This choice: It's a special seal that collars the "victim" and hurts them when they disobey • Go Back...Chapter #5It's a special seal that collars the "v... by: NVR   "You know that the mind controls the body right? Basically it creates a chakra link to your mind and if it works as I expect, I should be able to push it to help your body do things" Ino explained "I really want to test this because unlike my mind body switch jutsu I can remain conscious"
"I see, so is it like Shikamaru's jutsu" Naruto wondered, now more interested than nervous about it. It was a cool discussion and he certainly could see the advantages of helping Ino develop a jutsu that would turn her into a more formidable ninja and who knows, maybe she would give him a nice reward for his help
"Not exactly, I can move my body at will too" Ino smiled with pride at Naruto's reaction, she did develop quite a powerful jutsu indeed!
"Alright Ino I will help you!" Naruto shouted excitedly, convinced that if Ino perfected her jutsu the village could count with another very powerful ninja on their ranks. "As a future Hokage, it's my duty to help pur ninjas get even stronger if I can and your jutsu sounds amazing" he smirked
Ino smirked too, if it worked like she intended his path as a future Hokage was over if she so wished
"Alright Naruto just stay there" Ino said and focused on doing the signs as Naruto watched. He suddenly felt a release of chakra coming from ino and going straight at him but after that he didn't felt much. It was like the chakra Ino released went straight at him
"It's done, how do you feel?" Ino asked with genuine curiosity
"I don't feel anything weird" Naruto said, moving her arms, legs and body a bit as he did a small round of calisthenics just to be sure he was still in control of his body "Seems it didn't work?"
However, Ino was smiling
"Well, we can only test it then. Let's start with something easy, do some jumping jacks Naruto" she said without doing any special movement or concentrating
Naruto just stood there wondering if his body would obey the instruction when suddenly he felt an intense headache, like a migraine coming out of absolutely nowhere. He grabbed his head with her hands as Ino's smile just grew
"Is this you? Make it stop Ino this is awful!" he shouted feeling the pain just getting stronger and stronger
"You know what to do Naruto" Ino said matter of factly. It was cool that he offered to be her test subject but that's how the jutsu worked, it would give you pain if you didn't obey..Or should it give something else? she mused as she hoped Naruto just did as he was instructed already
Naruto understood and started doing some jumping jacks, he noticed amazed how after doing the first two his head no longer hurt! He stopped for a moment to praise Ino
"Wow, it actually worked, but it's more like a torture jutsu not really a control one, AHHHH" he felt the pain again after he stopped from a few seconds
"Thanks Naruto, oh wait haha, you can stop" Ino said as Naruto felt his head going back to normal
"It seems it worked, but how long does this last?" Naruto asked scared "I can't become a Hokage if I get a headache everytime you say something believe it! It's too awful"
"It doesn't last that long, in that sense I guess it's like Shikamaru's.. Sorry Naruto but to prove it can actually control people I need to give you an order I know you don't want.. Kneel before me and kiss my feet" Ino said with a smirk watching Naruto's shocked face. It's the first thing that came up to her mind, but she has always been a bossy girl and in her fantasies people respected her enough to treat her like a queen or a Goddess.
"What?? Ouch" Naruto once again felt the pain in his head and although he knew what to do, he took a good half a minute figuring out how to try and resist the thing.. It was useless though, physical attacks couldn't do anything and trying a release didn't work because this was no genjutsu, plus with his mind busy producing him pain he couldn't concentrate on much else to figure out what to do. With a resigned face he slowly walked towards Ino acknowledging in matters of the mind he was completely outmatched, and carried out her order kissing her right foot once
"Alright, are you happy? Ouch" Naruto tried to make her stop but she just looked to a side as if she was distracted by something and didn't pay him any attention. He had to kiss her foot again, and again, and again
"Come on Ino!"
"This is not funny!"
"Pleeasee!"
"I'll invite you to ramen make it stop"
Ino laughed at that one and finally ordered him to stop as Naruto stood up and backed away from her.
"Alright Naruto, I will take that offer then" she laughed as she made some signs to release her jutsu. This time however Naruto felt no chakra release, no nothing.
"Wait I felt absolutely nothing, did you actually finish it" Naruto said, fearing she still had that kind of control over him
"Sure! look, Naruto go back to kiss my feet" she said and as Naruto waited, nothing happened. He smiled and gave her a thumbs up
"It seems gone now! congrats Ino that's a powerful jutsu! You definitely deserve the ramen believe it!" Naruto trusted his fellow ninja enough to forget about the pain she just gave him, this was just a test run after all. He visualized Ino just forcing rivals to give up in the battlefield the moment she connected her powerful jutsu
Ino thanked Naruto and as they went their separate ways she was actually smiling, it worked out perfectly! She could now make Naruto do whatever she wanted.. or anyone else. She relived the moment of having the ninja that saved the village kneeling down to her kissing her feet and smiled, knowing the "release" was a dummy move and Naruto still actually needed to obey her. She also lied when she mentioned it was a chakra link to push the body, it was pretty much a mental shock collar. "A bit medieval indeed, but hard to deny it was effective" she mused.
She wondered if she should keep testing Naruto, but knew with such an intense pain linked to it he would recognize it was her instantly. Well, she didn't really need to give him the order directly, she just could activate the switch to punish bad behavior. She wondered if she should modify the switch to reward good behavior, or cause a different kind of pain? As she walked to the flower shop she wondered about the possibilities, picturing a trained Naruto willingly submitting to her after some good old fashioned behavior training, picturing her rival Sakura openly admitting she was superior and her crush Sasuke becoming the perfect husband for her. She had a big smile on her face, anything was possible, she just needed to play her cards right
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