reaction to Aaron’s stupid insensitive response to this very serious situation.

"Get over here!" said James, a little more forceful than he usually talked.

He walked up to Aaron, turning him back around, and lowering his pajama pants to show him what was wrong. This act, for obvious reasons, embarrassed James even more, but he hoped that Aaron would eventually get serious about this.

“HOLY SHIT! What the hell is that?!” exclaimed Aaron, jumping back in shock.

“What does it look like?!” James asked rhetorically, pulling his pants back up before his face could become any more red.

“And that’s a recent thing, right?” Aaron asked in his classic immature response to a serious situation.

James rolled his eyes in exasperation. “Aaron! This is not the time for jokes!” James almost shouted. For once, he needed Aaron to be serious.

“Hey I’m sorry. It's just stuff like this doesn’t happen.” said Aaron.

“I know! However, as you can see, I’m missing something pretty important, and I have something I definitely shouldn’t have!” said James in an almost louder voice.

Suddenly, Aaron noticed something else that was different about James.

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